WarDog500 Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 This is the first card I have made. If a lot of people like it I was thinking of making a Heaven and Hell Set. I got the picture from here Link: http://forums.sky.fm/showthread.php?t=55437&page=5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 I'm need 2 more trap cards to finish my Hell's Prensence set. 9.5/10 not a bad card at all for your first usually they'll have a overpowered card like let's say Goku from dragon ball Z he'll have like ATK INF and DEF INF come on man but nice card kid! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Thanks and if you need me to help you I could give you some ideas on Trap cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidersthatbite Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 A couple of OCG errors, but overall not bad, especially compared to my first card. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Ok thank you for telling me and could you also tell me the errors so I can fix them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidersthatbite Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Well, first of all, the LIGHT in LIGHT attribute would be all caps. Secondly, use the letters ATK and DEF for attack and defense. Finally, instead of "ATK and DEF is increased by..." You would say "Increase the ATK of all face-up LIGHT attribute monsters on the field by 500 and their DEF by 300." Just a few nit-picky things, but overall, it is a good card. The pic is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 i think its overpoered, as the card that alrady gives this effect also take 400 DEF, so this seems a bit powerful and a bit of a copy 6.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilight Star Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 "As long as this card is on the field increase all LIGHT monster's ATK by 500 and DEF by 300." That is the correct OCG, I believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Twilight Star: Ok thanks I will have to fix it. spidersthatbite: Also thanks I will have to fix that to. yujioooh: I under stand how you feel but I do not see how it is overpowered and I looked before making it and could not find another one like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokoyonokuni Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 NOICE card dude but the pic could be a little more towards the name (no offense) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I had a better one but I could not use it because I forgot were I got and because of that I could not give credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 good card, if u put it in a set it will have better sound than alone, 9.5/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarDog500 Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Ok and thanks! P.S. I am working on a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokoyonokuni Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 to bad u couldnt give credit cause of that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Underpowered to the max. It needs an additional effect, for no-one would run a card like this that only boost ATK and DEF, especially since it's only by such a low amount. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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