Save me from OCG!

[Holy Babylon]

I am honestly THE worst person when it comes down to OCG on YCM. I need help with just a couple of cards, I promise you will get something in return if you help me just this once. Please, here are my horribly-written effects:

 

[spoiler=My Horrible Effects]

 

When this card's flip effect is activated you may take control of one of your opponent's side and bring it to your side of the field. This card can be flipped face down at the end of your battle phase.

 

 

 

Please help me, and in some way, I will help you! ...anyone? Please, this is my biggest weakness on YCM, and I need serious HELP!

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This is against the rules, but I will PAY you 30 points to solve my horrible OCG. Please, I want to win a contest for once.

[Atomix]

When this card is Advanced Summoned, roll a six-sided die. This card gains DEF equal to the result of the die roll x 200.

 

When this card is equipped to a monster on your side of the field, switch the ATK and DEF of a monster on your opponent's side of the field with an equip card.

 

Release 3 Monster cards on your field. Search your deck for up to 3 cards with 6 or more stars and Special Summon them.

 

When this card's Flip effect is activated you may take control of 1 Monster card on your opponent's side of the field. This card can be flipped face-down at the end of your Battle Phase.

 

I did my best for you ^_^

[Holy Babylon]

Thank you, you don't know how much this has helped me.

[Flinsbon]

If you want OCG help, then Tetraslash is the guy you want. He'll fix your OCG for 10 points or less, I think.

 

I think I can help you here.

 

When this card's flip effect is activated you may take control of one of your opponent's side and bring it to your side of the field. This card can be flipped face down at the end of your battle phase.

 

FLIP: Take control of 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, at the end of your Battle Phase, you can flip this card into face-down Defense Position.

[Jovi Siagian]

[spoiler=Everybody has answered your request, so I guess I'll tell you my a tip to get a good OCG.] FIND REAL CARD(S) THAT HAS SIMILAR EFFECT(S), THEN COPY-PASTE IT

Don't copy the whole effect. Just the part that has similarity with your card's effect. Yu-Gi-Oh! Wikia is a good source for that.

 

[Holy Babylon]

Wow... I don't really like to copy and paste from real cards.

[Jovi Siagian]

Well, that's one of the best ways, and the only one I can find.

[iKiller]

Other than reading the Official OCG / Grammar Thread in Realistic Cards. Have a look at that, if you're unsure about something, CTRL+F will be your friend.

[Kocrow17]

Question answered,

 

LOCKED.