HellBorn

[kingdom01]

hi, check out my monster and tell me what u think about it ? and give me some advices about how to improve it please and thx

here is the monster effects:

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned exept by removing from play five monsters, five trap cards and five spell cards from your graveyard. Once this card is special summoned that way, destroy all of the cards in your opponent's field. This card cannot attack at the turn it was special summoned. By removing 1 card from ur deck, u can destroy 1 monster and 1 trap or spell card in the opposite side. You can use these effect once each three turns. This card can attack all of your opponent's monsters once each turn. This card is not affected by spell, trap and monster effects. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. This card gains 300 attack and defense points for each card removed from play.

 

lol, i think if KONAMI produce this card, it will be surely a forbidden card

hey, i know the description isn't clear and it cannot be read, but i don't know how to make it better, if u know how please advise me, and i made this card to be a forbidden card, any way, for now can u just juge about the effects and the monster's picture till i know how to upgrade the description ?thx

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[AsterikcAde]

AHH! It's too powerful! I would want this card in my collection! Nice! 9/10

[kingdom01]

thx very much

i'm making a set of cards for now, it's called the Fortress Heroes, i hope u'll like it

i'll add u to my buddy list and i'll email u the set when it's finished to give me ur opinion, and please if u have any advices about how to upgrade the description so it will be clear, tell me about it, and please if u know some players who designes cards pictures, tell me about them too, and thx