ChronosCrowler Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 ------------------------------- Release Dates: Chapter 1 - November 2, 2008 Chapter 2 - November 23, 2008 Chapter 3 - Undefined Chapter 3 "FANFIC VERSION" - April 29, 2009 ------------------------------- Youtube Update ------------------------------- [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNoaXinopjo]Yugioh NS Unofficial Opening[/url] - Released on Sept. 14, 2008 Character Intro - Coming Soon [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8fTAGyfmkpU]Yu-Gi-Oh! NS Official Opening[/url] - Released on November 4, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Qr3LoEqKeI]Colin Optima's Duel Theme "Lost Belief"[/url] - Released on November 5, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ss7xfj6mJ8E]Altair Isaru's Duel Theme "Innocent Warrior"[/url] - Released on November 5, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cM6bZLy75-4]Shane McCarson's Duel Theme "Benevolent Savior"[/url] - Released on November 6, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oyWK2Zu7Xkk]Baylith Katarn's Duel Theme "Unified Wisdom"[/url] - Released on November 8, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SX2x1XcEmPI] ???n's Duel Theme "The Enigma"[/url] - Released on November 8, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHB42Izhlho]Kana Abiak's Duel Theme "Forsaken Truth"[/url] - Released on November 9, 2008 [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Uvpdmmpu1U]YU - GI - OH! NS - RAW OPENING[/url] - Released on June 3, 2009 [color=#FF0000][size=medium][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WElWoJ4_I_Q]YU - GI - OH! NS - TEGAKI VIDEO[/url] - Released on June 23, 2009[/size][/color] ------------------------------- [color=#FF0000][size=large][font=Impact]Sprite Anime Update[/font][/size][/color] ------------------------------- [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5CMRIBNZDo] [color=#1E90FF][size=medium][font=Tahoma]Yu-Gi-Oh NS! (Neo Start - Up!)[/font][/size][/color] - [color=#32CD32]Episode 1 - Released on Dec 31, 2009[/color][/url] [align=center][size=large][color=#FF0000]Yu-Gi-Oh! NS (Neo Start - UP)[/color][/size][/align] CHAPTER 1 - The Arrival by ChronosCrowler Imagery and Coloring Supported by: JMB Productions VAGA Imaging ----------------------- PROLOGUE ----------------------- History: Yu-Gi-Oh! tells the tale of Yugi Mutou, a shorter-than-normal high school student who was given an ancient Egyptian artifact known as the Millennium Puzzle in pieces by his grandfather. Upon completing the Puzzle, he is possessed by another personality which is later discovered to be the spirit of a 3,000-year-old spirit (5,000-year-old in the English anime) who forgot everything from his time. As the story goes on, the two of them, together with Yugi's friends, try to find the secret of the Pharaoh's lost memories and his name by way of the card game Duel Monsters (Magic & Wizards in the original Japanese manga and Yu-Gi-Oh! R), which is mirrored in the Shadow Games (Yami no Game in Japanese). Yu-Gi-Oh! GX follows the story of Jaden Yuki (Judai Yuki in the Japanese version), a young talented duelist who is given the card "Winged Kuriboh" by Yugi before Jaden's admission to Duel Academy (Duel Academia in the Japanese version), an elitist boarding school established by Seto Kaiba. Jaden, receiving low marks in his admission tests, is placed in the Slifer Red dormitory (Osiris Red) reserved for students with the lowest grades. The story goes on as Jaden faces challenges from different students in Duel Academy, and later finds himself entangled in a conflict related to the hidden secrets of the academy. Yu-Gi-Oh! NS was created by ChronosCrowler Of Yugiohcardmaker.net a fanmade website dedicated to Yu-Gi-Oh! Fanatics. Inspired by the fanfic Yu-Gi-Oh! GX: Battles at Duel Academy by john20412, ChronosCrowler decided to make a fanfic of his own which turned out to be a manga. The Story revolves around 6 years after the graduation of Jaden and the Gang from Duel Academy. Here Pegasus has designed a new system of dueling where he can use the power of cards by linking it to the human motion, but it needs support from another system for it to work. 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"Friend or Fiend"[/b][/color] [color=#32CD32]DUEL ACADEMY GROUNDS - Central Park(Morning)[/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Here we have the 2nd card shop. Though I usually buy at Dorothy's, this card shop sells rare spellcaster type cards so I sometimes come here, if I get a call from Luis, my friend and this shop's owner. [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Wow! I never knew theres another card shop in the island besides Dorothy's. I'll come here another time after you finish showing me around ^_^ [u][i][b]"A boy talking to himself on a tree, while spying on Baylith and Lance"[/b][/i][/u] [i][b]???[/b][/i] - Heh... Enjoying the day I see. I use to enjoy those kind of things before like hanging out with friends, but not after that day... [color=#FF6347][b][FLASH BACK][/b][/color] A House near the river side of the city [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Fire[/i][/color] [b][i]Boy???[/i][/b] - MOM!!!!!!!, huff, huff, where are you!, huff, huff, DAMN! this smoke! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Crash[/i][/color] [i][b]WOMAN???[/b][/i] - Ugh... [i][b]BOY???[/b][/i] - "!", Wait! Mom! I'll SAVE YOU!!! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Ceiling braking[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Squeekk...Moving a Cabinet[/i][/color] [i][b]Boy???[/b][/i] - Just a little more hang in there mom...huff, huff. [color=#FF4500][i]"Chandelier Braking lose from the Ceiling, falling towards the Boy"[/i][/color] [b][i]Boy???[/i][/b] - "!" [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Crash[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i][Someone from the shadows rushes in and slashes the Chandelier to pieces][/i][/color] [i][b]Man???[/b][/i] - Are you alright kid?! [i][b]Boy???[/b][/i] - Yes! Thank you! but my mom she's injured right there, please help us! [color=#1E90FF][i][The Man Checks up on the boy's mother][/i][/color] [i][b]Man???[/b][/i] - I am sorry, but she's already DEAD... [i][b]Boy???[/b][/i] - No!!! [color=#1E90FF][i]{Starts to cry}[/i][/color] your lying! your lying! she can't be dead, she promised! will be together forever!!! Your! lying!!! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ starts hammering a way with his hands towards the man }[/i][/color] "Sob", No...Liar! sniff... sob... waaa!!!! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Gets tired and incapacitated because of the smoke, heat and by crying too much } [/i][/color] [b][i]Man???[/i][/b] - poor kid... I guess his mother was his only family left, well I can't just leave and let him die here like her mother, I better take him with me and threat him as my own, but first I must save his mother's body as a sign of respect and make it a grave... [color=#1E90FF][i]{Takes the boy outside, and then buries the woman's body near the house with his sword, The Man then walks away carrying the boy on his back, bringing the boy to his house}[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i][FLASH BACK ENDS][/i][/color] [i][b]???[/b][/i] - they're moving, better keep on track [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Now, let's go to the waterfall [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Uh...Can we go get some lunch first? hehee cause Im getting hungry ^_^ [color=#1E90FF][i]{The Boy continues to talk to himself}[/i][/color] [i][b]???[/b][/i] - Hmm...I soon awoken in a Japanese style house, and the Man who named himself to me as a Traveling swordmaster, told me what happen to my mom and our house, and he took me in as a apprentice and as a son... Day and Night I tried my best training, to impress him and forget about that sad day. And yes he was proud of me and taught me a lot of things. It was then 3 Years after the incident, and I grew to a teenager, and my Master was already old, I think I was about 14 back then. He called out to me in his room in the middle of the day, and there I found him laying down on his bed, growing weak, and looks like in the verge of passing away, I was again crying when I approached him, I was in deep pain, similar to the pain that I felt on that day, but my Master smiled, held my hand and said; "Do not Cry, I never thought you that, even your mother would laugh if she sees his young man crying at that age, just remember this even though were away, we are still with you by heart and will continue watching over you, till the day that we are to meet each other again, but now let me rest, for I am so tired, but do not worry take this paper and read it, your experience will lead you to the place where my old Friend Sheppard resides, he will take care of you like what i did to you. [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Smiles and slowly lets go the boy's hand }[/i][/color] ". After that I ventured out to the place where my Master instructed me, and yes he did took me in like his son, but the scar in my emotions will never heal, so now I live in hatred and despair though I look ok to others. I then became a student at that man's school, which is Duel Academy and here I am now... Despising every boy who haves fun... [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Walking Towards The Waterfall Area }[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Uhmm Baylith I still can't see it :p [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Its right ove...huh? ( It felt like someone's watching us, and did those bushes move? ) [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Moving bushes[/i][/color] [b][i]???[/i][/b] - I can do this!!! time to put on a show, hehe [color=#1E90FF][i]{ rushes out the bushes towards baylith and lance }[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - ?! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Bump and Fall { The boy falls down } [/i][/color] [b][i]???[/i][/b] - Ugh [i][b]Lance [/b][/i]- ... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - What! the Heck! [i][b]???[/b][/i] - Ugh...Sorry...Sorry... I was in a hurry [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - That's alright, c'mon let me help you up^_^ [i][b]???[/b][/i] - Thanks ^_^( hehehe ) [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Grabs Lance's Hand and gets up }[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Ow! Do you have any plans? Do want to come with us around the School Grounds? Oh, wait you just said you were in a hurry a while a go... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] -Yes Lance, he's in a hurry and of to the cafeteria with the two of us [i][b]???[/b][/i] - No, I don't mind, besides I just remembered that, what I was supposed to do was for tomorrow, so Im free for the day ^_^, By the way we weren't properly introduced, Im Isaru Altair, and you? [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Im Lance Aikawa, nice to meet you Isaru ^_^ and here beside me is my new friend Baylith Katarn, and Ow! Im a ( Gets his mouth covered by Baylith's hand ) "!" [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - He is not our friend Lance, and I think he has another motive, like following us around [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Isaru bows he's head and starts to shed tears }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i](He's other personality inside his mind) - WHAT THE HELL IS THIS KID TRYING TO PULL OFF!!! HE WON'T FOOL US! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Lance gets serious and takes baylith's hand off his mouth }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Uhm...Lance don't tell me you actually belie... [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Ofcourse! your my friend! And I Insist you come with us ^_^ [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Thanks! Lance! I won't let you down ^_^ [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Sheeshhh! ( this guy is so timid! XD ) [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Sheds mischievous grind }[/i][/color] hehe ( fools... ) [color=#1E90FF][i]"The guys are walking back to the Academy"[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - MAN! Im! Hungry! I wonder what sandwich will I get today :p [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ... [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - [color=#1E90FF][i]{ rolls his eyes to the side towards baylith and starts to smile }[/i][/color] [b][i]Baylith[/i][/b] - I guess you fooled Lance, but Im still keeping my eyes on you, cause you will never be my friend [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Isaru Smiles and fakes a frown and starts to run away towards the forest }[/i][/color] [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - WAHHH!!!!! [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - BAYLITH!!! look at what you did! wait! Isaru he's just Bluf!...fing.. [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ...follow him right? [i][b]Lance [/b][/i]- ...uhmm...yup? [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Baylith and Lance walks into the forest where Isaru RAN-Off , and there they find a abandoned house }[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Aha! I guess! Isaru went in here! so come on lets go inside ^_^ [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - (smiles)This guy really amazes me...Ok lets go, Ill go in first [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - sure right behind you ^_^ [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Baylith gets inside the house, but Lance is still outside }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ei Lance, look I think this house is abandoned. Lance? [color=#1E90FF][i]{ turns around }[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Shiver[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Ri..rir,,ririrght... be..hihihihi..ndd.. yo..uuu... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - I should have known... :p [color=#1E90FF][i]{ someone from the shadows on top of the chandelier } SFX - Dagger Shine, Rope cut, Chandelier Falling Down SFX - Crash[/i][/color] [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - ?! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Ei look Lance, the Chandelier fell, maybe theres a Ghost here ^_^ hehe [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] ( Too Afraid Expression "Stunned" ) - Ghohohgogggghogho...GHOST!!!! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Hey! I was just joking! So don't freeze on me like that! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Smoke Bomb tumbles down and exhumes gas[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Gah! Smoke Bomb! wait this is Sleep Gas! (covers his nose and mouth) [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Lance gets drowsy}[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - "!" Lance! [i][b]Lance[/b][/i] - Uh.... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Wait! Lance! I'll come there! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ A hand from the Smog grabs Lance } { A shadowy figure appears holding Lance }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - WHAT THE HELL! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ The shadowy figure along with Lance grabs a Rope and rises up } { Baylith looking up Runs after the Elevating Figure }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Grr!!! Hey! Come back here! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ The Shadowy figure stops on a nearby ledge }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - WHAT!!! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ The shadowy figure reveals itself and it was Isaru with a Fiendish but Silent look on he's face }[/i][/color] [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - ... ( Grabs another smoke bomb and throws it down ) [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Hahahahah!!! ( the area where the smoke bomb fell got covered in smoke ) [i][b]BAylith[/b][/i] - Gah!!!Stop! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ The smog clears up and Lance and Isaru vanishes out of sight }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - (Smiles) Heh, So you think you can escape the Great Baylith Katarn ei! hhah! Well you figured wrong! I'll find you wherever you hide! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ All of the sudden Baylith turns his attention towards the right side near the chimney shoot, and finds a card there }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - huh? whats this? Fo...Fo...Fox Fire? [color=#1E90FF][i]{ After saying the card's name a passage opens inside the Chimney shoot }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Figures...this is obviously a trap, but for my range of intelligence I will never be tricked, hehehe [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Baylith goes down the passage and mumbles to himself with a serious look on his face, administering a look that worries for a friend }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - I hope nothing bad happens to you Lance...Im coming...just wait... [color=#1E90FF][i]{ As Baylith goes deep within the passage he notices a lighted area and goes towards it }[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - rubbing his eye[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Wah?! is this a abandoned Laboratory?! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - I'll worry about his later gotta find that scum! and get Lance! wait...Is that him! You Wheres...La...Lance!!!! What did you do to him! ( Wait I gotta make this dude confuse so I can decipher a plan out of here Baylith - Uhmmm... Isaru, you know, I was wrong, you are my friend both me and Lance's friend! so we don't want a fight or anything, so could you return Lance? and we'll be leaving now! ( Having a fake impression of Infidelity ) [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - ... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - So...Ah? [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Isaru throws a Duel Disk Towards Baylith }[/i][/color] [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Swoosh and Catch[/i][/color] [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - For me to answer that, we first have to duel... [b][i]Baylith[/i][/b] - ( This kid really doesn't know me, hehe ) sure why not [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - hahaha! Do you really expect that you'll both get out of here alive? hahhaa [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ( Having a confusing but intimidating grind on his face ) Fool! You Dare Challenge! Me the GREAT BAYLITH of THE OBELISK BLUE!!! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - ( Laughs a fiendish smile with his eyes close ) hhihihihihi, We'll see who the real fool is! hhihihih! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Duel Disk Activating[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith and Isaru[/b][/i] - DUEL!!! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Ill be leading this duel! DRAW!!! I summon Six Samurai Irou to the field! [i][b]THE SIX SAMURAI IROU - ATK 1700 / DEF 1200 ( ATK MODE )[/b][/i] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - What! a Samurai Deck! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - I then activate Double summon, to bring to the field [i][b]Six Samurai [/b][/i]- Zanji! After that I face down two cards and call it a turn... [i][b]Six Samurai - Zanji - ATk 1800 / DEF 1300[/b][/i] [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Baylith drops down to the floor }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - MAN!!! two monsters in a turn! Can I Really do this! [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Clutches his hand } [/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ... [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Losing hope already? [color=#1E90FF][i]{ Stands up with courage and Draws a Card }[/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ( I can do this! ) To my Field! I hail! Skilled Dark Magician! [i][b]Skilled Dark Magician - ATK 1900 / DEF 1700[/b][/i] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Skilled Dark Magician! Eradicate Zanji with Incantation Black Magic! [color=#1E90FF][i]SFX - Crash[/i][/color] [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Ah! [color=#FF6347][i][b]LP 4000 - 100 = 3900[/b][/i][/color] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - I see your burning with courage, hahah! thats! good! let me see your power! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - I activate my Monster Reincarnation! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - but before you activate that card's effect, I activate Magical Dimmension! and Sacrifice my Skilled Dark Magician and Destroy your Six Samurai Irou, and then comes out my DARK MAGICIAN! Smooth move, if I do say so myself! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - That doesn't intrigue me one bit, I activate my second face down! Return Of the Six Samurai! and bring back my Irou in Defense Mode! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - So! what! I guess, you didn't notice that Dark Magician hasn't attacked yet and its still my battle phase! So Dark Magician! Rid the field with Irou! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - So you do have some skills... [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - I then Face 2 cards down and end my turn. Ofcourse I do! Iam The GREAT BAYLITH KATARN! hahah! [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - Hmph...DRAW!!!I hope you still remember that I activated back at your turn my Monster Reincarnation! so I have Zanji in my hand! so i think i'll summon him to the field [i][b]Six Samurai Zanji - ATK 1800[/b][/i] [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - In Addition to that I activate monster REborn! and bring my Irou to the field again! [i][b]Six Samurai Irou ATK 1700[/b][/i] [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - So what, those monster's ATK power are still low to match Dark Magician [i][b]Isaru [/b][/i]- Did I say Iam done! hahaha! Well Great Blabber mouth! Let Me Introduce you to my ACE monster! hahaha! when I have 2 Six Samurais on the field I can summon! the Shogun!!! Come to the Field! GREAT SHOGUN SHIEN! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - ! What! you have Shien! [i][b]Isaru [/b][/i]( Covered in Dark Aura ) - Hahah! now Tremble in the face of true! Greatness! ahahhahahahahaahhahahah!!! The VENDETTA OF THE SIX SAMURAI Force! [i][b]Baylith[/b][/i] - Grr... [i][b]Isaru[/b][/i] - haahahahaah! [color=#FF6347][b][i]"Now that the Great Shogun is in play, along with Irou and Zanji, can baylith escape his fate and save lance or will the winds of change blow towards the red tyrants direction. Find out in the next exciting chapter of Yu - Gi - Oh! NS"[/i][/b][/color] [/spoiler] [color=#FF0000]Thanks for reading![/color] [align=center][size=xx-small][color=#006400]All Rights Reserved Copyright 2008 CC - Productions JMB Productions VAGA Imaging[/color][/size][/align] BTW PLS COMMENT! GUYS^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kai- Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 10/10 I can't wait 'till chapter 2! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Woah Dude that was the most awesome thing i have ever seen I can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Tnx! Guys Glad you like it^_^ Im finally back in the phils! so i can work on it^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Amazing...you have implemented something new...I've seen lot of good fanfics but this is like the 1st ever manga-styled fanfic here. It shows that you have spent lots of time on it & I like it to high heaven...reward: 1 rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Wow, when I read 'manga' I expected this to be pretty average but I guess you proved me wrong. Great show of editing and story telling skills, well done ^_^...Too bad we can't rate fan-fiction two, you'd already have 5 stars XD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 That was great! Now I must see myself talk!EDIT:Never mind. I got talked to. . . And in the block with all the characters, I saw all my characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 You grammer is hax. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted November 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Official Opening! Is now out! See first post^_^BTW Pls Rate and comment! at youtube ok^_6and don't forget to comment here guys! Ok!^_^Thanks!!! BTW! To those have submitted their characters! I can send the reanimation image of your characters! and if you want some spoilers just PM me ok!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 I'd love to see my character ^_^ Btw I love this, though better grammar would make this almost perfect =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 so will I,please do send them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Just saw my character as a whole, sexy beast ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â—‡ Void â—‡ Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 yea i can see kana th the back thanks cronos infinity/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Yes i'd also like to see the reanimation of my character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 If I didn't make it clear enough in my previous reply: Your grammar is bad. You don't see bad grammar in books, do you? At least not where it shouldn't be. Which I very much doubt is the case here. Exclamation marks mid-sentence? You've got to be kidding. Your lack of grammar ruins the entire presentation, making it pretty much pointless to do all these images anyhow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted November 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Sorry UMBRA XD, I''l notify my grammar director about that, and yeah I notice the mishalfs too XD, I promise the next issue to be great without grammar errors XD, Again Sorry guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 This is pretty good CC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~ Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Not bad, but where did you get all the pics? Are they saved-as freezeframes?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Oh darn, why didn't I try to enter a character into this? It's AWESOME lol. Very nice comic, can't wait to see a full duel with it XD. So yeah, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Colin Optima's Theme and Altair Isaru's Theme is now released thanks to our Sound Director whom is my colleague ^_^Enjoy Listening! more Duel Themes to come! and only 7 Days left before chapter 2(I promise it to have to grammar errors XD) Hope you keep supporting NS! see you around^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 I love the theme song =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Yep, your theme rocks. but in the opening I rock the most! 'specially with me being all eerie and mysterious!My theme should come soon, if it doesn't come soon, oh well! I'll wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Shane McCarson's Duel Theme IS now Out^_^thanks to our Sound Director whom is my colleague ^_^Enjoy Listening! more Duel Themes to come! and only 6 Days left before chapter 2(I promise it to have to grammar errors XD) Hope you keep supporting NS! see you around^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 My. . . Theme. . . Rocks! Thanks Chronos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Greatest Yugioh Fanfic i have read, Despite what umbra said about your grammar, anything that breathes air makes mistakes, anyway 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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