Duelz Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 My first creation. The Hollow Ichigo. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Effect should read-"The controller of this card must pay 500 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases." need a better pic. no double types. either the ATK should be higher like 2700 maybe, or the level should be 5 stars. study the OCG/grammar thread and keep making cards buddy. it's the only way to get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I agree with monkeybutt. Blurry pic, OCG errors. 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 wrong section belongs in popculter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 OCG errors: Life PointsSummoned Pic could be better, effect is too simple, 5.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 BLURRY PIC..... and i think this card doesnt belong here.... i think it belongs to the POP CULTURE.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duelz Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Thanks for recommends. Since it's only my first card and since I am a noob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Pic is blurry.Bad OCG and it's not looses it's loses.2/10 sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duelz Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I fixed some stuffs people mentioned. Here it is the better version of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Even though you fixed it, its still pretty bad. Change the effect toEffect:Pay 500 Life Points when this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned.(note:that could be wrong also but its better than the effect you have right now)Choose whether hes a Warrior or a zombie not both. Or you could make the effect so that hes also treated as a zombie or warrior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 how has this not been moved to pop culture yet? oh well, its not bad. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 PLz have a mod move this or what not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Pic needs Uploading again. Moved to Pop Culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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