The begging of the "Crusaders"

[Ryuu The Seventh Samurai]

My first wriiten cards

Crusader Dragon

Level 8/Fire/Dragon/Crusader/Synchro/Effect

ATK:3000/DEF:2500

1Tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

Once per turn you can add 1 "Crusader" monster with 1600 ATK points or less from your deck to your hand and pay 300 life points to special summon it. While this card is face up all other "Crusader" monsters gain 400 ATK points

 

Tell me what you think of this card

[jaeyuuji]

I think the life points you offer up to special summon should be 500. Besides that, I'd give a 7/10

[Umbra]

This card is also treated as a Crusader monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, select 1 Crusader monster in your deck whose ATK is 1600 or lower. You can pay 300 Life Points to Special Summon the selected monster. If you do not, add the selected monster to your hand. While this card is face-up on the field, all face-up Crusader monsters (except this card) increases their ATK by 400 points.

 

That should do it.