Synchronized Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 This Monday on Raw: Who emerged victorious in the World Heavyweight Championship Match? Did Finlay manage to defeat Striker "Yank" Boyd and become the new United States Champion? Plus, every superstar from any brand that Debuted in the past six months will participate in a Battle Royal where the winner will earn a spot in the Money in the Bank Ladder Match at Wrestlemania 25! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I found two mistakes in NWO. 1. Emerald cashes in a rematch clause. Rematch clauses must be used within 24 hours after the title was lost. 2. You brought out every punt victim of Orton. (In the Fan Fic.) You forgot Dustin Delta, who Randy punted after he lost his ECW Championship.[spoiler=Heat]Heat Opening ”Welcome to Heat! I’m Jonathon Coachman, alongside Sim Snuka! And tonight, ECW’s Kurt Angle will speak on Dustin Delta!” The Miz smirked as he entered the arena. He taunted and walked down the ramp. He stepped onto the apron and stepped through the ropes. He taunted and awaited his opponent. The fans cheered as Kenny ran into the arena. He slid into the ring. He taunted and glared at The Miz. First Match: The Miz vs. Kenny Wilds The Miz ran forward and hit an STO. He then kicked Wilds in the neck as he was down. He pulled Kenny up and hit a DDT. Kenny stood and received a clothesline. Kenny stood again and dodged an STO. Wilds then hit a german suplex. He pulled Miz up and hit a flying forearm. He took him down with a legsweep. He hits a baseball slide and then smashes Miz into the turnbuckle. He taunts. Kenny then hits a Paranormal and pins Miz for the win. Winner: Kenny Wilds Kenny took a microphone. “Before any of you say anything, I’m gonna say something. I WANT MY HEAT TITLE BACK. And no ones going to stop me.” Kenny slid out of the ring and walked over the security wall and out of the arena. *Commercial Break* Kurt Angle The fans went wild as the Olympic Hero entered the ring. He walked down the ramp grinning. He stepped into the ring and he held a microphone in his hand. “Dustin Delta.” The fans went silent. “WHO THE HELL DO YA THINK YOU ARE?” The fans went wild. “You think your better than me? Just because you had 2 World Titles? Well, your first one, you needed help from a bunch of jobbers. And your second one? You beat a jobber. That’s called having an easy job. What’s the hardest match you’ve fought? The 1 minute match against Triple H?” The fans cheered. “HOLD ON.” Kurt Angle turned and saw Dustin Delta on the stage. “QUIT RUNNING YOUR MOUTH, OLYMPIC ZERO!” The fans booed. “You’ve Angle Slammed me twice, and you’re a former WWE Champion. But you lost to Jack Swagger on ECW two weeks ago, right? And I’ve been winning, right? You’ve been losing.” Kurt didn’t respond. “How about this? You, Kurt Angle, against me, Dustin Delta.” The fans went wild. “Well, No Way Out ended earlier tonight. Plus, Heat superstars can’t appear on other shows.” Dustin glared at Angle. He took off his Heat title and left it on the stage. “Then I guess I’m not a Heat superstar anymore.” Kurt grinned. “That doesn’t change the fact that we can’t have a match at No Way Out. IT’S OVER, DELTA.” Delta walked down the ramp and slid into the ring. He walked up to Kurt and stood face-to-face. “Then I’ll see you at Wrestle Mania.” The fans went wild as Delta pointed to the large star, the symbol of Wrestle Mania 25, hanging above the crowd. Then he grinned and began to leave the ring. He walked back up the ramp and to the back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 A bit dismayed, I am. Another PPV full of gloatin' faces. + saunters off + Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 pretty good No Way Out. Ah Yez. Da money in da Bank. Can't wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I found two mistakes in NWO. 1. Emerald cashes in a rematch clause. Rematch clauses must be used within 24 hours after the title was lost. 2. You brought out every punt victim of Orton. (In the Fan Fic.) You forgot Dustin Delta' date=' who Randy punted after he lost his ECW Championship.[hr'] 1. That doesn't matter, as I can modify rules to my liking. 2. Delta's Heel, so it wouldn't make any sense to have him involved in the match. EDIT: @Tabris: I kind of noticed that after the Pay-Per-View was finished. But in order for storylines I'm going to develop to work, I had to have the people that won, well, win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Pretty good. I was expecting something involving Immortal in a match. But WMXXV would be P-E-R-F-E-C-T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 excellent episode once again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 sweet PPV Star but i was expecting an elimination chamber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 sweet PPV Star but i was expecting an elimination chamber I didn't include an Elimination Chamber because there was one at New Year's Revolution. Thanks again for commenting, everyone. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticdave Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 That was an ill pay per view star keep up the great work!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 [spoiler=WWE.net - Dustin Delta Released] WWE has come to terms on the release of HEAT Superstar Dustin Delta (Dustin Shukizo) as of today, February 15. WWE wishes Dustin the best in all his future endeavors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Wow. I am shocked. Good luck Delta. Come back soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I've updated the Roster Page and "www.wwe.net". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Heh, nice to see you took my advice and worked on making the narration more exciting! What can I say, I think you got it perfectly this time around. Exciting from start to finish, in my opinion one of your best chapters so far! Keep it up, personally I like this writing style a lot more. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Nice No Way Out!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Can't wait for RAW![spoiler=WWE.net - Extreme Return]WWE.net has learned that former Heat and ECW Champion Dustin Delta has signed a Superstar contract with ECW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 [spoiler=wwe.net - Hook Cadaver Released] WWE has come to terms on the release of ECW Superstar, Hook Cadaver. WWE wishes Hook Cadaver the best of luck in his future endeavors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Again??? Ah, man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised, renew there contracts!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised' date=' renew there contracts!!!!!!!![/quote'] Only one Supestar has been released, and that superstar is Hook Cadaver. We resigned Dustin Delta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 not bad i guess star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised' date=' renew there contracts!!!!!!!![/quote'] Only one Supestar has been released, and that superstar is Hook Cadaver. We resigned Dustin Delta. Ok, but don't get rid of loads Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised' date=' renew there contracts!!!!!!!![/quote'] Only one Supestar has been released, and that superstar is Hook Cadaver. We resigned Dustin Delta. Ok, but don't get rid of loads If it makes a difference, Hook Cadaver was released due to practically two months of inactivity. That and the fact that Mad Hopz, the member that Submitted him, hasn't been on YCM in a while since I last checked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised' date=' renew there contracts!!!!!!!![/quote'] Only one Supestar has been released, and that superstar is Hook Cadaver. We resigned Dustin Delta. Ok, but don't get rid of loads If it makes a difference, Hook Cadaver was released due to practically two months of inactivity. That and the fact that Mad Hopz, the member that Submitted him, hasn't been on YCM in a while since I last checked. Ok, so superstars get realised due to inactivaty of the creator? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Why people getting realised' date=' renew there contracts!!!!!!!![/quote'] Only one Supestar has been released, and that superstar is Hook Cadaver. We resigned Dustin Delta. Ok, but don't get rid of loads If it makes a difference, Hook Cadaver was released due to practically two months of inactivity. That and the fact that Mad Hopz, the member that Submitted him, hasn't been on YCM in a while since I last checked. Ok, so superstars get realised due to inactivaty of the creator? If the creator hasn't been active since November, then yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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