Bloodrun Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 While im taking a Graphic Design class, and for our Mid-Semester project, we have to take 4 quotes and make an image for them, I have got two done, tell me what you think. Quote 1: "Somewhere over the darkened curve of the world the sun and moon were pulling, and the film of water on the earth planet was held, bulging slightly on one side while the solid core turned." -Lord of the Flies [spoiler=Image] Quote 2: "Now with the fall of darkness, the mist crept down from the hills, slinking as fingers around the tress, seeping over the green fields ..." - Eaters of the Dead. [spoiler=Image] They're both done in GIMP, about approximately a half hour each.Tell me what you think =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Not bad. I see you did a little smudging on the bottom one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 1st - remove or edit the lens flare, make the sides of the moon less blended. =]2nd - extend a bit more on the right, add better fading trails, make the eyes look less identical =]Otherwise, pretty good for 30 mins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 1st - remove or edit the lens flare' date=' make the sides of the moon less blended. =']2nd - extend a bit more on the right, add better fading trails, make the eyes look less identical =]Otherwise, pretty good for 30 mins. lol, i forgot to distort the lens flare, making it look like an exploding star >.< and yeah, these are just the "thumbnail drafts" i hate doing drafts >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 I really like them both, but again, I'm just an 11 year old kid.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 1st - remove or edit the lens flare' date=' make the sides of the moon less blended. =']2nd - extend a bit more on the right, add better fading trails, make the eyes look less identical =]Otherwise, pretty good for 30 mins. lol, i forgot to distort the lens flare, making it look like an exploding star >.< and yeah, these are just the "thumbnail drafts" i hate doing drafts >.< Oh, I thought that was the style. It looks really good on the Earth/Sun in the first one =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 1st - remove or edit the lens flare' date=' make the sides of the moon less blended. =']2nd - extend a bit more on the right, add better fading trails, make the eyes look less identical =]Otherwise, pretty good for 30 mins. lol, i forgot to distort the lens flare, making it look like an exploding star >.< and yeah, these are just the "thumbnail drafts" i hate doing drafts >.< Oh, I thought that was the style. It looks really good on the Earth/Sun in the first one =] lol that is the style, I delibrately(sp) left out one thing for each of my pictures, so i could have a picture for each of my rough drafts, and only have to do one thing to each, to make them my final drafts :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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