Holy R. Enigma Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 This is the set of my Fan Grand Universe. This will be my greatest written set, even though it will be pretty unbelievable though. First 4 Cards: Name: Fan Grand UniverseCirculation: First EditionSet ID: UE1-000Rarity: Secret Rare/Ghost RareSpell Type: Field Effect: When this card is activated, all cards on your side of the field, increases their ATK power by 1000 points. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you must discard your whole hand to place it in the Field spell zone, you cannot activate it if you use this effect. This card, cannot be removed from play by any Monster, Spell, or Trap Card. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 28, 2008 Name: Dimensional Hyper DriveCirculation: First EditionSet ID: UE1-001Rarity: Super Rare/CommonSpell Type: Continuous Effect:This card can only be activated when "Fan Grand Universe" is face-up on the field. This card can only affect 'Machine-Type' monsters, when a "Machine-Type" monster is Normal Summoned successfully you may remove that monster from play, to Special Summon 1 "Machine-Type" monster that is lower level than the monster that was Normal Summoned successfully. If the lower level monster, that you Special Summoned gets destroyed by battle or a Spell card you can return the 'removed' monster from play to it's original position on the field. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 28, 2008 Name: Cancer, the BattlenoughtAttribute: LightLevel: Level 4Circulation: First EditionSet ID: UE1-002Rarity: Rare/Common Monster Type: MachineEffect: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you put 6 Shield Tokens onto this card. When this card battles, with a monster that has lower attack points than this card, you can destroy the monster that battles with this card by removing 1 Shield Token. The maximum shield tokens you can have on this card is 12. If you don't use the Shield token destruction effect, you will have to remove 1 shield token, so this card 'does not' get destroyed by battle. This card cannot attack your opponent when it has Shield Tokens on it. ATK: 2100DEF: 1600 Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 28, 2008 Name: Shield RejuvenatoryCirculation: First EditionSet ID: UE1-003Rarity: CommonTrap Type: Counter Effect: You can only activate this card if 'any' of your Machine-Type monsters that require Shield Tokens has no more tokens on them, by battle or using it's effect that surrounds Shield Tokens. This card gives the machine-type monsters, rejuvenates the Shield Tokens to their maximum shield tokens. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 28, 2008 This is the start of the Universe Extreme Set, it'll be getting more interesting as the time goes on. I'm using a different type of 'things' on this like showing what's everything is doing. The Battlenought is a Spaceship that's it's first of its kind, it is a Battleship/Dreadnought Hybrid. All the Machine-Type monsters will have sentence, if they are shielded. "This card cannot attack your opponent when it has shield tokens on it." Link to comment
Spire Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Good cards, only 1 error: Card 1: Trap card = Trap Card Other the that, 9.2/10. Link to comment
Holy R. Enigma Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Thanks Spire. :PThe Next 4 will be released, when I get Red Alert 3. :P Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 This is intresting...very intresting. I'm a make sure I keep up with this series. Link to comment
Holy R. Enigma Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 An Update: The Next Four Cards of this Set, as well as 'I've played Red Alert 3 offline and online it's pretty awesome.' I hope you enjoy these 4 cards as much as I created them. :P Name: Terror of NightmaresAttribute: DarkLevel: 8Circulation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-004Rarity: Common/Uncommon Monster Type: FiendEffect: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Dark Attribute monsters from your Graveyard, as well you must have "Dark Regeneration - The Dark Aura" face-up on your side of the field, if this card is Special Summoned successfully all your opponent's monsters is switched to defensive position. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, you gain 1000 Life Points, while your opponent loses 250 Life Points per monster destroyed. If this card is destroyed, all monsters on the field that is Dark Attribute is destroyed with this card. When your opponent Summons new monster on the field, they are switched to Defensive position at their end of their turn. This card cannot generate Dark Aura Tokens but the maximum Dark Aura Tokens is 5. ATK: 3200DEF: 2100 Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 30, 2008 Name: Dark Regeneration - The Dark AuraCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-005Rarity: Super RareSpell Type: Continuous Effect: This card only affects Dark Attribute Monsters on the field. When this card is activated, all Dark Attribute monsters is switched into face-up attack position, the monsters also gain 1000 ATK points and have 5 Dark Aura Tokens on them. The Dark Aura Tokens, negate any kind of destruction via Spell, Trap, Monster Effect and Battle by removing 1 Dark Aura Token on the card, one of these effects was targeted. If this card is removed from the field, Dark Aura Tokens is removed from all Dark Attribute monsters if the monster has less than the maximum Dark Aura tokens, you lose 500 Life Points per Dark Aura Token that isn't on the Dark Attribute monster. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 30, 2008 Name: Pulsar Missile Emplacement TurretAttribute: Light Level: 4Circulation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-006Rarity: Common Monster Type: MachineEffect: When this card, is Normal Summoned successfully you can place 2 Pulsar Missile Tokens (Machine-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your opponent side of the field in Defensive Mode the tokens cannot be tribute for sacrifice of any kind or switch position. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF points for every Pulsar Missile Token on the field. If this card is destroyed, the Pulsar Missile Tokens is destroyed as well, and you lose 1500 Life Points. If you destroy the Pulsar Missile Tokens before "Pulsar Missile Emplacement Turret" is destroyed, your opponent loses 1500 Life Points and only that. ATK: 1900DEF: 1400 Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 30, 2008 Name: Cloaking FieldCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-007Rarity: CommonTrap Type: Normal Effect: You can only activate this card, if a Machine-Type monster is declared as an attack target. You can remove the targeted Machine-type monster from play for 2 turns and your opponent's Battle Phase instantly ends for the turn. Your opponent Life Points increases by 500 points for as long as this card is in your Grave. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 30, 2008 Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 You're underpowering these cards with these effects, though not being able to destroy them makes them hard to deal with them. You are going to play with your life points alot with these cards. Make some life gaining cards to benefit these cards. There are some OCG errors and some of these effects are a bit confusing. Try working on that. Still an okay theme. Link to comment
OnSlaUghT Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 you have to update the OCG on all cards, this is still a major problem with all of your cards. but besides that the cards are very interesting, but can you please post a story to go with the cards, just like the last set? it makes the set interesting. but anyway, the set has some very good support for machines and DARK cards. 8/10 Link to comment
Holy R. Enigma Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Why the hell does, the Konami changed the Official Card Grammar In the first place? Did other TCG companies whined to them. I like the older Official Card Grammar because it's easier for me because I more or less stopped playing the card game, including collecting. Just because all these newer cards is driving me up the wall.. I don't really like all these newer cards/grammar just because they don't fit too well with my 'identity' but the Story of these cards, will be released soon because they more or less goes within my role plays, fan fictions that happens within my Fan Grand Universe. This update has 4 more cards.Name: Raging Heart BusterCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-008Rarity: CommonTrap Type: Continuous Effect: You can only activate this card, when you or your opponent Special Summons a LIGHT attribute monster. All LIGHT Attribute monsters are destroyed and both players gain half of the Total Attack points of all monsters destroyed by this effect. "Raging Heart Buster" stays on the field as long as you pay 500 Life Points per End Phase, if you do not pay the requirement to keep this on the field, this card is destroyed. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate: October 31, 2008 Name: Pure Dragon of HatredAttribute: WindLevel: 10Circulation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-009Rarity: Rare Monster Type: DragonEffect: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon 2 Dragon-Type monsters that have 1200 or less ATK points in face-up defensive mode. Once per turn, you can sacrifice 1 Dragon-type monster to increase your Life Points by the total attack points of the sacrificed monster. During the Battle Phase, if all your opponent’s monsters are in face-down defensive mode or face-up defensive mode they are switched to ‘ATK’ mode and must attack this card only, your opponent loses only 500 Life Points per monster destroyed by this card’s effect. ATK: 3500DEF: 2450 Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 31, 2008 Name: Godlike PowerCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-010Rarity: SuperSpell Type: Quick-Play Effect: If you activate this card from your hand, you can sacrifice 2 monsters on your field to Special Summon 1 Level 10 or higher monster from your Deck w/o the effect of the monster you Special Summoned activating for 5 turns, if has “When this card is Special Summoned successfully.” You and your opponent cannot activate any cards, during these 5 turns. Both players will gain 1000 Life Points per standby phase as long as the monster is still face-up in attack mode. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 31, 2008 Name: Armageddon’s Power – Enraged JusticeCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-011Rarity: CommonSpell Card: Equip Effect: This card can only be equipped to Dragon-type monsters, the equipped card loses 1000 DEF points to gain 1000 ATK points, and as well its level is increased by 2. If the Dragon-type monster is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 31, 2008 Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 There are errors still...I got confused reading this card: -Name: Godlike PowerCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-010Rarity: SuperSpell Type: Quick-Play Effect: If you activate this card from your hand, you can sacrifice 2 monsters on your field to Special Summon 1 Level 10 or higher monster from your Deck w/o the effect of the monster you Special Summoned activating for 5 turns, if has “When this card is Special Summoned successfully.” You and your opponent cannot activate any cards, during these 5 turns. Both players will gain 1000 Life Points per standby phase as long as the monster is still face-up in attack mode. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: October 31, 2008- After I read it a few more times I understood the effect.So far My score: 7.2/10It's still a good set. Link to comment
Holy R. Enigma Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 New Card, also thanks. Name: Searching For Your PurposeCirculation: First EditionSet-ID: UE1-012Rarity: CommonSpell Type: Normal Effect: You can only activate this card when you have 5 Spell Cards in your Graveyard. You discard your entire hand, to Special Summon 1 Level 10 or higher monster from your Deck or Graveyard it cannot attack for 3 turns. Your opponent's Life Points increase by 1000 Life Points per monster card discarded by this card's effect. Creator: Brandon Kyle FrenchDate Created: November 5, 2008 Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 That is a nice card, I could really benefit the Crystal Beast Theme. Link to comment
Umbra Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 As said before, your OCG is bad. I like the older Official Card Grammar because it's easier for me because I more or less stopped playing the card game, including collecting. The cards are still accessible on the internet, not making them hard to find. Invalid reason.Just because all these newer cards is driving me up the wall.. I don't really like all these newer cards/grammar just because they don't fit too well with my 'identity' but the Story of these cards, will be released soon because they more or less goes within my role plays, fan fictions that happens within my Fan Grand Universe.So, you are making your cards look worse because... you don't like them. Also, how can new OCG don't fit with your cards? If that's the case, it's not the OCG that's the problem, it's your cards. Again, you're making your cards look bad on purpose. Link to comment
turbo10k Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 The shield tokens are a VERY good idea. Too many high level monsters that lack support other then special summon. Just, say you have 6 shield tokens, do you have to wait 6 turns of you opponent summoning monsters to get a chance of getting a clear shot? Link to comment
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