Rise of The Dark Duelist.Plus reps for good comment.Mistake also add reps.

[vamki]

[/align][/code]Character:

Name:Vamki Spericole.

Deck:Chaos Darkness

Image:But with a pendant that written "Cross".

Detail:A member of the 12 Dark Knight.Transferred Student.

 

Name:Lucia Sawami

Deck:Fighting Ladies

Image:

Detail:A member of the 12 Dark Knight.Transferred Student.

 

Name:Brian Blazewing

Deck:18 Floor Of Blazing Hell.

Image:

Detail:A member of the 12 Dark Knight.Transferred Student.

 

12 Dark Knight.

It is a sercet society.There is only some followers.They are entrusted not to reveal their identity as a Dark Knight.There is 12 elite who really deserve the title"Dark Knight".They must be a very skilled duelist.The 12 Dark Knight have special ability to create a dimension of their own.

 

Prologue

6:00AM

"Vamki,Lucia and Brian.You are sended to a mission."said a man in black unifrom.He wear a mask with 12 word.6 on each side."We need you to find a dark source in this academy.It seem that 1 of our foes have invaded into the academy to recruit stronger members.We must defeat them.""Yes sir"said the 3 of them.

"Mission,mission,mission.That all that guy want us to do"whisper Vamki while walking out of the office.

7:00AM.

Vamki having a soda.He is standing in front of a big building.

 

"So here is the duel academy.Big building."Said Vamki while sucking the soda out of the straws.

 

"Ahh,so here is the new transferred student."said a man in red uniform.He is a thin,old man(Bald).The man introdunce himself"I m the dean of this duel academy.Where is your friends?I thought there is 3 of you."

 

"In the car.Oh here there are."Answer Vamki."Here they are".

 

A black car appear.It travel in a great speed.It almost hit Vamki but stop just in time.Lucia intodunce herself"Hi,I m Lucia and the guy sitting at the back is Brian".

 

"What happen?"ask Vamki as Brian seem emotionless and sad.Lucia reply"He break off with his girlfriend"."Oh that chinese girl named Jing Xue huh?Dont worry I got some.I will introdunce some to you."said Vamki.

 

"So let get into the academy,I will show you some of the student.Class start at 7:00AM".Said the Dean."By the way,you all are in Uria Dorm.""Uria Dorm?I thought there is only 3 dorm which is Silfer,Obelisk and Ra"

 

"Time changed,boy.That is for primary.Secondary is Uria,Raviel and Hamon."answer the Dean.

 

Vamki unpacked all his stuff into his room.Then,he senses something funny.He look back.A figure is at the other side of his room door.He can't see properly his face as the door's glass is translucent.

 

"Who there?"ask Vamki.But there is no reply.But then,he hear a sinister laugh.He opened the door but there is nobody.He continue packed his stuff and walk to the class.

 

"There is a weirdo just now while I unpack my thing"explain Vamki to Brian and Lucia.A student hear it and said"It is the Clown."

"The Clown?Who are you and who or what is the clown"ask Vamki."I m Osaki Toyokui.Uria student.And for the clown.He is a student too.He don't talk and like to laugh a lot.Many of us are afraid of him.He has a habit of looking at people for no reason.His mother died after giving born to him and his father die in an accident."

[Skuldur]

okay i like the characters but you should perhaps write the first chapter before posting because people will just yell at you if you don't

 

I wish you the best of luck with your fanfic

[vamki]

Thanks.Sry.I want to but I m in a rush.

[vamki]

[/php]Chapter 1=The Mystery of the Clown.(I know I know the prologue is a bit short...Well,very short!.But it is only the prologue so I think it is forgivable.)

7:15AM

Vamki look at round.He saw the figure who was watching him in the door."So you are the guy who is kinda wierd,call the clown.Am I right?"said Vamki.But the clown just reply with a sinister laugh."Guess I need to teach you a lesson."

 

DUEL!!

 

"So you wanna duel with me?Your are doom!"said the clown."So you finally said a word.I thought you are mute or something."Reply Vamki.

 

"I go first.I set a monster and set 2 spell card.End."said Vamki.

"It my turn then.I set a monster.Activite Circus of Doom.(Field/Magic)"said the clown.Students begin to gather to watch the duel.

 

"Circus of Doom.Never hear of that card..What is the effect?"Vamki thought in his mind."Ignore it,most field card are weak.""I summon Dark Drakel Warrior(ATK 1700/DEF 1500)".A dragon-like warrior appear taking 2 spears."Then,I flip summon the monster on my field.Attacker of Darkness(1500/1300).A ninja appear with a bottle of black thing.The clown stare at the bottle knowing something will happen.

 

"Interesting is'nt it?"ask Vamki"The bottle is it's special effect.Each dark attribute increase his attack by 400."The ninja's bottle opened automaticly.It suck some dark power from the drakel.Then,the ninja's eyes glowed.

 

"Haha.Activite the field's effect.Talents Interview"laugh the clown.But suddenly a man appear.He is in red shirt with long sleves.He wear a pair of sunglasses and "Stop what you doing and get to class".said the man"I get lot of rare cards information for you students today."

 

"Yes sir"said Osaki.Vamki and the clown took their deck from their duel disk."Who is that?"ask Vamki."That is your teacher-to-be"reply Osaki."Mr.Jackson".

 

Vamki get into the class.Brian and Lucia was sitting near each other.There is an empty place for Vamki."Ok,so we got 3 transferred students here"introdunce Mr.Jackson"This is Vamki Spericole,Lucia Sawami and Brian Blazewin.I hope that you all will treat them well."

 

"Today,I m going to teach you about rare cards.First of all,Nerco Paladin.It is a rare card with 2700 attack and 2700 defense.It can......"explain Mr.Jackson.But Vamki don't seem to give attention.He is thinking of what is Talent Interview.

 

"Mr.Vamki,you does'nt seem to give any attention.Anyway,can you answer me what is the attack of Dragon knight-Dracolich?And aslo his effect please."ask Mr.Jackson."1750.Each dragon tyre summon on the field can add a "Undead Dragon counter".When there is 3 Dragon Counter.You can summon the "Undead Dragon of Ulisher"(3000/2700)."Answer Vamki."A very smart reply.Or perhap it is just luck that you seem that card before"said Mr.Jackson.

 

Mr.Jackson is right.He duel with the Dragon Knights before.It is a hard but he won.

 

It is the afternoon."Good.We end the day"said Brian."No yet,now is only afternoon.Miss Rin is coming to the class"explain Osaki.Brian collaspe in exhaust.

 

After 15 minutes,a lady appear.She look very attractive and beautiful.She wear a mini skirt and a small jacket(Something like Mai Valentine).

 

"Hello students"said the lady.Brian's eyes pop out."Hello Miss Rin"reply the students."So there is some transfer students around.Mind the new duelists rise their hand?"ask Miss Rin.Vamki,Lucia and Brian rise up their hand."Welcome to the Duel Academy.Students"Miss Rin continue.

 

After Miss Rin's class,everyone walk back to their dorm.It is evening.Vamki walk a lone in the silent way.Everyone has reach their dorm.Suddenly,a knife fly to Vamki.It cut Vamki a bit in the face.

 

Vamki turn back.There is no one."Appear where you are clown"command Vamki.A figure jump from a tree with a duel disk."Nice senses,let continue our little game"said the clown.

 

DUEL!(Wind blew strongly)

 

"You will pay for damaging my face.I go first.I summon Devil of Urilish(1800/1600)and set 2 spell cards.End"said Vamki.

 

"Is that what you think?I activite Terraforming to use Circus of Doom.Then I summon Circus Monster-Two headed Lion(1600/1800).It can attack twice in a turn"explain the clown."So?I have higher attack than you."boasted Vamki."He he,Circus Of Doom's effect.Perfect Show!It increase the attack of Circus Monster by 500(2100 attack).Attack my lion!"command the clown.

 

"I activite trap.Confusing Fogs.All the monster of yours change it position."said Vamki."My turn.I tribute summon Vampire of Chaos(2300/1700).This card can allow me to destroy a monster on the field as long as I have above 3 cards in my hand.I got 4.Devil Luster"command Vamki.

 

The two head lion came closer to the vampire.There is a hole in front of the vampire.The lions drop into a hole with a lot of flames.

 

"So I will direct attack you.Life Draining Fangs."command Vamki again."Not so fast.Showtime of the Twins.It allow me to summon 1 Black Clown(0/0) and White Clown(0/0).Choose 1 to attack"said the clown.

 

"I will choose white clown"said Vamki.It is destroyed but some green light appear and surpass the clown body.The clown LP become 9000.

 

"My turn,I used monster reborn White Clown.Then,I synchro summon Black White Clown(1900/1200).Mmmm,I will flip a coin."said the clown"It is a head.I heal by 1000 LP."The clown LP become 10000."I end"continue the clown.

 

"My turn.I summon Attacker of Darkness."said Vamki.A ninja appear and the bottle absorb some darkness from Vampire of Chaos.The ninja's eyes glowed(1900 attack)."Then,I activite spell card on the field.Dopple Ganger.I can clone a 6 star under monster.I choose Vampire of Chaos."explain Vamki.A shadow appear and soon form into the shape of Vampire of Chaos."In case your Circus of Doom have another trick.I will activite this card.Realm of the Soul."said Vamki.

 

"What the......He is smart.The main weakest of field card is another field card.Fine so he want to do it.I allow him to."the clown told himself.

 

The circus collaspe.But it didnt hit the clown.Nor the black and white clown."Thus,I activite the effect of Vampire of Chaos and Casting Lesser Hurricane.Destroy white and black clown.Casting Lesser Hurricane allow me to destroy all your spell on the field by discarding 2 monster on my hand.I have 3 more.I discard Magician of Dark Art-Nercomancer(2700/2300)and Gilgurasira(1900/1200).

 

"Now this is bad.I almost lose...No,I can't give up."the clown told himself again.

 

"Realm of Spirit allow me to increase the attack of Undead by 500."explain Vamki.The vampires roar as spirits passed throught their bodies.Their eyes turn bloody red.

 

"Attack with all my monster!Life Draining Fangs and Soul of Tortured.7900 damage was inflict to you clown!"explain Vamki.(2100 LP remain)

 

The clown cries in pain.The tear make his make up look ugly."You are going to pay for that!!My turn!"curse the clown."You still going to duel?The heart of rage will bring lose to the person.That what my mentor teach me."advise Vamki.

 

"That none of your concern!So just shut and duel."cursed the clown.

 

The Sun is setting.Vamki must finish the duel quickly or the clown is going to see his true form.

 

"I remove Circus of Doom from my graveyard.I activite Circus of Doom II."said the clown.The field changed back into the circus.This time it have a lot of soul."These are the soul of clowns that you have killed.They will ask revenge.Each turn,I can summon a Undead Clown Token(1000/1000).They can become tribute of course.Then I used last Will to special summon Clown Trainee(900/800).I tribute them to become the Master of Circus(3000/3000)."said the clown.Then,a smile flashed from the clown face."Because Circus of Doom II is here.I can ritual summon Jester of Doom by activiting The King's Entertainment.

 

A jester appear.It is a giant.It have 4 aces cards in his left hand as sheild and a black knife on the right hand(3500/3100).

 

"What the..!A monster with 3500 attack!"said Vamki in amazed."He he,that not all,I activite Chameleon Colour Protection and equip it to Jester of Doom.Said bye bye to your life point.Ha ha ha.Dark Stad to the soul"laugh the clown.

 

The jester disappear.Vamki was stad directly at the back.The jester reappear again.(4500LP)."It my turn and you had lose."said Vamki.

 

"How could you defeat my beautiful Jester?Mwaha ha ha."laugh the clown.

 

"Because you forgot 2 importance thing.I will show you.First of all,Devil Luster!"command Vamki.The Jester came closer to the original Vampire of Chaos.It drop inside a hole which was in front of Vampire of Chaos.

 

"Oh no!"cries the clown."Secondly you didnt put any magic or trap cards.You lose and I will make you feel the pain!Life Draining Fangs and Soul of Tortured.(0LP).

 

"Arrggghhh"cries the clown.It is fainted after so much damage.The sun set.Darkness cover the place.Vamki roared in despair and transfrom.

 

In the dorm...8:30PM

 

"Where is Vamki?"ask Lucia"If he don't return.Everyone will know he is a dark knight.He need to take the pill now".

 

Suddenly,something opened the dorms door.It is Vamki in his dark knight form.A dark demon with long claws.Aslo a pair of bat wing.

 

"Anyone see you?"ask Brian."Almost but I made him fainted in time"explain Vamki in a demon voice."Here the pill."said Lucia.Lucia give Vamki a pill.He took the pill and transform into human again.

 

"Where you sended the fainted unlucky guy?"ask Brian."The nearest clinic."answer Vamki.

 

The Next Day

 

A little boy with a present face appear in front of Vamki."Who are you?"ask Vamki.

 

"Haruko Omehuki.Known as the clown.I lose yesterday.Here is the rare card arccording to the rules."explain Haruko.Master of Circus.

End of Chapter

 

This Chapter RC(Rare Cards)

Master of Circus(3000/2500)

Effect:When Circus of Doom or Circus of Doom 2 is on the field.You can decrease all the monster level in your hand by 2.(Never drop to zero)

Detail:Given by Haruko's father.It is his deck leader.

 

Black and White Clown(1900/1200)

Effect:Flip a coin.Head:Increase your life point by 1000.Tail:Inflict 1000 life point to your opponent.

Detail:Haruko's 1 and only synchro summon card.

 

Jester of Doom(3500/3100)

Effect:Can ritual summon when Circus of Doom or Circus of Doom 2 is on the field,Master of Circus and King's Entertainment is on the field.Tribute Master of Circus to summon this card.(Same effect as Master of Circus but decrease by 3 star.

Detail:Given when Haruko's father die.

 

Circus of Doom

Effect:1st.Circus monster increase attack by 400

2nd.Copy enemy effect to a NORMAL monster only.

3rd.Send this to graveyard.

Detail:A card that picture area of Haruko's dad showplace.After an accident.

 

Circus of Doom 2

Effect:Can only use this whe circus of doom is in graveyard(Remove it).

1st.Destroy all your opponent card on the field by sending a Master of Circus

2nd.send Jester of Doom from the field or hand to graveyard.Remove all card im the opponent graveyard.

[Lord Ursus]

You are not allowed to bribe for comments, sadly enough...

[vamki]

What is bribe in comment?

[Omegamon-X]

Try and make your english more better

[Furious Reaper I]

Your grammar and spelling are seriously poor so maybe you need to sort that out before posting another episode.

 

sorry if it was too harsh

[Liger Zero]

This is cool.

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i really don't care about grammer.

[vamki]

Thank you..and cute baby signature.

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To K9991 and Omegamon-X.Example please.So that I can correct my mistake.

[Lord Ursus]

You have "plus rep for god comment" in the title. You need to remove that part.

[vamki]

.I put "plus good"....Not god comment.

[SebastiaanZ]

Not bad, not bad at all. You could do something about grammar, but I like to read more.

[Furious Reaper I]

The two head lion come closer

is'nt

 

^^ two examples of bad grammar. i will read more but it will easier to read if you sort the grammar problems out

[vamki]

Thanks.I think I didnt focus during my english lesson.But next time mail me instead^^

[vamki]

where is the is'nt it?

[vamki]

Chapter 2:Skilled Ladies VS Hidden Monster.

7:00AM(Class)

"Now that you defeat an unown student who have not duel anyone?Is the clown strong?"ask a student who was siting near Vamki."How do you know?Guess news spread very fast here."said Vamki."Well"Vamki continue"He is kinda strong.His specialist is field card.His field card hidden a lot of special ability which mostly benefit his ownself."

 

"Interesting"said a guy with is leading at the door to himself"But I don't think I m starting to "screw"him up.Let start with his friend first."

 

The guy laugh to himself and went off."Weirdo."complain Lucia.

 

7:10AM

"Hey,Vamki.I get a new friend"said Lucia."This Vamki Spericole.A powerful new duelist around and he just defeat a elite who had not duel anyone for long.And Vamki.This is Hakoru Adyamike.She is an Raviel student.And she also defeat Mr.Jackson once."

 

"Mr.Jackson is kinda jealous of me.He puted posters to make me feel bad and set trap to get me a warning letter.But I can see his trick"boasted Hakoru."I wanna had a duel with this friend of your,Lucia."requested Hakoru."Fine with me."said Vamki.

 

DUEL!

 

"I go first.I summon Spirit in the bottle(200/400).By the effect of Spirit in the bottle.I can special summon 1 Attacker of Darkness(1500/1200)into the field.Spirit in the bottle is a dark attribute.It increase Attacker of Darkness's attack by 400.(1900).And set 2 cards."

 

"It my turn.I set 5 spell.End"said Hakoru.

 

"That was quick.My turn,I summon Lighting Speed Rogue(1700/1500)."A she-rogue appear with yellow and black outfit with a dagger and another dagger in tied in her belt."Direct attack"commanded Vamki.

 

"Fools,pro duelist should know that I m using the trap tactic.I guess the clown is'nt a had opponent after all"teased Hakoru."Activite Trick or Treat".But there is no respond."What the..?"said Hakoru in amazed.The rogue stad her dagger at Hakoru's back.Then,it return in a speed.(6300LP)

 

"That for underestimating me.Lighting Speed Rogue's effect.She is so fast that pass all trap before it got a chance to activite.In case you dont understand.The special effect is no trap card activite when it attack."explain Vamki.

 

"Arrgghh.My turn.I activite Curse from Ancient.This allow me to summon 2 Anubis Servant.(1600/0)".Two spearman appear.Their head is like dog and their body is rotten like an undead."Then,I will activite Retailition.This card allow me damage my opponent as much as I damaged.You direct attack me 1700.It goes back to you as well.End"said Hakoru.Vamki's LP 6300.

 

"Nice shot.But only depend on that will not help you in anyway.I summon Dark Mercenary(1900/1400).Then I equip Grand Master's Dagger to Lighting Speed Rogue.This allow me to attack twice in a battle phase per turn and as well as increase the attack of Lighting Speed Rogue by 800.Dark Stad."command Vamki.The rogue's dagger transform itself into a black dagger.Souls of great master hurls around the dagger.

 

It destroy a Anubis Servant.The undead dog become ashes after roaring in pain."Effect of Anubis Servant.I do not take damage once it is destroy."said Hakoru"and it also end your battle phase."

 

"My turn.I activite Ecilpse of The Great Star and The Truth.Once Ecilpse of the Great Star was activite.I can decrease all of your monster's attack 500.Then,The Truth will increase the attack of Anubis by 500.It also allow me to choose and discard 1 card from your hand.

 

Hakoru checked Vamki's hand card.She look around."All seem useless to me."complain Hakoru.But then,she see a card.It is a very powerful monster card with extremely high attack.Without much thinking,she took the card and take it to graveyard.

 

Vamki grin a smile."Little girl,you had fall to my trick."Vamki tell himself.

 

"Attack,Anubis Servant!Spear of Souls."command Hakoru.The Anubis Servant stad it's spear into Lighting Speed Rogue's heart.6200LP.

 

"My turn.I discard 3 monster on my hand and tribute Dark Mercenary"said Vamki."What the..!"Hakoru step back.A deadly figure appear.It is a demon.It had long claws,dark scale and long white hair.It look the same as Vamki's transform.Then,a pair of wings appear.It is a huge and wide which took almost 5 of the monster zone.A cross appear in the monster's chest.(4500/4000)

 

"Oh no,Hakoru.You had a gurranteed lose.It is Vamki's deck leader.The God of the Dark Realm.Cross.It can be special summon by discarding 3 monster from hand and 1 monster on the field to graveyard.It's special effect is create more destrution than you think...."Vamki stared at Lucia when Lucia was explaining.She stopped.

 

Hakoru was stunned by the appearance of this great creature."Time to end,Hakoru.Active special effect.By paying 1000 LP it can attack 2 in a battle phase.It is not effect by trap and spell card.So don't hope you can get away from this."said Vamki.

 

The God of the Dark Realm rise his wings.It fly up to the sky and create 2 ball of darkness.Hakoru look closer to the ball,dark souls scream in pain.It let go of 1 ball.It hit Hakoru so hard it almost make Hakoru fly.1800LP."Now here come the second ball!"said Vamki.Another make cries in pain.Cards blow up and falling like snowflakes.Hakoru's body lies on the floor,fainted.

 

"How...how could he defeat me this easily?....It is only 5 turns.."said Hakoru.

 

Suddenly,a figure clapped his hand."Amazing,amazing.I thought Jaden Yuki is the only 1 who create miracle by defeating his opponent in higher rank"said the figure.

 

"Look who might this be?It is Mr.Jackson."said Lucia.

 

"Such a strong card is not allowed in such a weak deck"said Mr.Jackson.

 

Vamki stared at him."Very harsh of you.But it is mine.What can you do?"

 

"I will took that from you.After all,I m your teacher.Ha ha ha"said Mr.Jackson with laughter.

 

"Mr.Jackson,you had no right to do so."said a voice near the door side.

 

"Hmph,nice timing Dean"said Vamki

 

"Rule of the academy.119 in volume 3.As a teacher,you had no right to took cards from student as you like.No matter you success or failed.15 DP is took from you"explain the Dean.

 

"Arrgghh.Fine"grumbled Mr.Jackson.He walk away angrily.

 

"DP.What is DP?"asked Vamki.

 

"New student may not know.DP is something earn to access something.The more DP you earn.The more thing you achieves.Like prizes,cards and more."explain the Dean.

 

"It is short for Duel Point.You earned them by dueling.And each student of different give different amount.Uria give 1 DP.Hamon give 2 and Raviel give 3.If you defeat a teacher.You get 5 points."The Dean continued.

 

"Thanks for the info.That mean I had 4 DP.Any prizes for that?"ask Vamki.

 

"No"reply the Dean.

 

8:00PM

 

The Dark Knight is at their room.Vamki lying down at a sofa reading some book.Brian come near the sofa.

"Hey,Vamki.Anything interesting around?"ask Brian.(Brian skip school today.)

 

"Ya.I duel with Lucia's new friend name Hakoru.She is in Raviel Dorm"answer Vamki.

 

"So did you lose?"ask Brian.

 

"No.Geez,you just want me to lose.What?You expect all this junior can defeat me,Vamki the Dark Knight?"ask Vamki while flipping a page.

 

"Darn.Perhap it is your lucky day."grumble Brian.

 

"Hmph,everyday is my lucky day than."reply Vamki.

 

"Hey don't argue around,boys.Shut up and had dinner together"said Lucia.

 

They walk into the kitchen and took their instant mee.Then,they return to the living room.

 

"Oh yes.Talk defeating peoples.Hakoru havent give her rare card to me"said Vamki.

 

"Good thing.You are alway so generous that you never took cards.Come and duel with me.So if you lose you gimme your rare card while I lose,I don't need to."said Brian.

 

"Brian you are really wanna to get a few punch from me.don't you?"ask Lucia.

 

"You wanna fight?Come and fight in Dark Knight Form with me.You come from a fighting tribe.Even you are not negro.But you still make a good opponent."said Brian.

 

Lucia ignore him.But then,she step on his foot hardly.It was so hard that Brian's mee fly into the air.

 

12:00AM(Cliff side of the Academy)

 

Lucia was sitting on the grasses.She is thinking about Vamki.How does Vamki win continuously?After all kind of mission,his deck is consider as invincible.Balance on kind of tactic.

 

"So what is you thinking about at this kinda late night?"ask a voice behind Lucia.Lucia look back.It is Vamki.

 

"You havent sleep yet?"ask Lucia.

 

"So do you"reply Vamki."Mind if I sit here?"asked Vamki.

 

"Sure,this cliff does'nt belong to me"answered Lucia.

 

They had chat a night long until the next day.

 

6:30 AM.(Cliff)

 

"Oh my god,after chating so long,I never realise it is this late."said Vamki.

 

"Let went back to class"suggest Lucia.

 

Suddenly,a figure appeared and said"But you are not leaving here just yet".

 

"What on the world you talking and show yourself!"said Vamki.

 

It was the guy which Lucia said weirdo.He had blue spikey hair and a pair of ear rings.

 

Then,he tear off his face's skin.It was a mask.It appear to be a young man with golden long hair.

 

"I m Kira Adyamike.Member of the Tomb Guardian.I m here to defeat you."explain Kira.

 

"Adyamike.....You are Hakoru's relative!"said Lucia while pointing at him.

 

"Her elder brother.But she cannot compared to me.I was the one who is in charge of setting and creating trap monster on the Tomb of Great Pharaoh."explain Kira.

 

"Enough of talk.Let begin"said Vamki.Vamki had activite his Duel Disk.

 

"No,Vamki.You duel 2 matches so far.It time for me to duel"said Lucia.

 

"Fine"reply Vamki.He deactivited his duel disk while Lucia's was activited.

 

"DUEL"

 

"Let me go first"said Kira."I set 5 spell and Tomb Guardian Trainee(500/1000)."A young man with spear appeared.

 

"Sure,Hakoru's tactic.I got my plan.I summon Flame Dancer.(1850/1000)."said Lucia."Then,I set 3 Spell cards"

 

"Nothing much I can do.I summon Death Stinger.(?/600).As the attack is ?.It was time for it special effect."

 

"Activite Trap Card,Chain of Blood Thristy.It allow me to negate and destroy 1 monster if I had a 1 warrior.This decrease my life point by 300."7700LP.

 

"Fine.End of my turn"said Kira.

 

"My turn.I summon Trap Finder(1500/1000).Then,I equip Trap Testing Set on Trap Finder.Trap Finder original's effect is allow trap to only activite on her all at once.But Trap Testing Set allow it to negate all trap on the selected monster."

 

A woman in plain clothes appear but she took a pole and keep hitting lightly on the ground.Then,some equipment equip to the her body.

 

"Attack Trap Finder.Thrust of Discovery."commanded Lucia.

 

It destroy Tomb Guardian Trainee by poke it.The Guardian's soul was rise into the mid air leaving the body which then become ashes.But then,snake creatures and some mid air trap hole appear.However,then soon become nothing but ashes.

 

"Follow by Flame Dance.Cover the Dance Area with flames!"commanded Lucia.

 

Flame Dance went near Kira and begin to dance.Inferno appear at after each step on the floor.

 

"Arrgghh."cries Kira as he burns in flames.5150LP.

 

But Lucia notice something.His face begin to be cover by tatoo.

 

"If 2 duelist with super natural power meet in a duel,they will slowly transform into their true form when damaged and transform completely when LP become 0.But this will decrease the power of true form by 20 % of what is remain.If you win.You will get the 20 % from the loser."explain Kira.

 

"I know that.I end anyway."said Lucia.

 

"My turn.I removed 5 traps card from my graveyard and special summon God of Protection(1000/4000).Then,I activite Field Card Tomb of The Great Emperor."

 

"As soon as you summon God of Protection.I special summon Shaman Lady's Imps.(900/1000)."said Lucia.A small girl with a pair of wings and a tail appeared.

 

"My turn.I tribute all of the monster to summon my deck leader,Goddess of Amazonese(4000/3900).Then,I change the battle field into Amazonese Forest."said Lucia.

 

A gigantic woman appeared.She is beautiful and has 2 pair of wings made of bones.Taking a sword made of souls of the one that was hunted and die.

 

"It is a showdown then."said Kira.

 

"Ohh,but I win the showdown.Amazonese Forest increase the God of Amazonese by 500.Slashes of Justice!"commanded Lucia.

 

Goddess of Amazonese slashes God of Protection rapidly.It begin to fade away.

 

"My turn.You missing something importance doesnt you?I set 2 traps cards."said Kira.

 

"I didnt forgot that"said Lucia."My turn.I direct attack you."

 

"Activite trap card.Devil Santurcy."said Kira.

 

A devil symbol appear and a Metal Fiend Token appear.

 

It block and absorb the damage Goddess of Amazonese created.

 

Then,it reflect on Lucia directly.

 

Lucia cries in pain.2 pair of skeletal wing begin to appear and her cloths begin to change to Goddess of Amazonese's outfit.(3200).

 

"Nice hit.How about this one?I activite trap card.Revenge of the Amazonese.If 1 monster with "amazonese" in it's name attack but negate by traps.I can attack again!"explain Lucia.

 

Goddess of Amazonese rise her swords and try to slash Kira.

 

"I activite trap card.Magic Cylinder.Ha ha you lose!"said Kira.

 

"Really?I activite Amazonese Miracle Gift!It allow me to activite 1 magic card in graveyard for this turn!"explain Lucia.

 

"What the..!!"

 

"And of course,I choose Trap Testing Set to Amazonese Goddess."said Lucia.

 

Some equipment appear on Amazonese Goddess.The Amazonese Goddess slashes Kira rapidly.

 

"Argghh,why..why didnt you activite at the beginner?"ask Kira.

 

"To let you see the apart of my true form.Just before you give 20% power to me"said Lucia.

 

Kira cries in pain.A smoke appear from Kira's body and entered Lucia's body.Then,Kira fainted.

 

9:30 PM.

 

Kira awaken.He look around.He is in a room.

 

"Why am I here?"ask Kira.

 

Suddenly,the door open and Vamki appeared.

 

"Ah,you had awake."said Vamki.

 

Then,Kira remember how he got himself here.

 

"Now,you own me a rare card"

[vamki]

Too long had no return.Save it from dying.:P

[vamki]

Secondary bump.(More bumps)

[ragnarok1945]

I personally like this chapter. Keep this up

[vamki]

Sure.

[KageKatana]

It has a great plot and I really don't care about grammar,

Keep up the good work

[fenrir]

Please put spaces. And use proper grammar. That's pretty much the basics in Fan-Fic. Nobody will take you seriously if you don't.

[vamki]

Point 1-I dont care if ya take me seriously or what.I just wanna had fun.Hang around with friends.This mean I wanna had friend.

Point 2-I try to do so but...I cant find my mistake.No1 tell me.I ask them to mail but no1 did.

 

ATTENTION PLEASE:

Okay.So how about this?If any1 who spot me more than 3 mistake.I give him/her 1 reps.Mail me please.Or delete your post after telling me.(No delete,no reps^^.If my spelling wrong I will count as 1 as well).

[ragnarok1945]

yeah I don't worry on the grammar. I can get the gist of it