asterr259 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Dudes I was sitting around thinking of a Fan-fic when I actually found one I wrote a year ago....well there more like summaries..... Chapter1: One day a human show up in the digital world (mother board beach) to be awaken by a Veemon, who explains everything. Soon after they received their digivice, they were attacked by a goblimon and demidevimon. Then, the demidevimon stole they’re digivice and tried to steal it, but Veemon digivolved into veedramon and stopped them from stealing it.Chapter 2: a few hours later they visited the main land of island terminal. Veemon took his human partner, Zackary a.k.a Zack to lord piddomon to become an official tamer. Before they entered they were greeted by toucanmon the lordship’s adviser/accomplish/joblister. Lord Piddomon gladly accepts them as official tamers with their first job. Their job is to find bokomon’s book of knowledge in wet circuit.Chapter 3: the next day, Veemon shows Zack around the main land. Once they end up at the main land market, they find a kokomon and a lopmon who are in desperate need of a tamer. They need to find a green virus bean to make a remedy to heal their sick mother. Before they can agree, a monzaemon proclaims he knows where one is. When the duo heads back to the castle find out monzaemon is a wanted criminal, and chases them to point mountain to defeat monzaemon who was controlled by a black gear. Chapter 4: the next day, the duo was greeted by a new friend: the gatekeeper of the palace. Their new friend showed them how hard it was to protect the castle with his digimon digmon and pipismon.Chapter 5: the lord sends the duo to an unknown place called hidden cave to unravel its mysteries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Is it bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Hate to say it, but yes, it is. It's so short! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 it's way too short each chapter should be at least 1.5-4 page in word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 As you said, they're merely summaries. Actually post chapters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 oh ok I'm not really good at stuff like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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