-Stoner-™ Posted October 22, 2008 Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 This is the first RP I have actually made, so it might be good, it might be bad. We will begin when we have 10 Members. [spoiler=Plot]1000 years after the Clone Wars a new Species was born and civilized onto the planet of Jqir-Egyi XII.[spoiler=Jqir-Egyi XII Description]This miniscule world is the same size than Earth and has a gravity far greater than that of Earth. Its atmosphere is a glowing ochre and contains mostly nitrogen with some oxygen and carbon dioxide. The glowing clouds are antique gold and the grand, rose sun is gorgeous. The stars are matte black. There are five moons, one of which is grand and periwinkle, another is small and aquamarine, yet another is vast and grey, the fourth is miniscule and blue, and the last is vast and forest green. They also support life. This planet has dozens of continents and innumerable large islands. The most rich continents are ruggedly mountainous and they're well-watered by a network of rivers and streams. Aside from those, the terrain on the islands and other continents is most commonly mountainous. This barren world has 10 major rivers, many major lakes, 5 major swamps, and many seas and oceans. The most prominent source of water is bays. The grass and other low-lying flora is watermelon, various trees are tawny and cherry, and leaves turn gorgeous amethyst in the third season. The rocky soil is yellow-green, the rocks are lemon, and water is vibrant silver. Life originates here. Sensing the new Species, the Light Side allianced the new Species. The Dark Side got angry and made an all out war called the "The War of Raddracer Decimation". It is up to you to help stop the War by choosing sides and fighting for that side.[spoiler=Solar System]Jagged State - This important solar system revolves around a blue giant. There are eleven planets, three of which are habitable. The most sacred planet has three moons. Its location the midpoint of edge and center of a barred spiral galaxy, which is surprisingly close to the center of the universe, is useful. This advanced system, secretly known as Leatchii'Eechoimi, is stationed at an advantageous point in the galaxy. [spoiler= New Species]Raddracer - This hide-covered avian has an equine head, with luminous, garnet, tortured eyes, which observe you quietly with obvious intelligence. It has a broad muzzle which is shiningly short. It can breathe ice. It has folded, flared, canine ears. Its weak neck is held straight with the vital blood vessels and spinal cord in the back of its neck. Its long torso has innumerable narrow, batlike wings, which are flapping. It can fly up to 190 mph! Its two hind legs are weak and agile. They end in clumsy, dinosaurian hands with curving, deadly claws. It has two tails. One tail is vulpine and fat, and the other is fluffy and feathered. It cannot walk on its hind limbs. It eats bugs and drinks water. It is blind, has an excellent sense of smell, has a sensitive sense of hearing, has an average sense of taste, and has a bad sense of touch. It's somewhat intelligent. It speaks the English language. [spoiler=Form][General Profile]Full Name:Nickname: Race:Age:Gender: Homeworld:Alliance:Rank:Jedi Rank: (Only if Jedi) Height:Weight: Hair Color: Eye Color:Skin Color: ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee:Ranged:Lightsaber Forms: (Only if Jedi) [specializations] [Force Powers] (Only if Jedi)----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: Goals: Interests: History: [spoiler=Race/Species List]http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_sentient_races_and_species [spoiler=Homeworld List]http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_planets [spoiler=Members][spoiler=SirBigC94][General Profile]Full Name: TJ SnipesNickname: Snipes Race: RaddracersAge: 30Gender: MaleHomeworld: Jqir-Egyi XIIAlliance: RaddracensRank: CommanderJedi Rank: None. Height: 6’4”Weight: 175 lbs.Hair Color: BlackEye Color: Baby BlueSkin Color: White ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 9” Long-Range PistolsRanged: Long-Range Laser SniperLightsaber Forms: None. [specializations] [Force Powers] None.----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: Courage, Wise, Calm, Deadly, Menacing, and Strong.Goals: To become the Most Known Commander of the Galaxy.Interests: Military, Women, and Space.History: Been in the Military Service for 15 Years as a Marksman, then got the Title as Commander of the Raddracen Military. He’s been trained for any battle or skirmish possible. [spoiler=Sario Crystal][General Profile]Full Name: Meti Avanz CrystaleNickname: The Captain (Darth Gorre) Race: HumanAge: 18Gender: maleHomeworld: MustafarAlliance: (Begins on the Raddracer side, then gets turned to the Dark Side secretly by the Emporer.)Rank: CaptainJedi Rank: Jedi Guardian (Sith Captain) Height: 5.8'Weight: 130 lbsHair Color: Ask BlackEye Color: Light PurpleSkin Color: Tanish white, (Turns pale when converted to Dark Side) ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 Vibroswords (Only used when he doesn't want people to know he's a jedi)Ranged: Long-Shot Shock Bounty-Hunter Pistol.Lightsaber Forms: Single Blade (Purple.) *Becomes Red when converted to Dark Side) [specializations] [Force Powers]Force SpeedForce HealLightsaber ThrowForce Push (Dark Side)Force StormForce CrushForce ChokeForce Sonic-Boom.----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: calm, very unemotional.Goals: To serve his master until he is ready to become a Jedi Master.Interests: books, training, meditation.History: Meti Crystale is unique as a human when it comes to his homeworld being Mustafar, being a planetary system being controled by the Trade Federation. He had to escape from his own homeworld and land on a planet known as Dantooine, where he found a Jedi Council led by Master Vandar, just as wise and powerful as Master Yoda. There, he trained to become a Jedi under the teachings of Anikan Skywalker. Recently, his old master was turned to the Dark Side as Darth Vader, and now Meti has a new master, known as Master Serac.His training under Master Serac led him to learn many force powers and become stronger in all of them. Now, Meti Crystale has become a captain of the Raddracers Army and is now fighting to keep the species of Raddracers alive as they would be prooven useful in rebuilding the republic against the new Empire. [spoiler=Proto][General Profile]Full Name: Shun IvyNickname: Darth Antius Race: HumanAge: 35Gender: MaleHomeworld: TatoineAlliance: SithRank: Sith LordJedi Rank: (Only if Jedi) Jedi Master(Sith Lord) Height: 5'8Weight: 140Hair Color: BlueEye Color: RedSkin Color: Pale white(turns red) ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 two Energy swordsRanged: long shot pistolLightsaber Forms: (Only if Jedi)Darth Mauls Lightsaber [specializations] [Force Powers] (Only if Jedi)Force ChokeForce LightingChain LightningFroce PushForce Heal----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: Calm, SeriousGoals: To be the ultimate sith to surpass VaderInterests: Training ,Fighting, StudyingHistory: Shun was a unique Jedi much like Anakin. He was found by some jedi and was taken away right after he was born. When training under the jedi he became a jedi master in 20 years. one of the youngest masters ever. He eventaully turned to the dark side training under a mysterious sith. Throughout his training he bacmae strong enough to kill his master and he did. Now he plans on surpassing lord vader and destroying the jedi. [spoiler=FreeMan43][General Profile]Full Name:Jack'al CareswayNickname: Jack Race:Half Human/Half MiralukaAge: 20Gender: FemaleHomeworld:DantooineAlliance: JediRank:Jedi KnightJedi Rank:Knight Height:5'8"Weight: 132Hair Color:BlackEye Color:blueSkin Color:white ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: LightsaberRanged:Lightsaber Forms:Single Blade (blue) [specializations] [Force Powers]Force sightForce HealLightsaber ThrowForce pullBattle meditation ----------------------[Personal Background]Personality:a little inpatient and hasty when comes to tasks but she all ways remembers her training.Goals:to become a master and be on the Jedi councilInterests:Droid repair, historical study.History: As a child she lived her life as a normal sealer on Dantooine would, hunt and farm for food and for prophet. As she got older she started to lose her site and her eyes started to turn light blue. her parents where deeply whored, and ask the Jedi at the enclave what was wrong with her. A Jedi master named Valrent Monkel told them that she was part Miraluka, a force sensitive race that has no concept of normal site but site on another level. How she was part Miraluka is still a mystery to her. But even though of her age Master Valrent saw great potential within her, he showed her to the council on Dantooine and was accepted in as a padawon under Master Valrent at age ten. she spent eight years of her life with Valrent until his assassination. she swore that she would get revenge but yet keep her vow to the Jedi. If you want Custom Stuff like Drinks, Food, Weapons/Weapon Names etc. PM Me and I'll send you a list of Stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 [General Profile]Full Name: Meti Avanz CrystaleNickname: The Captain (Darth Gorre) Race: HumanAge: 18Gender: maleHomeworld: MustafarAlliance: (Begins on the Raddracer side, then gets turned to the Dark Side secretly by the Emporer.)Rank: CaptainJedi Rank: Jedi Guardian (Sith Captain) Height: 5.8'Weight: 130 lbsHair Color: Ask BlackEye Color: Light PurpleSkin Color: Tanish white, (Turns pale when converted to Dark Side) ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 Vibroswords (Only used when he doesn't want people to know he's a jedi)Ranged: Long-Shot Shock Bounty-Hunter Pistol.Lightsaber Forms: Single Blade (Purple.) *Becomes Red when converted to Dark Side) [specializations] [Force Powers] Force SpeedForce HealLightsaber ThrowForce Push (Dark Side)Force StormForce CrushForce ChokeForce Sonic-Boom.----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: calm, very unemotional.Goals: To serve his master until he is ready to become a Jedi Master.Interests: books, training, meditation.History: Meti Crystale is unique as a human when it comes to his homeworld being Mustafar, being a planetary system being controled by the Trade Federation. He had to escape from his own homeworld and land on a planet known as Dantooine, where he found a Jedi Council led by Master Vandar, just as wise and powerful as Master Yoda. There, he trained to become a Jedi under the teachings of Anikan Skywalker. Recently, his old master was turned to the Dark Side as Darth Vader, and now Meti has a new master, known as Master Serac. His training under Master Serac led him to learn many force powers and become stronger in all of them. Now, Meti Crystale has become a captain of the Raddracers Army and is now fighting to keep the species of Raddracers alive as they would be prooven useful in rebuilding the republic against the new Empire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Full Name: Shun IvyNickname: Darth Antius Race: HumanAge: 35Gender: MaleHomeworld: TatoineAlliance: SithRank: Sith LordJedi Rank: (Only if Jedi) Jedi Master(Sith Lord) Height: 5'8Weight: 140Hair Color: BlueEye Color: RedSkin Color: Pale white(turns red) ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 two Energy swordsRanged: long shot pistolLightsaber Forms: (Only if Jedi)Darth Mauls Lightsaber [specializations] [Force Powers] (Only if Jedi)Force ChokeForce Lighting Chain LightningFroce PushForce Heal----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: Calm, SeriousGoals: To be the ultimate sith to surpass VaderInterests: Training ,Fighting, StudyingHistory: Shun was a unique Jedi much like Anakin. He was found by some jedi and was taken away right after he was born. When training under the jedi he became a jedi master in 20 years. one of the youngest masters ever. He eventaully turned to the dark side training under a mysterious sith. Throughout his training he bacmae strong enough to kill his master and he did. Now he plans on surpassing lord vader and destroying the jedi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Fix the Bolded Problems below: Full Name: Shun IvyNickname: Darth Antius Race: HumanAge: 35Gender: MaleHomeworld: TatooineAlliance: SithRank: Sith LordJedi Rank: (Only if Jedi) Jedi Master(Sith Lord) Height: 5'8Weight: 140 lbs.Hair Color: BlueEye Color: RedSkin Color: Pale white(turns red) ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: 2 Blaster Rifles - It asked specifically for a Non-Shooting Weapon.Ranged: long - It asks for a Weapon.Lightsaber Forms: (Only if Jedi)Darth Mauls Lightsaber [specializations] [Force Powers] (Only if Jedi)Force ChokeForce Lighting Chain LightningForce PushForce Heal----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: Calm, SeriousGoals: To be the ultimate Sith to surpass VaderInterests: Training ,Fighting, StudyingHistory: Shun was a unique Jedi much like Anakin. He was found by some Jedi and was taken away right after he was born. When training under the Jedi he became a Jedi master in 20 years. one of the youngest masters ever. He eventually turned to the dark side training under a mysterious Sith. Throughout his training he became strong enough to kill his master and he did. Now he plans on surpassing Lord Vader and destroying the Jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 fixed is it righrt now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Yes. Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 yay thanks how many do we need to begin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 I'll say about 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Full Name:Jack'al CareswayNickname: Jack Race:Half Human/Half MiralukaAge: 20Gender: FemaleHomeworld:DantooineAlliance: Jedi Rank:Jedi KnightJedi Rank:Knight Height:5'8"Weight: 132Hair Color:Black Eye Color:blue Skin Color:white ----------------------[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee: Lightsaber Ranged:Lightsaber Forms:Single Blade (blue) [specializations] [Force Powers] Force sightForce HealLightsaber ThrowForce pull Battle meditation ----------------------[Personal Background]Personality:a little inpatient and hasty when comes to tasks but she all ways remembers her training.Goals:to become a master and be on the Jedi council Interests:Droid repair, historical study.History: As a child she lived her life as a normal sealer on Dantooine would, hunt and farm for food and for prophet. As she got older she started to lose her site and her eyes started to turn light blue. her parents where deeply whored, and ask the Jedi at the enclave what was wrong with her. A Jedi master named Valrent Monkel told them that she was part Miraluka, a force sensitive race that has no concept of normal site but site on another level. How she was part Miraluka is still a mystery to her. But even though of her age Master Valrent saw great potential within her, he showed her to the council on Dantooine and was accepted in as a padawon under Master Valrent at age ten. she spent eight years of her life with Valrent until his assassination. she swore that she would get revenge but yet keep her vow to the Jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 If you must know.. I think should just copy and paste the 2 lists instead of putting up the links.. I have not been able to use any of the links because for some reason my computer will not load them. Just a suggestion... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Can't do it, there's too many. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The Dark Prince Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Full Name:Kai ZoneNickname: NovaRace:HumanAge: 18Gender: MaleHomeworld:AargauAlliance:JediRank:Jedi MasterJedi Rank: Jedi Master Height: 6'2Weight: 223Hair Color: blackEye Color: brownSkin Color: white[Weapons and Powers][Combat Weapons]Melee:Ranged:Lightsaber Forms:[spoiler=Picture] [specializations][Force Powers] Force sightForce HealLightsaber ThrowForce pullBattle meditationForce PushForce Speed[Personal Background]Personality:(Post Later)Goals:None Interests:NoneHistory: (Post Later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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