legendhiro Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 thanxyep. they were good. Have you read mine too? part of it. i'm trying to find the time to catch up completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 bump. sorry for the lack of updates. i've been horribly sick. i've barely been able to keep up with my club, let alone my fic and my card making. but expect the next chapter soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 bump. sorry for the lack of updates. i've been horribly sick. i've barely been able to keep up with my club' date=' let alone my fic and my card making. but expect the next chapter soon.[/quote'] get well soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 thanks. i'm finally over my illness (whatever the hell it was) and i'm hoping to get the next chapter up tonight or early tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 yay, i finally updated!!! [spoiler=Chapter Six] Dark Divine Dragon Tucker The shadow continued to take form, becoming a massive shadowy dragon. It wasn’t long before the dragon began to move. It opened its eyes, swung its head and roared. When it did, the shadows fell away like a shell, revealing a dark dragon with a bronze-colored chest and stomach, broad reddish wings, and protruding spikes covering its back and head. The dragon hung in the air, raising its head to the sky and letting out a fierce, bellowing roar. Then the dragon saw us, and it spoke, “You have great magic children. I will consume it!” The dragon inhaled and the darkness all around it turned to smoke. He sucked the smoke in, and it formed a black orb surrounded by a white aura. The orb discharged in the form of a thick white beam with a black core. The beam washed over us. But to the dragon’s surprise, when the attack ended, we were still alive, protected by a barrier, summoned by a trio of priests in blue robes. Kimi’s Soul of Light was still flashing as she placed her ‘Waboku’ card back into her deck. “It looks,” said Jen, “like it uses magic to turn darkness into something solid, just like John’s Soul of Darkness. Then it inhales the solidified darkness using it to fuel its attack.” I watched as the dragon began sucking in more black smoke. “Well,” I said, “whatever it does, it’s doing it again now. We’d better hit it hard and fast.” My Soul of Fire glowed red. I could tell that ever since we’d approached the dragon we’d been locked into a Shadow Game, so this would probably work. I concentrated and lifted a monster card up above my head. “I summon the very face of my Soul!” A man in blue armor appeared, wearing a vest made of flames and carrying both a staff and a dagger. “Attack him ‘Legendary Flame Lord!” Jen and Kristin held up cards as well, and their Souls flashed. “I summon,” said Kris, “my ‘Emes the Infinity’!” “I summon,” said Jen, “my ‘Ultimate Insect’ in its Level Seven form!” My monster rose into the air alongside Jen’s; a massive beetle. “Use your poison,” Jen commanded, and a cloud of spores spread from her monster’s wings. The dragon fired its attack, dispersing the cloud before it could do any harm. The bean carried through and incinerated Jen’s monster. Jen clutched her chest and fell heavily to her knees. “Jen!” Kristin cried. She dropped to her knees at her sister’s side. “‘Flame Lord’,” I commanded, “attack him now!” My monster summoned a massive fire, dropping it down on the dragon from above. But just before the flames hit, black smoke coalesced ahead of the fire, forming a solid transparent black wall, like a black glass partial sphere. The wall held back the flames, taking absolutely no damage. As my monster’s attack ended, Kris rose to her feet, her eyes filled with a vengeful rage. She pulled another card from her deck, “You won’t get away with hurting my sister. ‘Emes’, attack with ‘Electromagnetic Burst’!” ‘Emes the Infinity’, the four-armed golden mech with the serpentine lower body, and the humanoid torso raised his sword and his staff toward the dragon. Electricity lanced from his sword toward the dragon, but the dragon once again summoned a wall of darkness, protecting itself from harm. “So those shadows can block attacks from Spells as well?” Sarah asked, surprised. “Then I guess we should see what a monster effect can do against it.” Her Soul glowed blue, and a large two-headed silver sea serpent with pink and blue fins appeared with a mighty roar. “I summon the waters of ‘A Legendary Ocean’,” she declared, and a swirling wall of water rose up around her monster. “’Ocean Dragon Lord – Neo Daedalus’, attack with Aqua Eruption!” The water expanded into a massive wave that poured over the dragon, swallowing it up. But when the water receded, the dark dragon was still alive, protected by a complete sphere of shadows. “Well,” I said, my voice dripping sarcasm, “that’s just great.” “It uses darkness,” said Kimi, “then we just have to turn up the lights.” Her Soul flashed, and a blue-skinned angel with golden wings appeared, wearing Hindu-esque garbs. His wings glowed bright, pushing the clouds of darkness away from the dragon. “’Shinato, King of a Higher Plane’,” Kimi commanded, “use Celestial Ring!” A ring of colored orbs appeared, spinning so fast that they seemed to form a solid ring. The ring shot right through the dragon’s weakened shield and cut deep into his chest. The ring disappeared, leaving the dragon with a seemingly fatal wound. The dragon fell heavily to the ground, unmoving, crushing the asphalt beneath him. But almost instantly the darkness poured into the wound, and the dragon rose to his feet, his wounds healed. “’Shinato’,” attack him again!” ‘Shinato’ once again summoned his attack and released it, but this time the dragon slashed with his claws, scattering the orbs, raised his claws, and slashed ‘Shinato’ to ribbons. Kimi coughed blood and collapsed. Both Rocky and John’s mom were instantly at her side. “You can’t kill me,” said the dragon. “I am immortal. I am the ‘Dark Divine Dragon’!” [spoiler=Effect] 1 Fiend-type Tuner + 2 non-Tuner DARK monsters When this card is successfully summoned, remove the top 8 cards of your Deck from the game. The ATK of this card is 800 x the number of DARK monsters removed by this effect for as long as it remains on the field. When this card would be destroyed, you can discard 2 cards from the top of your Deck (or 1 if you only have 1) and it is not destroyed. If the last card in your Deck in discarded by this effect, destroy all other cards on the field. The ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ flapped his wings, rose into the air, and summoned up his attack all in one motion. He released the attack. We didn’t have a chance to react. The attack was going to hit, and we were going to die. John I woke up suddenly and sat up. I pulled the heart monitor probes from my skin and looked around. Karen was passed out on the floor beside my bed. I couldn’t believe that nobody had seen her lying there. That’s why I don’t trust hospitals. I jumped out of my bed and knelt down beside her, lifting her head from the floor. She woke up, looked around, and sat up strait. She looked directly at me and asked, “Do you feel that?” “Yeah,” I said, “that dragon’s here in the real world now.” “The others are fighting it,” Karen said. “We have to hurry and go help them.” “Great plan,” I said, “but remember I didn’t bring my deck.” Karen smiled, showing me the Duel Disk on her arm, “Fortunately I did. I’ll hold that thing off. You go get your cards.” I smiled back and disappeared into the shadows. Tucker An instant before the blast would have hit us, it was deflected by an invisible wall. I turned, just in time to see Monty and Lawrence appear. Lawrence had his ‘Negate Attack’ card raised up above his shoulder. “Sorry we’re late,” said Monty. “What did we miss?” “Light hurts it,” said Jen weakly. “Everything else doesn’t.” “Then let’s light it up,” said Lawrence. “I summon ‘Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon’!” Three of the mighty white dragon’s appeared in the air above Lawrence. There was a flash of light, and the three dragons merged into the mighty three-headed beast, its body shining. “And I,” said Monty, “summon my ‘Silent Magician LV8’!” A sorceress with long white hair wearing white robes fashioned like a dress appeared. She wore a broad white had and carried a wand in hand. She glowed just a bright as the dragon. “You can’t kill me,” said ‘Dark Divine Dragon’. “I won’t let you!” He fired his attack. ‘Blue-Eyes’ fired back with Ultimate Burst. The attacks met. They seemed equal. ‘Silent Magician’ rose into the air, preparing to attack, but the dragon saw her coming. “No!” the dragon growled. He flapped his wings, blowing ‘Blue-Eyes’ off of his feet. The three-headed dragon fell back and was overcome by the ‘Dark Divine Dragon’’s attack. Lawrence gritted his teeth and grabbed his chest, but he remained standing. The dragon turned his attention to ‘Silent Magician’. He launched his attack again, engulfing her, but instead of dying the sorceress began to change. He want grew into a staff, and she grew more beautiful. Her aura flared and she brandished her staff, dispersing the dragon’s attack. “Level up,” said Monty, “to ‘Silent Magician LV12’!” The sorceress raised her staff, but the dragon was ready. Before his opponent could attack, he slashed her with his left claws. The sorceress raised her staff, holding the claws back, but leaving her torso exposed. The ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ stabbed strait through the sorceress’ chest with his free claws. Monty’s monster disappeared, and her master fell unconscious and collapsed. The dragon attacked. I didn’t know what to do. I called my sorcerer to defend. Sarah and Kris did the same with ‘Daedalus’ and ‘Emes the Infinity’. But the attack was blocked again by a spherical barrier that surrounded our entire group, monsters and all. I turned toward my friends to see who had saved us, and I saw that John’s mom had her ‘Hallowed Life Barrier’ card in hand. She wore a Shadow Pendant around her neck. It was still glowing. I was wondering where she’d gotten a Shadow Item when I saw Monty checking his pocket. I didn’t know what it meant at the time, and decided to ignore the issue for the time being. The dragon roared and cried out in frustration, “I will KILL YOU ALL!!!” The force of his explosive outburst sent a wave of darkness out in every direction, destroying our remaining monsters and knocking us off of our feet. ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ summoned up a larger attack than ever before. I thought that this we were dead for sure. Then, just before the dragon fired, a giant kangaroo with the face of a koala, wearing a vest and boxing gloves and carrying a Heavyweight Boxing Championship belt over his shoulder jumped down from atop a nearby building and punched the dragon in the jaw. The dragon reeled from the impact, and he lost the energy from his attack. “Miss me guys?” Karen asked, stepping out of the shadows nearby, her ‘Master of Oz’ card in hand. I couldn’t help but smile. John I stepped out of the shadows and into my room. I grabbed my deck, turned, and disappeared. Tucker “’Master of Oz’,” Karen commanded, “Dynamite Uppercut!” The massive monster jumped up and pummeled the dragon in the face. Despite the size of Karen’s monster, its attack had little effect. As the oversized Koala/Kangaroo hung in the air, the dragon attacked, destroying it with one blast. Karen yelped, but she managed to choke back the pain. “You have nothing left,” the ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ said. “Your will to fight is gone!” And he was right. I was out of ideas, and I could feel that the same was true of everyone else as well. The dragon inhaled, preparing to launch his attack. But before the orb was even half formed, a voice from behind the dragon’s head interrupted him, “I don’t mean to sound clichéd, but maybe you’d rather mess with someone your size?” The dragon turned toward the source of the voice, and over his shoulder I saw him. He was wearing a black t shirt, faded jeans, and an old and tattered black jacket. His arms were crossed, and he was standing aback a mechanical red dragon, a confident look on his face. As soon as I saw him I knew that we’d make it out of this battle alive. After all, things always seem to work out once John arrives. John It may look different, I thought, but it’s definitely the same dragon that Karen and I fought within my mind. I can feel the evil that makes up its body, and I can hear its evil intensions echoing in the darkness. If I don’t kill it now, it will destroy everything. “Who are you?” the dragon demanded, his harsh voice echoing in the shadows. I smiled, “I’m the one who’s gonna kill you.” The dragon snarled, “Not if I kill you first!” The dragon prepared to fire his beam. I brandished two cards, and ‘Fiend Megacyber’ appeared at my side, wreathed in the yellow aura of ‘Assault Armor’. The dragon fired its attack. ‘The Field Megacyber’ and the ‘Y – Dragon Head’ that was my mount slid to the side, avoiding the blast. ‘Y – Dragon Head’ fell back away from the dragon and fired a yellow energy pulse from its mouth, while ‘Fiend Megacyber’ shot toward the dragon, punching the dragon with all of his strength. Neither attack had any real effect. ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ slashed at my warrior, but hit only air. I returned my ‘Interdimensional Matter Transporter’ card to my deck as my warrior reappeared in the air at my side. The dragon fired his attack at us, but I held up another card, ‘Dark Core’. My Soul flashed and a small black hole appeared ahead of me, just long enough to swallow up the oncoming attack. “This ends now,” I declared. I held up six more cards, and the world around me began to shake. Three pillars of light burst up from the ground, and from them emerged the massive blue winged humanoid God ‘Obelisk the Tormentor’, flexing his massive arms, the golden armored eagle ‘The Winged Dragon of Ra’, and the many-football-fields-long red serpentine dragon ‘Sky Dragon of Osiris’, growling through both his upper and lower mouths. Above the three Gods a massive black cloud formed. From the cloud descended three dragons; one black with spines down its back, the ‘Fang of Critias’, one red with spikes down its back, the ‘Claw of Hermos’, and one teal with a scar over its right eye, the ‘Eye of Timaeus’. [spoiler=Click to View] The ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ laughed loudly, “So you command Gods. But not even these creatures can defeat me in the darkness. I am the darkness!” He inhaled and fired his attack directly at me. ‘Obelisk’ moved between me and the dragon, raising his arm and deflecting the attack his great effort. All three of the Gods then rose up to attack the dragon. The dragon roared, and a pulse of dark energy threw the three massive Gods to the ground where they smashed roads and buildings under their tremendous weight. “I cast,” I called, “the Spell ‘Legend of Heart’.” I held up another card, and my ‘Fiend Megacyber’ became three orbs of light that sunk into the backs of the three Legendary Dragons. Their bodies began to glow. There was a flash, and in their places appeared three knights, one in black armor, one in red armor, and one in teal armor. The three knights raised their swords up over their heads and they shone with an intense light that caused the dragon to shrink away. He snarled, “What is this!?” [spoiler=Click to View] The light flashed brighter, so much so that I had to turn away. When the light faded, the three knights had become one, a mighty golden-armored knight with a powerful sword. I answered the dragon’s question, “That is the light that will destroy you.” As I spoke the three Gods rose back up into the air. “Now ‘Osiris’, ‘Ra’,” I commanded, “give your power to ‘Obelisk’!” ‘Osiris’ roared, and he and ‘Ra’ became energy, pouring into the hands of the third God. ‘Obelisk’ roared at the sky, his body glowing red. “Now my golden ‘Knight of Destiny’,” I continued, “activate your hidden ability of unity. Merge with the God of the Obelisk!” Sensing the danger that he faced, the ‘Dark Divine Dragon’ cried out and fired his attack at ‘Obelisk’. It hit just as the ‘Knight of Destiny’ reached the God. The attack ended, and there ‘Obelisk’ remained, glowing gold. “But I’m not done,” I said. “Merging two infinite powers isn’t quite enough for what I want to do. Dragon, I know that you can regenerate, so I plan to destroy you so completely that there’s no doubt that you’ll remain dead. “’Obelisk’,” I commanded, “give your power to the shadows!” I watched as ‘Obelisk’ broke down into black smoke that merged with the dark cloud overhead. “Now emerge from the darkness,” I declared, “the manifestation of my Soul, the Ultimate Demon, ‘Great Maju Garzett’!” The clouds crackled with red lightning and reformed, taking on the shape of a massive skeletal torso that filled the entire sky. “My demon,” I explained, “absorbed the power of two infinite attacks. He always has power equal to twice the power that he absorbed, giving him power equal to four times infinity!” “A power like that cannot exist!” the dragon exclaimed as he stared into my demon’s fierce red eyes, fear in his voice. “You’re right,” I said, “it can’t. At least not for long. But trust me, it’ll last long enough to kill you.” As I spoke my demon reached out, engulfing the dragon in his dark light. Then suddenly he broke apart, and the sky cleared. The sun was just creeping up over the horizon. The dragon was nowhere to be seen. I could sense that he had been destroyed. My ‘Y – Dragon Head’ flew low to the ground. I jumped down from its back, and it disappeared. I looked around at my friends. I could tell that they expected me to say something, so I yawned and said, “Well, I’m beat. I’m gonna go home and get some sleep.” [spoiler=Card of the Day] End Special #2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 NIce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 It took you long enough to update. I think this is my first comment on this special so for once it will be rather more detailed than normal Chapter 1- Very good opening chapter for a specialChapter 2 - Another very good chapter Chapter 3 - A brilliant chapterChapter 4 - Same as aboveChapter 5 - Even better than the last twoChapter 6 - A magnificent way to end the special There you go a detailed comment without much detail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 thanks. i appreciate the feedback. hiatus begins now until i've posted ten more chapters in my other fic, but once that's done, i'll finish up the Duel Force arch with Book Six. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 thanks. i appreciate the feedback. hiatus begins now until i've posted ten more chapters in my other fic' date=' but once that's done, i'll finish up the Duel Force arch with Book Six.[/quote'] How many books are you going to write? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 the last one that will focus on the duel force will be six. after that i plan to write four more; one that focuses on the first years of duel academy, one that focuses on the duelists elite, and two that take place in the future and feature a new team. the duel academy and duelists elite books will feature some of the characters from duel force, but the last two will most likely not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 the last one that will focus on the duel force will be six. after that i plan to write four more; one that focuses on the first years of duel academy' date=' one that focuses on the duelists elite, and two that take place in the future and feature a new team. the duel academy and duelists elite books will feature some of the characters from duel force, but the last two will most likely not.[/quote'] Sounds good. I've got great expectations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Nice plans Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 I don't want this to be forgotten, so does hiro, so, everybody bump Ba-bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 c'mo start Bumping!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 When is the new book going to start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Is there a chapter that isn't great? I enjoy reading your duels. Very imaginative. I for one used to run Great Maju Garzett (sp?) in my DD Deck. (Not that I play anymore, but still.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 When is the new book going to start? after i write a few more chapters in my other fic. its a digimon fic' date=' but if you like digimon at all, you could always check that one out until i start this one up again.[hr']Is there a chapter that isn't great? I enjoy reading your duels. Very imaginative. I for one used to run Great Maju Garzett (sp?) in my DD Deck. (Not that I play anymore' date=' but still.)[/quote'] thanks. i've read your fic, so i know that you calling mine good is a big deal. great maju does seem to fit best into DD decks doesn't he? wonder why... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 You once promised me there would be a Final Countdown Deck. When is it going to happen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 it'll be awhile, but it'll be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 *sniff*Is it going to be in the next book? Will it be played by one of the more important bad guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 it won't be until a later series actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 it won't be until a later series actually. awww...I tought Rocky was going to use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 i don't really want a main character to use stall, but its actually rocky who has to FACE it. interesting, right? a defensive player having to beat a stall deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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