~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 I'm sorry I didn't understand the story. Will fix my app later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 [spoiler]Full Name: Rokujo Miharu Height: 6' 9" Weight: 110 lb. Skin Colour: Pale White Hair Colour: Silky Dark Black Eye Colour: Dark Black Birthdate: Feb. 13, 1 AFC [spoiler=Self Portrait: (Optional, not needed if you have a written appearance)] http://sabakunoshi.deviantart.com/art/Great-boy-93489619 [/spoiler] Personality: Rokujo is a very Quite, and Mysterious boy, although, he also has a Cruel personality as well, that comes very rarely. Rokujo's life affected his future, which later came into action, as he was outcasted by people that hated him, or just didn't like him. When ever somebody goes by him, they tend to run away when they are behind him. When ever he sees someone who harasses another,, he thinks that the harasser is weak themselves, despite his hate for fighting. Quirks: Isolated and hates publicity. Kinda what Supreme Gamemaster's character has. [spoiler=History:] Since birth, he had always to live by himself, because his parents did not wish for a boy to be born, they wished for a girl. When Rokujo came into birth, they abonded him, to live on himself. When Rokujo was at the age of 6, Rokujo has been getting into fights that have not been his fault, and always got into trouble because of it. Later, Rokujo was at the age of 15, which then, he was forced into fights, because of his personality, which there was alot of harrasing around his areas where he lived. Then, Rokujo developed his Cruel personality because of the fighting all because of his personality. Rokujo sometimes wishes that he can change his ways, but it isn't ment to be. Soon, Rokujo became an adult, which he tend to fight very seldom, because he was lately feared among his parts, which he enjoyed, but, there was still harassing going on, so he is forced to fight, despite his hate for fighting. Rokujo could easily walk up to somebody, adn the would probably run at an instint, but otherwise, they were either gang members who fear nothing, unless the leader was beaten easily, or that they carried weapons so they can kill somebody easily. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Audition:] Rokujo walked down the deserted corridor, with no life forms in sight, only him and the air he breathed. Rokujo then made a turn at the end of the corridor, and saw a gang of thugs, harassing a female. "[i]Those...barbaric idiots![/i]" Rokujo though in his mind, because he didn't want to give himself away, otherwise, the would gang up on him, and beat him brutaly. Rokujo then walked towards the gang leader, who just made a glance at Rokujo, and then saw a fist headed towards his face. Rokujo knocked the man to his feet, and then looked at him in cold blood, allowing the girl to escape, but she did not budge. "Hey! Get out of here now, while you still can." Rokujo commanded the girl who was frightened by Rokujo's bravery towards the gang. The girl then ran as fast as she could into a light corridor on the other side of the room, and the gand leader got up, and told him, "Do you know who are messing with? We are the Black Cobras! We are the most feared in these parts." Rokujo then said in cold-blood, which indicated murderous intent coming from him, "Well, there is someone who iis even worse than you." Rokujo dashed toward the gang leader, kicking his face, which then knocked him to the floor, and Rokujo came with him, landing a punch on the face of the man. Rokujo then landed some more punches to the leader, which couldn't react because he was getting hit in the face, and the followers couldn't react because the were to scared of Rokujo that they might get beaten up by him too. Soon, the followers left the area, leaving the leader all by himself, and reactionless to Rokujo's fists landing on his face. Soon, Rokujo made so many fist connections that blood was coming from the gang leader, and splattered onto Rokujo's face and fists. Rokujo got up, letting hte dark-red blood from his fists drip onto the floor, and the blood on his face, staying in place, as if they were frozen by time. Rokujo then walked away from the area, leaving the leader by himself. [/spoiler][/spoiler] Here is my entry form, however, I'm not quite sure if I have the date right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 That's not a biography. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Well, then I don't know what to put for the History. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 History is basically the Biography of your character. Your character's FULL biography, not what he can do and what he does. Also, YOU NEED QUIRKS, and your Personality is WAAAAAAAAY too short. Read everything that you need in the form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Okay, I edited, how is it NOW? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Change the date. If he was been born in 1 BFC, then he would be dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Okay, edited to 1 AFC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Accepted. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 YES!! Finally!Speaking of AFC, it reminds me of KFC, so I'm hungry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Hope it's good now, DiZ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Still needs quirks. What blasters? In 2 AFC? There WERE no big corporations in 2 AFC, the humans were getting their bearings on that planet for the first six years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 2 AFC is just his birthadate, the event occured a few years ago. Anyway, edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 @Audition: Los Angeles? Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Dammit! What's the city's name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 No. I mean, what Los Angeles? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Sorry, forgot to edit that part. But, what is the capital's name on Chaa Ball (human side)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 There isn't really any capitals. There's just one big human colony. Which is nameless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Ah, ok. Am I accepted, btw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Okay. Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 So, when do we start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Have you asked that question before with RP owners? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Does it matter? Yes I have, and so what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Does it matter? Yes I have' date=' and so what?[/quote'] Because if you had asked that question before, then you would already know the answer. Of course, when there were enough members. OH, I just spoiled everything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Okay. Accepted. YAAAAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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