Davok Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [spoiler=The Story]It is the year 20 AFC, twenty years after the First Cataclysm, an event created by both nature, Humans and a hominid sub species organization known as the New World Order. The NWO was an organization that slowly stood behind the scenes, leading events to transpire until they are able to conquer the Earth and their secret enemies, the homo sapiens. Operating in the Crust Base called Terra Firma, the New World Order finally was prepared for their invasion. After events manipulated by NWO agents; North America, Asia and Europe were drawn into a full on nuclear war decimating dozens of countries and killing off three billion by the end of the war in 2082. By the end of the Great Nuclear War, superpowers such as the United States, Canada, Russia, China, Japan and Britain were virtually wiped out with nuclear waste killing off survivors. It was time for the New World Order to strike. Sending several squadrons of shock troops to terminate any surviving military threats, the armies of the New World Order marched from Terra Firma and began to set about conquering the Earth, with little to no resistance. Hastily, the surviving nations formed a section of Human armies consisting of martyrs, tanks, surviving batches of nuclear warheads, and crude inexperienced soldiers. This was proclaimed the United Protectors Of the World, or the UPOW. After several victories and many defeats, the UPOW army regrouped in Cairo where they plan to make their last stand with a new superweapon at their disposal, a crude combination of a nuclear warhead, atomic and hydrogen bombs. Designed by UPOW scientists along with stolen NWO technology, they created HOMOCIDE (Hydrogen Oxygen Missile designed for Oxygenic Cancellation and Inhibition and Decimation of Enemy) With the HOMOCIDE missile, the UPOW troops hoped to wipe out every single inch of the NWO army. Unfortunately, it proved to be far, far more successful than planned. The resulting explosion not only wiped out the New World Order armies but also decimated the entire oxygen and atmosphere of the Earth. Fortunately, for every Vice there is a Virtue. Beyond Sol, lies the system of Zeta Reticuli. The Ǽrcharians, the dominant and most advanced race of the system, nicknamed “Observers” had taken upon themselves to observe and protect the systems around them from their former enemies: the Ændæk. After a great war between the Ǽrcharians and the Ændæk, the Ændæk General Mnzi’ll Œntaezm and the rest of the Ændæk army dispersed into separate systems. Eventually over the years the Ǽrcharians managed to hunt down and defeat the Ændæk armies across the solar systems. Finally, in the Alpha Centauri system they tracked down General Mnzi’ll. After a heated space battle and the destruction of the last of the Ændæk army, Mnzi’ll escaped and crash landing on Earth in the Sol system, where Mnzi’ll allies himself with the New World Order and helped them by giving them the power of Ændæk technology. After seeing the destruction of Earth, the Ǽrcharians assumed Mnzi’ll as dead and quickly brought some of the surviving humans aboard their mothership, where they questioned the humans about their experiences with Mnzi’ll. Seeing that they know nothing, they deposited the humans on a small forest moon of the former Ændæk planet of Zønzert known as Chaa Ball. Meeting up with a race of bipedal sentients, called Ballians, they allied with them after slowly learning their language and using Ændæk equipment left on the planet to make their own technological advancements. But soon the human and Ballian clans were having battles of supremacy over the planet, to control tracks of land and forests to simply a place to drink. Soon diplomacy succeeded and a treaty was formed known as the Chaa Ball Line, a line that goes around in the center of the planet that separates the sides of the planets as the human and Ballian territories. Finally, after twenty years the human race managed with the help of salvaged Ændæk technologies to construct their own starships and have a select group of beta pilots to explore the different sectors of the solar system, ally and trade technologies with other sentient races and bring back the Legacy of Earth. Thus, the starship has been aptly named the Legacy. Form:Full Name: Height: Weight: Skin Colour: Hair Colour: Eye Colour: Birthdate: (Datelines are BFC and AFC) Written Appearance: (Optional, not needed if you have image) Self Portrait: (Optional, not needed if you have a written appearance) Personality: Quirks: (Physical deficiencies in your character) History: (The history and biography of your character. Must be at LEAST three paragraphs long.) Audition: (Act out a Role Playing scene from your character's past. Must be descriptive and at least three paragraphs.) [/spoiler] So... enjoy! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Prince Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Full Name: James JunNickname: NovaHeight: 5'10Weight: 168Skin Colour: (in the pic)Hair Colour:(in the pic)Eye Colour:(in the pic)Birthdate:February 1 ACF Written Appearance: Self Portrait: Personality: Nice, Smart , Helpful Quirks: (Physical deficiencies in your character)(post later)History: (The history and biography of your character. Must be at LEAST three paragraphs long.)(post later)Audition: (Act out a Role Playing scene from your character's past. Must be descriptive and at least three paragraphs.)(post later) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 If your going to post all the important stuff LATER, then just don't post the application at all. Besides auditions. Those are the ONLY exception. I doubt you even read the plot. ACCESS DENIED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 "Nice, smart, helpful"? That's not a personality. Full Name: Kira DiarkosHeight: 5' 6"Weight: 121 lbsSkin Colour: CaucasianHair Colour: Light tealEye Colour: A fiery amberBirthdate: 3 AFC (exact date unknown)Self Portrait: Image © kathy100Her ship, image © Schess81Personality: Quiet and very meek. She's very awkward with people due to mental disorders, but is wickedly smart and very inventive if left to her own devices. Is very rarely, if ever, sentimental, and almost always places efficiency before sentimentality. Almost paranoid in relationships.Quirks: This and mildly this. Not exactly physical, but there you go.History:All her life, Kira was outcast. Ridiculed for her poor social skills for as long as she could remember, her abusive parents, strict educators, and immature, bullying classmates didn't help. She had virtually no success finding a job, and every remark made against her left its mark. Overall, her life was a misery.However, she managed to pick up a few hobbies. She dabbled in chess, and excelled at card games. She trained with her father's blaster in her spare time as well, and came to be fairly efficient with weaponry.She had to use that efficiency one day, when her father attempted to strangle her in a drug-induced stupor. She was charged with murder and sent to a high-security prison. However, she was quickly able to escape, and her skills with the hijacked security ship she escaped on reached the Ǽrcharians, who surrounded and captured her. We join her as their armed and dangerous prisoner.Audition: Scenario pl0x? I'm brain-fried after all that work. Brownie Points to those who can solve for the root of Diarkos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Full Name: Jack DonatHeight: 6’ 0”Weight:185 lbsSkin Colour: Tanned WhiteHair Colour: Greyish-BrownEye Colour: MahoganyBirthdate: BFC 05 Self Portrait: Personality:He’s fairly intelligent, but can easily think himself into a hole by accident, and often attempts to overthink things. He’s really a kind and even pacifistic person, but when he gets going he ignores his surroundings completely, often leading to mass amounts of wanton destruction. Quirks: He has poor vision and aim. Also, he panics under stress. In combination with his pessimistic tendency to take the world for worse than it really is, this can lead to bad situations in the war room. History: His parents were great war heroes of humanity, serving boldly to defend their race in both the Great Nuclear and UPOW wars. However, they seemed cruel and sadistic to young Jack. They left him on the streets as an orphan early in his life, as they had no time to raise him. Five years later, a Resistance member recognized him for his parents and drafted into a human resistance camp. He then spent his miserable teenage years in boot camp. At age 17, he was assigned as a refugee escort. Once, as he was setting up camp, he and his company saw a bright light and immediately evacuated. That was the last time they ever visited Dearth. Eventually, as the humans made more advances in space flight at Chaa Ball, he was assigned to the Legacy as a security guard as a promotion for reporting the light. Audition: post latter. ok edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 @Supreme Gamemaster: Um.... you do realize that the Legacy is in the current century the only human starship built yet? It was designed as a beta for other starships, and for humans to establish diplomatic relations with other races in the galaxy. So there aren't any security ships yet. @freeman43: Fix your grammar, make a biography that actually makes sense, and the birthdate. Seriously, 5 BFC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 sorry for the grammer i thougth it made sence... and 5 BCF 5 years befour the First Cataclysm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 O.O What, even if it isn't capable of FTL travel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 hes twanty five. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 O.O What' date=' even if it isn't capable of FTL travel?[/quote'] It has been well established that the Legacy is the first human made starship. The Chaa Ball humans don't even have space stations or atmospheric shuttles. Mostly because they had been working on the Legacy for ten whole years, and hadn't worked on any of those technologies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 ok i edited it so am i accepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Obviously not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 WHY? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 WHY? Read the plot. ALL of it. After that, look at your Birthdate and re-read your Bio. Veeeeery closely. It is then that you shall find the answer that you seek. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 hes 25 what year should i put it in then? and is it because my parents where on both wars? if not then point it out for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 hes 25 what year should i put it in then? and is it because my parents where on both wars? if not then point it out for me. It's impossible for your character to have been in boot camp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 it was a human resistance training camphence boot camp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 it was a human resistance training camphence boot camp. It is impossible for your character to have been in a human resistance camp, or ANY camp on Earth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Aaaaaand a 1, and a 2, and a 3... BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Madness? THIS IS BUMPTA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Why do you wanna BUMP me? Why do you wanna make me BUMP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Little girl don't BUMP a word, mummy's gonna BUMP you a Mockingbird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 [spoiler=Zeo M. Shinoda]Full Name: Zeo M. ShinodaHeight: 6 feet 7 inchesWeight: 180 poundsSkin Colour: CaucassianHair Colour: BrownEye Colour: BrownBirthdate: 24th May, 2 AFCSelf Portrait: Truancy- Tak by =na-insoo, deviantArtPersonality: A friendly person, likes socialising with people. He knows to be smart when needed, and always puts friends in the first place. Hates his father, and lives for the day to encounter and eliminate him. His thinkings are very strategic in every situation.Quirks: He has mild thisHistory: Zeo was born as a son to Mike and Layla Shinoda. His father ran a company, and his mother was a housewife. Zeo was the only kid, and was tortured by his father the whole life. Nearly four years ago, his mother was killed by his father, and that's the reason why Zeo left to live on the streets. Then he acknowledged that his father's goal is to become the only surviving Shinoda.He was hunted by his father's partners, and hid all around Chaa Ball. He never complained, even had some friends around in every bigger city. One day, however, he was tracked down and found. By his own father. His skills in handling a knife and a gun saved him.Injured, he moved to a shack out of the town, where he is recovering, and planning to join the Legacy. He fears, however, if his father finds him. He'd be dead meat then.Audition: They found him, and he knew it. He knew it the first time he saw a masked man in the alley around the corner. Zeo was tracked down. He walked through that dark part of the colony, hoping to escape. At the end of that alley enclosed by tall buildings, there was a man standing. He was tall, with a black fedora hat and a long coat reaching his ankles. His figure looked familiar. The man drew his gun, and pointed it at Zeo. "That is it. I'm dead" thought Zeo. Then he heared words from which he realized why was the figure familiar. "Good evening, son." said the man. Zeo sighed, drew a knife and his own gun, and was ready to kill the monster. That man was his father.Zeo predicted the time his father would shoot, and rolled forward. While he stood up, his father shot another bullet, missing him for an inch. This got Zeo mad, and he threw his knife towards his father. The old one was unable to dodge it, and the knife hurt his left arm. In this, Zeo saw a chance. The boy rushed towards his father, pounded him down, and aimed his gun at his father's forehead. "It's over... Mike." were the only words he spoke.When he got ready to pull the trigger, Mike Shinoda made an unpleasant move. He lifted his gun, and quickly shot Zeo in his shoulder. The one he was holding his own gun with. Suddenly, they heared a helicopter come. Roped ladders fell down, and Mike grabbed them one handedly. "Not yet... Zeo" said he, and the chopper flew off, leaving Zeo stand in the dark, alive. Giving him another chance to kill his once beloved father. I tried hard on the app. I know I am not so experienced, but... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Errors detected: Birthdate: AFC? New World Order in AFC? The Earth wasn't AROUND then. And you need quirks. Also, your character's dad can't be apart of the NWO because then he wouldn't be human. The NWO aren't humans, just a sub species of hominid. There was no California after the Great Nuclear War, and your personality and audition aren't nearly long enough. Also, I doubt you read the entire story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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