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My First Poke splices


ShadowGX

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The purple barely works on the first splice. I mean I personally think it doesn't, but I can see how some people would be ok with it. The first problem with the whole puple thing is that the purple on the body isn't perfect, it is suppose to be an ice texture, and the purple you're using isn't quite ice. I also dont' like the white blotch on the head. The arms though are much darker than the body, because they are made of steal, a combination that doesn't work well, doesn't allow the splice to flow together.

 

The eyes, the white rock, and the feet all seem very weird. It's mainly how they are shaded and all, doesn't look very good. The eyes in general don't look that dandy either.

 

The next guy is kind of ugly in my opinion. Firstly the mouth seems all wrong. It doesn't look natural or anything. The eyes are off too, they don't seem right. The body looks pretty rock like, but the arms look very metal, bad texture clash. The borders on the rocks on the back is off, why are they red, shouldn't they be gray like the other ones. The right arm is lighter than the left, which doesn't look right. Also i need to say, the yellow is pretty ugly, try a different shade of it, or ditch it all together.

 

The lastly one isn't too bad, except the colors really. I don't like the red type dark border, doesn't match at all. The colors make it look almost like a 2nd gen sprite too, which is a sham. The wings, you need to work on the shading and placement. A simple flip and mirror won't make a good splice. There are a ton of pixels that seem misplace too all over. The tail needs a lot of work also.

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