-DG- Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Main Plot: A Japanese amateur duelist found a hidden pyramid in the sea just outside of Japan. What he found was an extrordinary Card that would change dueling forever. [spoiler=Ch. 1 (Intro)]Merik Hihgahsouh, an amateur deulist at the age of 18, was fishing one milld, cloudy day. All of a sudden, a huge maelstrom appeared in front of his boat. Merik: Holy sheet, what's going onnnnnnnnn!!!!! Merik was sucked down to an ancient temple. He stepped out of his boat and up the long, seemingly endless staircase. He stepped up to a huge, golden pillar with the description," Entity Of Oceans" above it. There in the middle of the giant pillar was a card of stone.[spoiler=The Card] Merik: What the hell?.. I've never seen a card like this before.. I wonder what it says. Merik had no idea of how to get out, and all of a sudden, Merik was shot up to the shore. Announcer: What is this strange stone card that Merik has found? Find out in Ch. 2. [spoiler=The card's revealed form(CH. 2 spoiler)][/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senron Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 It has potential buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut you need to make the chapters a little longer and you need to add descriptions and details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Yeah. This is just the intro. The real chapters will be much longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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