harhar Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Well I improved my skill I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Wow! Those are good. 9/10 Also you have improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Wow! Those are good. 9/10 Also you have improved. Thanks for rating but, how do you know I improved you haven't seen my old work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Nice, do you use PhotoShop? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Nice' date=' do you use PhotoShop?[/quote'] No I use MS Paint.Yeah I use PS ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Whats MS Paint? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Whats MS Paint? Your mom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 [align=center]Well I improved my skill I think. Well the Cinema 4 Dynamic is really off. The smudging on the focal is kind of "Bad". Remove the lightning on the focal and give it some brightness & contrast for Depth. Seems really over-sharpened. The text is lazy & basic' date=' you need to get over it like now. Never just drop a Cinema 4 Dynamic & go "Yeah that's cool" you need to give it some effects. [img']http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn144/hariz012/lust.png[/img] It looks like a recolored stock. I think you just added a few things with the text on the left. Where are the effects? Depth? Flow? hmm? Well you need to work on that. The selected colors are just destructive. I know it's hard to choose the right color but you'll get into it soon. You washed away the focal. You need to add depth, major depth. The flow is messed up. Also the normal text T_T. You need to be creative with the text. Same as the above post. Background? Please? The smudging is "meh" not bad but overall it's a bit too plain. Depth? Flow? Better text? Look at above the above. look at above. Not bad. You need depth and try to blur the not important parts. Look at above, above the above. xD [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Additions to Kox' comments: 1. Kox pretty much summed it up 2. (Depending on whether it was just a recolored stock or not, doesn't seem to much like it) Distortions on left are inconsistent in pattern, but are way too sharp for a liquid effect. On right, the lines seem a little random since they can't connect to a fading shapeP.S: Mind sharing source? I've got an idea I want to try with this 3. Agree with Kox, though some of the colors can go together 4. Some of the effects going over her look pretty bad 5. Shapes are a little too jagged 6. Don't do monotone 7. Effects seemed to be drowned out in the blur 8. Meh 9. Some spots are way too sharp 10. Agree with Kox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 I love the last one Haris, hope to see more work from you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Lol,Kox and problematica your post's where like getting kicked in the nuts but thanks for commenting and I will look into what you guys said thank you ^-^ I love the last one Haris' date=' hope to see more work from you Smile[/quote']Thanks Legacy I will post more ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Great! Next time, add your name somewhere. Just wo we know that you didn't rip. (Not accusing you) Love #4 the best! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Great! Next time' date=' add your name somewhere. Just wo we know that you didn't rip. (Not accusing you) Love #4 the best![/quote'] Lol does Kox add his name somewhere ;)Thank you for commenting ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Great! Next time' date=' add your name somewhere. Just wo we know that you didn't rip. (Not accusing you) Love #4 the best![/quote'] Lol does Kox add his name somewhere ;)Thank you for commenting ^-^ You got me there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Whoa! They are great! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Whoa! They are great! ^_^ Thanks ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Awesome i lke the last one pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Awesome i lke the last one pretty good. Lol thanks for commenting ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Great! Next time' date=' add your name somewhere. Just wo we know that you didn't rip. (Not accusing you) Love #4 the best![/quote'] Lol does Kox add his name somewhere ;)Thank you for commenting ^-^ I don't because Rippers get OWNED, PWNT, BANNED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Great! Next time' date=' add your name somewhere. Just wo we know that you didn't rip. (Not accusing you) Love #4 the best![/quote'] Lol does Kox add his name somewhere ;)Thank you for commenting ^-^ I don't because Rippers get OWNED, PWNT, BANNEDI don't because The words of a true hero :cry: (tears of joy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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