Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 [spoiler=Plot]The Galactic Federation of Free Alliances was at its height. The New Jedi Order and Federation Internal Defense Corps watched the galaxy with vigilant eyes, and though bandit activity was common, and Sith followers struck with greater ferocity than ever, civilian life was in an economic boom, and the peacekeepers held off their foes with relative ease. Then came the bad news. Observatories on the outer-rim colony of Dadnaan VI had detected a tremendous disturbance oncoming. Closer examination revealed the horrible truth: that another galaxy would crash into theirs in a mere three hundred eighty days, causing a massive explosion that would annihilate every world in each. Cade Skywalker, the lead Jedi Master of the New Order, has developed a daring plan. Massive starships called Saviors, each one roughly the size of a Super Star Destroyer, are to be built on every planet. The Saviors will be stocked with rations, maintenance, and replicators suitable for an entire millennium of constant travel. They would be comfortable and accommodating, using the Force along with cautious miniaturization technologies to create cities within starships. These Saviors would travel with advanced Hyperspace engines in hopes of stumbling across another galaxy within a thousand years. And it's possible, too — or at least it would be if it weren't for the Sith. Korriban is long abandoned, but the desolate Jura has been turned into an advanced Sith fortress. Darth Anarthemol, successor of Darth Sidious, is ready to launch his mighty onslaught of Sith starfighters, but even for him, there is a problem: his protégé, Darth Apokal, has defected to join the Jedi. In this battle to save the galaxy, the Sith Order could be left behind forever, and everyone, Force-sensitive or not, will play a vital part. [spoiler=Application]Use this, BUT only post the General Profile, Quirks, and Personal Background sections. PM the whole sheet to me.Also, you can to use the other generator to create a starship. For that, only post the General Profile section in the same post as your character, but PM everything to me. You can also just say an existing starship model and I'll PM you the specs, asking if it's OK.Upgrade your character/ship to Rank 5! They should say what is possible for them to do, not what they already can. [spoiler=Accepted Characters]Controller: Supreme Gamesmaster[General Profile]Full Name: Zeva'ar KavruonNickname: Darth Apokal{{Despite renouncing the Sith ways, Zeva'ar keeps the name Darth Apokal, possibly as an effort to prove redemption in life true, or to restore the original meaning of the title, "Overlord".}}Race: Ajatar{{The Ajatar are a sentient species capable of turning their bodies into shadow. They nearly killed each other off on Jura, and the Sith under Darth Anarthemov massacred the last remaining colony while kidnapping Apokal.}}Age: 19Gender: maleHomeworld: JuraHeight: 6' 4"Weight: 82.27 kgsHair Color: BlackEye Color: RedSkin Color: CaucasianForce Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: SentinelCharacter Rank: 5Affiliation: Jedi[Personal Background]Personality: Once, he tried to be evil, but somehow knew that it was somehow wrong to slight others for his own gain. Now, he's a cunning, quick-thinking, impatient, and straight-to-the-point strategist who never holds back without a very good reason. He doesn't have much fun, which is probably either a remnant of his upbringing or a characteristic of his race, and often spends long whiles in pensive thought.Goals: To assist the Jedi in saving the universe, and determine his own sense of good and evil.Interests: He pretty much lost all his interests when he reverted. I guess you could say he's interested in finding interests.History: Stolen from his real parents by Darth Anarthemov, Darth Apokal was raised by the Sith Lord as his protégé after having his vocal cords cut out in his sleep. It quickly became apparent why, as his intelligence and Force powers knew few bounds. He quickly became an instructor of Sith soldiers and a capable leader, but Anarthemov thought he was holding back and became increasingly brutal. Apokal was hurt, and began to harbor dark feelings against his master and foster father. Eventually, the news inevitably reached Jura that the galaxy was coming to an end, and Apokal was horrified at Anarthemov's attempt to exploit the situation. He and a few of his most trusted disciples escaped Jura, but the defense grid tried to shoot them down, and though none of them were even scratched, they were separated trying to escape. He landed on Yavin, and after a saber duel with Cade Skywalker, revealed that he knew Anarthemov's attack plan and sought to give it to the Jedi. He and an elite group of star pilots began to zip around the galaxy in hyperspace, thwarting Anarthemov at his most strategic chokepoints — but lately, Anarthemov has been deviating from the plan... ~WITH~ [General Profile]Name: DeathCode: S-L31Class: uniqueClass Archetype: PERSONALManufacturer: Darth ApokalAvailability: unique ••••• Controller: DiZ[General Profile]Full Name: Op'aa JanxtclNickname: The InquisitorRace: GunganAge: 35Gender: maleHomeworld: NabooHeight: 6 ft.Weight: 90 lbs.Hair Color: No hairEye Color: GreenSkin Color: Dark GreyForce Sensitive: NoCharacter Archetype: WARRIORCharacter Rank: 5Affiliation: New Republic[Quirks]Color Blind(1)Missing Limb(2) {Has a missing eye and a leg which is cut off and subsituted by a mechanical one}[Personal Background]Personality: Highly religious, superstitious and antisocial. He is uncomfortable around company, and doesn't like being a lone wolf, either. Is a maddened warrior in battle, not caring if he will get out of the battle alive or not. Usually does his work alone, and is a lot like a mad hermit than anything else.Goals: Purge the galaxy of those who commit the sins of treachery, murder, and the sorts. And seek complete enlightenment.Interests: Hunting, Fishing, Praying, Religious ActivitiesHistory: Op'aa was born in the underwater city on Naboo during the middle of the Clone Wars. Because of the lack of specialized Gungan combat units on Naboo to help combat invading Droid armies, Op'aa was one of the few Gungan children to be taken from their mothers to be trained in sword fighting, rifle firing, and the sorts. After the Clone Wars ended and the Galactic Empire rose to power, the last remnants of the specialized Gungan corps were hunted down and terminated. All except Op'aa. He managed to avoid being executed by `ratting out' the other members of the Gungan resist units, and little did he know that it also lead to the very destruction of the underwater Gungan city. Not only that, but the Empire hardly kept it's promise. Op'aa was ambushed on Naboo by Imperial Stormtroopers and barely escaped alive, managing to dive into a forest lake at the right moment. Now, Op'aa has become half crazed and mad of guilt, and has spent his entire life seeking redemption, praying, and hunting down other evildoers. He also extremely despises the Sith. ••••• Controller: Xemnas[General Profile]Full Name: ShikonNickname: Shikon the StrikerRace: AdarianAge: 36Gender: maleHomeworld: AldaranHeight: 6"3Weight: 275 lbsHair Color: White and green.Eye Color: Green.Skin Color: Green, white stipes on wither sides of his upper torso.Force Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: GUARDIANCharacter Rank: 5Affiliation: Sith[Quirks]Allergy(1)[Personal Background]Personality: Dark and mysterious. He usually poses himself in a corner alone, as not to attract attention. He never strays from his target, and is very sneaky or conniving. Goals: To restore peace by eliminating all Jedi within the galaxy.Interests: Weaponry, Advanced Computer Engineering, Hot wiring, PilotingHistory: At the age of 16, he discovered his hatred for the likes of Jedi. For many years he watched The Empire grow, and celebrated this glory. Each time a Jedi is slain, he rejoices, and seeks to slaughter one of his own. When his father was brutally murdered, his own age being 27 at the time, the 65 year old man had a final request that his son, Shikon, strike down the Jedis in his vengeance (hence the name "Shikon the Striker"). He has slain many, but he will not rest until the galaxy has come to order under the Empire. ~WITH~ [General Profile]Name: Strike ForceCode: 062-Srk6Class: Sulanko FrigateClass Archetype: CORVETTEManufacturer: Vaufthau ShipyardsAvailability: military ••••• [General Profile]Full Name: D'ran kae MormalisNickname: Little Griever Race: KaleeshAge: 43Gender: MaleHomeworld: Kashyyyk Height: 6"6Weight: 245lbHair Color: Bright RedEye Color: YellowSkin Color: CrimsonForce Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: SENTINELCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: Sith ----------------------[Quirks]Insomniac(2) Mute(2) Permanent Wound(4) ----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: While he acts cheerful, D'ran is actually rather depressive, as a direct consequence of insomnia, that caused by his throat injury and various events on Kalee that threaten his dreams. As a result, he is a loner and untrusting, with only a few people earning his confidence.Goals: Becoming a Sith Apprentice, becoming like his idol, Grievous.Interests: Qymaen jai Sheelal, Swordplay, advancing in the Sith.History: Born in the era of the New Republic on Kalee, D'ran's mother died in childbirth, leaving D'ran to be raised by his war-loving father. D'ran was raised close to a temple honouring General Grievous, once a Kaleesh named Qymaen jai Sheelal. D'ran worshipped Grievous fervently, learning his history and slowly altering his being to be like Grievous. By the age of 13, he had learned himself in the Czerka Outland rifle, obtained from his father, and the Lig sword and shield, forged by a friend of his, Ar'on sai Kemesh. He named his weapons, holding them as symbols of his loved ones. His rifle he named "Mortis", a deviation of his family name, his shield he named "Onyx", from the gem embedded in it's center and it's color, and his sword he named "Ar'kem", a combination of his friend's family and given names. He also learned himself in the family weapon, a Shoni spear. Holding these weapons, he killed a mumuu, claiming it's skull, cleaning it and from then on, wearing it, as his idol did, however, the battle with the mumuu had claimed his voice, after being speared in the throat by the mumuu's tusk. His voicebox was destroyed by the battle, and though he healed, he never regained his voice, and is still mute to this day. For this, he became known as "Little Griever", for his resemblance to the late Grievous, and also his grieving for his lost voice. Still following in his idol's footsteps, D'ran travelled to Korriban, seeking to become a Sith Warrior. He walked the abandoned planet alone, the barren wastelands draining him. He collapsed eventually, but luckily, a Sith Apprentice found him, taking him to the fortress used by Dark Lord Darth Anarthemov. Darth Anarthemov, curious at D'ran's desperation to be like Grievous and sensing Force-sensitivity, let D'ran train there, occasionally teaching him and his formal apprentice, Darth Apokal, simultaneously. At 22, when the destruction of the galaxy became apparent, D'ran followed Anarthemov, fighting for him, and has been sent to the current building site of the Korriban Savior as a test. If he passes, he hopes to become the new Sith Apprentice after Darth Apokal's defection. However, the defection of a person he considered a friend has given him doubts that even now stir in his mind. No Sith applicants allowed. Also, brownie points for whoever can guess the root for Darth Anarthemov's name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 How do we Upgrade are character/ship to Rank 5? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Fill all the points, then press "Advance Character" or "Advance Vessel". Keep doing so until the button disappears, and fill all remaining points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 I gave you my application via PM, SGY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Okay, now post the bit needed on the thread for public viewing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Is there a required race? I only recently got into Star Wars and don't know all of the races and such. xP ~Xemnas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Here's a list of races: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_sentient_races_and_species Hoped I helped. :D [General Profile]Full Name: Op'aa JanxtclNickname: The Inquisitor Race: GunganAge: 35Gender: maleHomeworld: Naboo Height: 6 ft.Weight: 90 lbs.Hair Color: No hairEye Color: GreenSkin Color: Dark GreyForce Sensitive: NoCharacter Archetype: WARRIORCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: New Republic [Quirks]Color Blind(1)Missing Limb(2) {Has a missing eye and a leg which is cut off and subsituted by a mechanical one} [Personal Background]Personality: Highly religious, superstitious and antisocial. He is uncomfortable around company, and doesn't like being a lone wolf, either. Is a maddened warrior in battle, not caring if he will get out of the battle alive or not. Usually does his work alone, and is a lot like a mad hermit than anything else.Goals: Purge the galaxy of those who commit the sins of treachery, murder, and the sorts. And seek complete enlightenment.Interests: Hunting, Fishing, Praying, Religious ActivitiesHistory: Op'aa was born in the underwater city on Naboo during the middle of the Clone Wars. Because of the lack of specialized Gungan combat units on Naboo to help combat invading Droid armies, Op'aa was one of the few Gungan children to be taken from their mothers to be trained in sword fighting, rifle firing, and the sorts. After the Clone Wars ended and the Galactic Empire rose to power, the last remnants of the specialized Gungan corps were hunted down and terminated. All except Op'aa. He managed to avoid being executed by `ratting out' the other members of the Gungan resist units, and little did he know that it also lead to the very destruction of the underwater Gungan city. Not only that, but the Empire hardly kept it's promise. Op'aa was ambushed on Naboo by Imperial Stormtroopers and barely escaped alive, managing to dive into a forest lake at the right moment. Now, Op'aa has become half crazed and mad of guilt, and has spent his entire life seeking redemption, praying, and hunting down other evildoers. He also extremely despises the Sith. Also SGY, does this take place before or after the Yuuzhan Vong War? Cause I'm assuming after. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 [General Profile]Full Name: Darth ShikonNickname: Shikon the Striker Race: AdarianAge: 36Gender: maleHomeworld: Aldaran Height: 6"3Weight: 275 lbsHair Color: White and green.Eye Color: Green.Skin Color: Green, white stipes on wither sides of his upper torso.Force Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: GUARDIANCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: Sith [Quirks]Allergy(1) [Personal Background]Personality: Dark and mysterious. He usually poses himself in a corner alone, as not to attract attention. He never strays from his target, and is very sneaky or conniving. Goals: To restore peace by eliminating all Jedi within the galaxy. Interests: Weaponry, Advanced Computer Engineering, Hot wiring, Piloting History: At the age of 16, he discovered his hatred for the likes of Jedi. For many years he watched The Empire grow, and celebrated this glory. Each time a Jedi is slain, he rejoices, and seeks to slaughter one of his own. When his father was brutally murdered, his own age being 27 at the time, the 65 year old man had a final request that his son, Shikon, strike down the Jedis in his vengeance (hence the name "Shikon the Striker"). He has slain many, but he will not rest until the galaxy has come to order under the Empire. [General Profile]Name: Strike ForceCode: 062-Srk6 Class: Sulanko FrigateClass Archetype: CORVETTEManufacturer: Vaufthau ShipyardsAvailability: military ~Xemnas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 [General Profile]Full Name: Darth AntiusNickname: Lord Antius Race: HumanAge: 22Gender: maleHomeworld: Kamino Height: (fill in) 6 ftWeight: (fill in) 160Hair Color: (fill in) blackEye Color: (fill in) graySkin Color: (fill in) tanForce Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: GUARDIANCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: (fill in) sith [Quirks]Lack of Control(1) [Personal Background]Personality: (fill in) cruel and unforgivingGoals: (fill in) to be the ultimate sithInterests: (fill in) Lightsabers killing enimies even if they are sithHistory: (fill in) Antius was once Yoda's padawan but then turned to the dark side and trained under sidious secretly. ONce his master died he swore to kill all jedi and maybe his succesor if needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 @DiZ: After the Yuuzhan Vong war, as Cade Skywalker is in power. And accepted.@Xemnas: Accepted, but not "Darth". The Rule of Two has mostly returned, with Darth Anarthemov as Master and Darth Apokal as Apprentice. However, it could be that Shikon is one of the more powerful Sith Order members striving to be come Anarthemov's new apprentice. Accepted as non-Darth Shikon.@Proto: Denied. Yoda & trainees would be long dead, besides the obvious references to Darth Tyranus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [General Profile]Full Name: D'ran kae MormalisNickname: Little Griever Race: KaleeshAge: 22Gender: MaleHomeworld: Kashyyyk Height: 6"6Weight: 245lbHair Color: Bright RedEye Color: YellowSkin Color: CrimsonForce Sensitive: YesCharacter Archetype: SENTINELCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: Sith ----------------------[Quirks]Insomniac(2) Mute(2) Permanent Wound(4) ----------------------[Personal Background]Personality: While he acts cheerful, D'ran is actually rather depressive, as a direct consequence of insomnia, that caused by his throat injury and various events on Kalee that threaten his dreams. As a result, he is a loner and untrusting, with only a few people earning his confidence.Goals: Becoming a Sith Apprentice, becoming like his idol, Grievous.Interests: Qymaen jai Sheelal, Swordplay, advancing in the Sith.History: Born in the era of the New Republic on Kalee, D'ran's mother died in childbirth, leaving D'ran to be raised by his war-loving father. D'ran was raised close to a temple honouring General Grievous, once a Kaleesh named Qymaen jai Sheelal. D'ran worshipped Grievous fervently, learning his history and slowly altering his being to be like Grievous. By the age of 13, he had learned himself in the Czerka Outland rifle, obtained from his father, and the Lig sword and shield, forged by a friend of his, Ar'on sai Kemesh. He named his weapons, holding them as symbols of his loved ones. His rifle he named "Mortis", a deviation of his family name, his shield he named "Onyx", from the gem embedded in it's center and it's color, and his sword he named "Ar'kem", a combination of his friend's family and given names. He also learned himself in the family weapon, a Shoni spear. Holding these weapons, he killed a mumuu, claiming it's skull, cleaning it and from then on, wearing it, as his idol did, however, the battle with the mumuu had claimed his voice, after being speared in the throat by the mumuu's tusk. His voicebox was destroyed by the battle, and though he healed, he never regained his voice, and is still mute to this day. For this, he became known as "Little Griever", for his resemblance to the late Grievous, and also his grieving for his lost voice. Still following in his idol's footsteps, D'ran travelled to Korriban, seeking to become a Sith Warrior. He walked the abandoned planet alone, the barren wastelands draining him. He collapsed eventually, but luckily, a Sith Apprentice found him, taking him to the fortress used by Dark Lord Darth Anarthemol. Darth Anarthemol, curious at D'ran's desperation to be like Grievous and sensing Force-sensitivity, let D'ran train there, occasionally teaching him and his formal apprentice, Darth Apokal, simultaneously. At 22, when the destruction of the galaxy became apparent, D'ran followed Anarthemol, fighting for him, and has been sent to the current building site of the Korriban Savior as a test. If he passes, he hopes to become the new Sith Apprentice after Darth Apokal's defection. However, the defection of a person he considered a friend has given him doubts that even now stir in his mind. --------------------------------------- THIS TOOK ME SO BLOODY LONG. First I had to find a race...oh, assume this is a secret hideaway of Kaleesh untouched by Thrawn's assault, BTW. Second, I had to make the character sheet...seriously. This is probably my best character bio yet. I feel inspired to write Star Wars fanfiction now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gallade999999 Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [General Profile]Full Name: Darth VadradaNickname: The Fleet destroyer Race:Kel DorAge: ?Gender: maleHomeworld: Dorin Height: 5 ft.7 in.Weight: 140 lbs.Hair Color: No hairEye Color: RedSkin Color: orengeForce Sensitive: NoCharacter Archetype: WARRIORCharacter Rank: 5 Affiliation: Empire [Quirks]Blind(1)Missing Limb(2) {Has a missing Arm replaced with a mech arm} [Personal Background]Personality:UnknownGoals:To seek out and destroy the remnant jedi.Interests: Fixing ships.History:Darth Vadrada is a Sith lord stronger than the Emperor. He knows of Lord vaders secret apprentice and is seeking him out to destroy him. He was born on Dorin where the jedi counsel turned him away. This filled him with rage so he abducted a youngling and trained him as his padawan. His apprentice is Que-Te-Atacel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 DENIED. 1. NO MORE SITH.2. Anarthemov is in power now.3. Horrifyingly unoriginal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Tsuki ni Mau Majin Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 To Supreme Gamemaster: My friend, Xemnas, is currently away. He will however show up for your role-play. He wishes that you forgive his current absence, and he assures you that he will only be here to YCM for this role-play. I apologize for my personal intrusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 @DiZ: After the Yuuzhan Vong war' date=' as Cade Skywalker is in power. And accepted.@Xemnas: Accepted, but not "Darth". The Rule of Two has mostly returned, with Darth Anarthemov as Master and Darth Apokal as Apprentice. However, [b']it could be that Shikon is one of the more powerful Sith Order members striving to be come Anarthemov's new apprentice.[/b] Accepted as non-Darth Shikon.@Proto: Denied. Yoda & trainees would be long dead, besides the obvious references to Darth Tyranus. The bolded statement please. ~Xemnas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Then Shikon would hold some hate for my character, because I just appeared and was accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Well, yeah, there'd be some competition. We need one non-Force-Sensitive character and two Jedi before we can start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Me vs Xemnas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 22, 2008 Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Heh, that'd be a sight to see. Any Jedi? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Freeman The Master Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 never mind ~edit~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 >.< Read the instructions more carefully, look over the other applicants, then come back and reapply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeman The Master Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 ok ill edit it i copyed and pasted it on an nother Rp i will fix when i get to my com. it was worth a shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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