Guest Tiger Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Okay. I had to do this project on a leader, so I did Tiger Woods :P I made it in GIMP as a draft, and I was wondering what you guys thought of it. I'm in the 6th grade, so It doesn't have to outstanding, but a teacher does have to like it, so what do you guys think?(FOR A SCHOOL PROJECT!) [spoiler=Old Draft!] [spoiler=New Draft!] Please tell me if there are any grammatical errors! Please Rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Pretty good.im in 6 grade too cool.We do a thing called current events.I would much rather do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Not nbad. The text becomes kinda hard to readon the lighter ed though. For school, I might change the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Not nbad. The text becomes kinda hard to readon the lighter ed though. For school' date=' I might change the font.[/quote'] Thanks! My teacher likes the font ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 NS says that you need to add more text. My guess is that you had to write on an athlete. If so, change to Micheal Phelps. He got 8 or 9 golds at the Olympics, that is a world record. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Woods' isn't Athletic. It's just swinging a Stick with good Trajectory. Basically a Strategy Game XDAnyways, the Picture could be centered more, but the Reddish colors are nice and so is the Font :D-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 not bad Tiger not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuigiFan#1 Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 nice one. it looks really cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Its good, but maybe you could get a render of Tiger, use a background similar to that one, and line it all up so that it looks like the gradient colors he's on is like his line of sight. But that's just me, being all over working. But like I said before, its good. I can't stress that enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Not to hate on your grammar, but it looks like a 4th grader wrote that. Get a thesauras and get better words. >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 put the image completely in the linear, soften the edges of the image a bit and maybe add a bit more text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Its good' date=' but maybe you could get a render of Tiger, use a background similar to that one, and line it all up so that it looks like the gradient colors he's on is like his line of sight. But that's just me, being all over working. But like I said before, its good. I can't stress that enough.[/quote'] Thanks. I'm only allowed to have a picture from a certain website, and I'm not allowed to change it. @Everyone: This is not my final draft, I will be adding more text and stuff for the final draft. Thanks guys :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Thats pretty cool ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Thats pretty cool ^_^ Thanks very much ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 I think it looks really good. However, I think the text should be more prominent. Perhaps add a drop shadow or make it Bold? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 Hey, guys! Thanks for all the help! I made a semi-final draft! Please tell me if there are any grammar errors! [spoiler=Big image] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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