ShadowGX Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 [align=center]Ancient Darkness(I may change it, I want your opinions) Chapter 1: Revenge Of Memories Before I start, I would like someone to help me draw the characters, P.M me so I can give you the description, Thanks in Advance. Part 1: Soul Flames /The New Beginning Narrator typing on computer:"…. I'm writing this story so I can always remember; these people changed my life, Who am I? You will find out in the right time, the only thing I could say is I lived long enough, I thought that I've met all kinds of people, but I was wrong, until I met them....…It all began in a dark night, it was raining in the forest, and the only thing that could be seen is flames, and the only smell is the smoke… ???? (While he's arriving to the burning place):… huff…huff…no..Way..Huff..NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO… (Fall on his knees) Narrator: let me ask you That question, your home was burning, you were late, and so you never see your family again, you look through the smoke and you see someone standing, with a long black rain coat, a sword on his shoulder, what are you going to do? Anyway…There was another place still burning in the forest… and someone arrived with a Motorcycle, ??????: Master? What happened? Who did this? (An echo from the flames): That would be me, hahahaha…. The Master (laying on the ground): S...Skyler, I've failed, it's your time now….to fight the evil in people's hearts… (Saying that while vanishing) Skyler: Master! (The echo from the flames): Now let's cut the drama, and return to action, shall we? A ring of fire been created around Skyler)) Skyler: Show yourself (Walking from the flames): Flamer, the volcanic lord of the Dark Death Empire, at your serve… Narrator: …The Dark Death….The real story begins 200 years ago, for some people; it’s a very long time… Well, I remember what happened like it was yesterday, but let's stick to what we have in our hand first, as I said before, everything have the right place and the right time, and while Skyler was about to fight Flamer, I believe there is a pursuit happening somewhere else…. ???? :…huff…huff…he's… fast… but I know….he didn't …go far….I'll take a break …. ???? Thinking: *something still burning… it's near I can feel the heat...could it be him?* While he was walking towards the flames, he hears to voices….)) Skyler: Show yourself Flamer: Flamer, the volcanic lord of the Dark Death Empire, at your serves... I believe they call you Skyler, I think I've heard this name before Skyler:…… ???? : I was just gonna to say the exact same thing Skyler: Sparks ?! Well, it's good to see you Sparks : that's all you're gonna say to an old friend, actually I don't think it's a good time to catch up. Skyler: I totally disagree with you on that one (then he jumps to avid Flamer's fire balls) Sparks : Fire?...So you're the one who burned my village…. Skyler: What? Flamer: you mean the big trash boxes? Hah, I was just trying my new weapon, nothing personal… Sparks : …. . . . .YOU'RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS….. Flamer: you can't cross my fire Ring, y… Skyler: You wanna bet? Flamer: Wha..?? Skyler: you see, my friend here isn't a human... Sparks : I'm a volcanic creature, so let's see who can take more heat… Skyler: I couldn't agree more… Narrator: So, the fight, when Sparks uses fire and Skyler uses his guns, they were able to win, as soon as Been knocked out, the flames started to disappear, but moments before the take there revenge ….. They hear something; someone is clapping while walking toward them… ????: amusing, two kids, two ordinary human garbage, kicking the hell outta one of my lords.. Flamer: M..My..My lord? ????:…….and I'm asking myself, why I didn't think about changing employees before? Sparks : Master?!! ????:oh, well I go by many names, Death Lord, King of Darkness, or Darkness Lord… Skyler: Kaiser Sparks : What? Skyler: His name is, Drake Kaiser , he's a vampire and the ultimate lord of Dark Death Kaiser:..Hmm... B+ for doing your homework, mind if I barrowed this? (Lifting Flamer in the air and Moving with his psychic powers) Kaiser: hmm… what's the word I'm looking for?... oh yes, you're Faired, and that’s permanently…. Flamer: NOOOOOOOOOOO( saying that while a shadow blast goin' through his body and then turn to Ashes) Kaiser: As for you two… It's time for the job interview….one simple question…. Sparks whispering: **what is he talking about?** Kaiser: are you with me, to rule the world under my command?.... rather simple…,I'll give you a multiply choice …. A- Yes ….B- …you know… and you have 3 seconds to answer that (Skyler and Sparks look at each other) Kaiser:… two…. (Skyler and Sparks started to attack ) Sparks : Fire Ball Kaiser : …..I'll take that as a…. no….(He vanished and reappear behind them) Kaiser: "Shadow Blast"(That attack would've hit them before they turn around, but something came from a tree, a sword that blocked the Attack…) Sparks : wait, I've seen that sword before….ah! It's the rain coat guy( he looked up to the tree) Kaiser: Muahahaha, Don't push your luck that far Shadow, you may regret this someday…(and he walked away through the darkness of the forest) Shadow jumped from the tree and toke his sword and walked away)) Sparks : Hey, wait…(Shadow stopped) …I just wanted to say thanx, and sorry, I properly should've asked you before attakin' :P (Shadow smiles and walks away and they didn't see his face) Narrator: …and this is how they've met each other… and this was only the beginning… but before we continue the story, I'll tell you more about the character in the story so far…. Part1 End…[/align][align=center][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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