Yu-Gi-Oh! Remix. Turn 46, "Start of Something New! Remix Cup!"

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump, again.

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump

[shiko11]

bumping is spam, and spam can be reported. Also, I happen to have written a 500-word essay onspam and why it is not wanted in YCM. Please quit bumping.

[Jovi Siagian]

bumping is spam' date=' and spam can be reported. Also, I happen to have written a 500-word essay onspam and why it is not wanted in YCM. Please quit bumping.

[/quote']

 

*sigh* I've been bumping this for many times, yet I didn't get any warning. I bump it once every 24 hours or more, not like you guys that bump every 1 hour. That's because I wanna keep this thread from dying, so I'll never necro-bump this again because I still need this. But still, I'll contact a moderator regarding this.

[SushiTheLegend]

Bumping is allowed on a 24 hour basis between each last post by the thread author, you are the one spamming shiko11, if you aren't commenting about his FF don't post at all. What you are doing is also backseat moderating which is warnable, if you feel a member or in this case Jovi is rule breaking, report it!

[Jovi Siagian]

Bumping is allowed on a 24 hour basis between each last post by the thread author' date=' you are the one spamming shiko11, if you aren't commenting about his FF don't post at all. What you are doing is also backseat moderating which is warnable, if you feel a member or in this case Jovi is rule breaking, report it!

[/quote']

 

Thanks for clearing things, BMG. ;)

And I'll try not to break any rules.

[Sunako Kirishiki]

This fan fic is very good. I read it over and over again because I got addicted to it.

I can't wait for the next chapter to be out:).

 

 

10/10

[Jovi Siagian]

This fan fic is very good. I read it over and over again because I got addicted to it.

I can't wait for the next chapter to be out:).

 

 

10/10

 

Thank you. For some reasons, I also read few chapters all over again. I hope my teachers won't give me so many homeworks this weekend so I can spend it on making new chapters.

[shiko11]

i did report it. I let him know so it didn't come out of the blue. Im sorry, I didn't realize they were 24 hour bumps. My bad. :)

Sorry Jovi!

[Jovi Siagian]

i did report it. I let him know so it didn't come out of the blue. Im sorry' date=' I didn't realize they were 24 hour bumps. My bad. :)

Sorry Jovi!

[/quote']

 

Never mind. Everyone doesn't get hurt, so everything's fine. Besides, you gave this thread a little activity. =)

[goldenboy820]

WOW I just read the whole story from beginning to end!

I like it and it really is good but u should think about starting a new fanfic so I can put my character in it, if you are plz let me know.

[Jovi Siagian]

WOW I just read the whole story from beginning to end!

I like it and it really is good but u should think about starting a new fanfic so I can put my character in it' date=' if you are plz let me know.

[/quote']

 

Seeing this being a big hit, I don't think I'm gonna make a new story until this ends.

[SushiTheLegend]

Poll has been changed, although I thought you could change it yourself Jovi.

[Jovi Siagian]

Poll has been changed' date=' although I thought you could change it yourself Jovi.

[/quote']

 

No, I can't. I've tried to. Do you know how? But thanks, anyway!

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump.

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump.

[Dr. Cakey]

I'm gonna have to post, because I desperately need to see Lightsworn Blitzkrieg...I have no idea why I need to, I just do.:lol:

Anyway, this is a pretty cool story. I'll give it...hm...7.5/10, I think.

[goldenboy820]

Ok! More chaps plz!

Also plz let me know when(and if) you make a new fanfic so my char can be in it.

[Jovi Siagian]

Well, my real life has been busy lately. School works, final exams coming in a month, followed by practice exams in few weeks after that. It's lucky I can keep my grades good while I also concentrate on this site's things.

[Weather Report - Stand]

[align=center]Turn 1: It all began

here.....[/align]

???: It was a nice Duel' date=' JOVI!! You beat me once again! Let’s Duel again sometime!!

 

Okay, that’s cool, some dudes playing cards on YVD or something.

 

JOVI: You were great, Pegasus! Maybe we should meet and have a real Duel!! I have

many accounts all around the internet! And if you do want, come to my school instead

of my house. I’m seldom staying in my house.

 

Um, yeah. I’m confused since Pegasus wouldn’t usually do this thing on the internet.

But it’s just the beginning, it could have a reason.

 

PEGASUS: Yeah, I’ll take a look!

 

[b']It was only a piece of Jovi's conversation with his opponent in an online

Duel. He never thought that he will really come to his school. It was a sunny day

when he came. He didn’t know it was him until he introduced himself,[/b]

 

HOW DOES PEGASUS KNOW WHERE HE LIVES?!

 

PEGASUS: Hey boy, could you tell me where Jovi is?

 

JOVI: You’re speaking with him. But I don’t know you. Who are you? How do you know me?

 

PEGASUS: Hey, you told me. Did you forget about me? I’m Pegasus.

 

JOVI: So you are Pegasus? But wait a minute, I think I’ve seen you. Where did I see

you? Oh, you’re the president of Konami South East Asia, a corporation that makes

cards for South East Asia region! I can’t believe I dueled you!

 

Ha, I get it, he runs the Yu-Gi-Oh companies that WE have! Nice joke.

 

PEGASUS: There’s something I want to ask you. Have you ever been a tournament

champion? You have such as great Dueling skill. I have no clue if you haven’t.

 

JOVI: I haven’t.

 

PEGASUS: WHAT!? But why?

 

You DON’T PLAY A GAME FOR FAME AND GLORY?! BUT WHY?!?!

 

JOVI: That’s because there isn’t any tournament here. Your HQ is in Singapore. You

came from there to here just to ask me about that?

 

PEGASUS: Of course not! I want to test these things!

 

Well, what are these…’things’? I’m scared…

 

JOVI: Duel Disks?

 

Oh, duel disks, ha. I wish you had said that he took some duel disk-shaped objects.

You CAN say that they take stuff out, like;

PEGASUS: Of course not! I want to test these things!

 

(PEGASUS takes out some large disks from his bag)

 

JOVI: Duel Disks?

 

See, like that. Plus Kaiba sold them.

 

PEGASUS: Yeah! We are gonna sell these, but we have to test these first. You are the

lucky one to be my opponent!

 

Kaiba sold them, I tells ya. It’s your story, but I just want to know when you

change facts. Plus is this really a story? It’s a script, but what do I know…

 

JOVI: It’s an honor! Let the Duel begin!

 

JOVI & PEGASUS: DUEL!!!!

 

Both start with full 8000 LP

 

That’s a first. Anime style with 8000. I know it’s done a lot, but I just like 4000.

 

PEGASUS: I’m first! Draw! I summon Ancient Gear in Attack Mode, then I Special

Summon another Ancient Gear by its own effect! Then Spell Card, Double Summon,

activate! By Double Summon’s effect, I can Normal Summon one more monster, so I

Tribute 2 Ancient Gears to summon Ancient Gear Golem! I Set two cards, turn end.

 

WOAH! We see all of this, but you gave no attempts to show what the monsters looked

like! We SHOULD know, but we don’t. Really, I wish that you said that AGG was a ‘big

hulking mass of steel about ready to collapse from rust’ or anything like that.

 

JOVI: Great, Ancient Gear Golem in the first turn! This is exciting! My turn, draw.

Field Spell activate, Skyscraper! Now every time an Elemental Hero battles a monster

with higher ATK, it gains 1000 ATK. And I activate my Spell Card, Polymerization! I

fuse Elemental Hero Avian and Elemental Hero Burstinatrix to Fusion Summon Elemental

Hero Flame Wingman! Elemental Hero Flame Wingman, attack Gear Golem, Infernal Rage!

 

NOOOOO!! NOT E-HEROES! It’s reminding me of GX!! No, I HATE GX! Argh…get Jaden away…

 

PEGASUS: What!? (LP: 7900)

 

JOVI: Flame Wingman monster’s effect! Whenever it destroys a monster, it inflicts

damage to your Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster!

 

PEGASUS: Nice one! (LP: 4900) But I activate Trap Card, Michizure! Whenever my

monster is destroyed, I destroy another monster! So I destroy your Flame Wingman!

 

JOVI: Flame Wingman!? Darn! I activate Continuous Spell, Future Fusion! By sending

Elemental Hero Clayman and Bubbleman from my Deck to the Graveyard, in my 2nd

Standby Phase after this card activation, I summon Elemental Hero Mudballman! I Set

a card, and end my turn.

 

Why him?!

 

PEGASUS: In your End Phase I activate Continuous Trap, Solemn Wishes! Every tome I

draw, I gain 500 LP. A’right, it’s my turn, draw! (LP: 5400) I summon Ancient Gear

Knight! You have no monster left! Ancient Gear Knight, Direct Attack!

 

Waaaaah! I have no time to stop and rest with descriptions! My mind is on overdrive

and I can’t pay attention to what they’re saying! Argh!

 

JOVI: Trap Card activates, Negate Attack! Huh, it was so close.

 

PEGASUS: My turn ends here.

 

JOVI: My turn, draw. I summon Elemental Hero Prisma! Activate Prisma’s effect. I

reveal Shining Flare Wingman, so I send Sparkman from my Deck to the Graveyard. Now

Prisma’s name is treated as Sparkman. Prisma, attack Ancient Gear Knight!

 

But why did he do that? He didn’t NEED to use Prisma’s ability.7

 

PEGASUS: (LP: 4500)

 

JOVI: Turn End.

 

PEGASUS: My turn, draw. (LP: 5000). Great! You’ve come! I activate Spell Card,

Ancient Miracle! By removing from play Ancient Gear Golem and 2 Ancient Gears, I

Fusion Summon Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem! Ultimate Golem, attack Prisma!

 

No card description? No ‘This card allows me to fuse any two ancient gear monsters

with ancient gear golem in my graveyard to fusion summon ACUG’?! Darn.

 

JOVI: (LP: 5300)

 

PEGASUS: Turn End.

 

JOVI: My turn, draw. (Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem, a powerful monster with its

invulnerability against Trap Card and Spell Card in when it attacks! How do I defeat

it?) The effect of Future Fusion activates. I Fusion Summon Mudballman. Set a card,

Turn End.

 

You know it would be neat if we didn’t summon that.

 

PEGASUS: My turn, draw! (LP: 5500) Quick-Play Spell, Mystical Space Typhoon,

activates! I destroy your Future Fusion! Because your Future Fusion is destroyed,

your Mudballman is also destroyed! So I launch a Direct Attack!

 

JOVI: Huaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! (LP: 900) That hurts! But I activate Trap Card,

Compensation. For each multiple of 1000 points of Battle Damage I took, I draw 1

card. I took 4400 points of Battle Damage, so I draw 4 cards.

 

PEGASUS: Turn End. So what are you gonna do? You only have 900 Life Points left.

 

JOVI: Let’s see. It’s my turn, draw. Hey, thanks because you attacked me! Now I’ll

activate my 2nd Polymerization! I fuse Dark Magician and Buster Blader, come forth,

Dark Paladin!

 

WOOOOAH!!! HE JUST USED DARK MAGICIAN!! HE’S YUGI YUKI!! WAAAAUGH!!

 

PEGASUS: But its ATK is only 2900. My Ultimate Golem has 4400 ATK. One final blow

from Ultimate Golem toward Dark Paladin would end this Duel!

 

JOVI: It’s not over yet! Spell Card, Miracle Fusion activates! I remove Flame

Wingman and Sparkman in my Graveyard from play. Fusion Summon, Shining Flare

Wingman!

 

So THAAAT’S why he discarded Spark Man!

 

PEGASUS: What!

 

JOVI: Shining Flare Wingman gains 300 ATK for each Elemental Hero in my Graveyard. I

have six Elemental Heroes; they are Bubbleman, Clayman, Burstinatrix, Avian, Prisma,

and Mudballman. Shining Flare Wingman gains 1800 ATK, so now its ATK is 4300 points

and it gives damage to your Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster it destroys!

Go, Shining Flare Wingman, attack Ultimate Golem. Solar Flare!

 

PEGASUS: (LP: 200)

 

JOVI: Dark Paladin, Direct Attack! Super Magician Killer Wave!

 

What kind of attack name is THAT?!

 

PEGASUS: No!!!!!! (LP: 0) I lost again! I thought I would win this time!

 

JOVI: Thanks for the Duel! Here’s your Duel Disk.

 

PEGASUS: No, it’s yours. Take that as a prize because you beat me. Beside, after

seeing the Duel Disks’ performance, I’m gonna make a tournament in this town using

the Duel Disks next month. I hope you participate. Maybe it would be your first time

to win a tournament

 

You didn’t add a period to the end.

 

JOVI: Tournament?! I’d love too! Yeah, I’m gonna participate in.

 

PEGASUS: Good. Oh, gotta go. See you in the tourney!

 

JOVI: Bye! (A tournament, huh?)

[align=center]

 

What a short ending.

 

Comment please....And if you have some questions, don't be shy to ask

me.[/align]

 

This first chapter isn’t good at all. It’s too fast-paced for me to comprehend!

Pegasus is a stalker! Jovi is Jaden and Yugi’s son! I’m confused. The story didn’t make enough sense at first! But don’t despair, I’m not just going to review the first chapter. I’ll also be looking at three other chapters: the end of the battle city arc, the beginning of the next arc and the chapter you’re on now. I’ll post my next review next week.

[Jovi Siagian]

[spoiler=Jovi makes it in spoiler]

[align=center]Turn 1: It all began

here.....[/align]

???: It was a nice Duel' date=' JOVI!! You beat me once again! Let’s Duel again sometime!!

 

Okay, that’s cool, some dudes playing cards on YVD or something.

 

JOVI: You were great, Pegasus! Maybe we should meet and have a real Duel!! I have

many accounts all around the internet! And if you do want, come to my school instead

of my house. I’m seldom staying in my house.

 

Um, yeah. I’m confused since Pegasus wouldn’t usually do this thing on the internet.

But it’s just the beginning, it could have a reason.

 

PEGASUS: Yeah, I’ll take a look!

 

[b']It was only a piece of Jovi's conversation with his opponent in an online

Duel. He never thought that he will really come to his school. It was a sunny day

when he came. He didn’t know it was him until he introduced himself,[/b]

 

HOW DOES PEGASUS KNOW WHERE HE LIVES?!

 

PEGASUS: Hey boy, could you tell me where Jovi is?

 

JOVI: You’re speaking with him. But I don’t know you. Who are you? How do you know me?

 

PEGASUS: Hey, you told me. Did you forget about me? I’m Pegasus.

 

JOVI: So you are Pegasus? But wait a minute, I think I’ve seen you. Where did I see

you? Oh, you’re the president of Konami South East Asia, a corporation that makes

cards for South East Asia region! I can’t believe I dueled you!

 

Ha, I get it, he runs the Yu-Gi-Oh companies that WE have! Nice joke.

 

PEGASUS: There’s something I want to ask you. Have you ever been a tournament

champion? You have such as great Dueling skill. I have no clue if you haven’t.

 

JOVI: I haven’t.

 

PEGASUS: WHAT!? But why?

 

You DON’T PLAY A GAME FOR FAME AND GLORY?! BUT WHY?!?!

 

JOVI: That’s because there isn’t any tournament here. Your HQ is in Singapore. You

came from there to here just to ask me about that?

 

PEGASUS: Of course not! I want to test these things!

 

Well, what are these…’things’? I’m scared…

 

JOVI: Duel Disks?

 

Oh, duel disks, ha. I wish you had said that he took some duel disk-shaped objects.

You CAN say that they take stuff out, like;

PEGASUS: Of course not! I want to test these things!

 

(PEGASUS takes out some large disks from his bag)

 

JOVI: Duel Disks?

 

See, like that. Plus Kaiba sold them.

 

PEGASUS: Yeah! We are gonna sell these, but we have to test these first. You are the

lucky one to be my opponent!

 

Kaiba sold them, I tells ya. It’s your story, but I just want to know when you

change facts. Plus is this really a story? It’s a script, but what do I know…

 

JOVI: It’s an honor! Let the Duel begin!

 

JOVI & PEGASUS: DUEL!!!!

 

Both start with full 8000 LP

 

That’s a first. Anime style with 8000. I know it’s done a lot, but I just like 4000.

 

PEGASUS: I’m first! Draw! I summon Ancient Gear in Attack Mode, then I Special

Summon another Ancient Gear by its own effect! Then Spell Card, Double Summon,

activate! By Double Summon’s effect, I can Normal Summon one more monster, so I

Tribute 2 Ancient Gears to summon Ancient Gear Golem! I Set two cards, turn end.

 

WOAH! We see all of this, but you gave no attempts to show what the monsters looked

like! We SHOULD know, but we don’t. Really, I wish that you said that AGG was a ‘big

hulking mass of steel about ready to collapse from rust’ or anything like that.

 

JOVI: Great, Ancient Gear Golem in the first turn! This is exciting! My turn, draw.

Field Spell activate, Skyscraper! Now every time an Elemental Hero battles a monster

with higher ATK, it gains 1000 ATK. And I activate my Spell Card, Polymerization! I

fuse Elemental Hero Avian and Elemental Hero Burstinatrix to Fusion Summon Elemental

Hero Flame Wingman! Elemental Hero Flame Wingman, attack Gear Golem, Infernal Rage!

 

NOOOOO!! NOT E-HEROES! It’s reminding me of GX!! No, I HATE GX! Argh…get Jaden away…

 

PEGASUS: What!? (LP: 7900)

 

JOVI: Flame Wingman monster’s effect! Whenever it destroys a monster, it inflicts

damage to your Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster!

 

PEGASUS: Nice one! (LP: 4900) But I activate Trap Card, Michizure! Whenever my

monster is destroyed, I destroy another monster! So I destroy your Flame Wingman!

 

JOVI: Flame Wingman!? Darn! I activate Continuous Spell, Future Fusion! By sending

Elemental Hero Clayman and Bubbleman from my Deck to the Graveyard, in my 2nd

Standby Phase after this card activation, I summon Elemental Hero Mudballman! I Set

a card, and end my turn.

 

Why him?!

 

PEGASUS: In your End Phase I activate Continuous Trap, Solemn Wishes! Every tome I

draw, I gain 500 LP. A’right, it’s my turn, draw! (LP: 5400) I summon Ancient Gear

Knight! You have no monster left! Ancient Gear Knight, Direct Attack!

 

Waaaaah! I have no time to stop and rest with descriptions! My mind is on overdrive

and I can’t pay attention to what they’re saying! Argh!

 

JOVI: Trap Card activates, Negate Attack! Huh, it was so close.

 

PEGASUS: My turn ends here.

 

JOVI: My turn, draw. I summon Elemental Hero Prisma! Activate Prisma’s effect. I

reveal Shining Flare Wingman, so I send Sparkman from my Deck to the Graveyard. Now

Prisma’s name is treated as Sparkman. Prisma, attack Ancient Gear Knight!

 

But why did he do that? He didn’t NEED to use Prisma’s ability.7

 

PEGASUS: (LP: 4500)

 

JOVI: Turn End.

 

PEGASUS: My turn, draw. (LP: 5000). Great! You’ve come! I activate Spell Card,

Ancient Miracle! By removing from play Ancient Gear Golem and 2 Ancient Gears, I

Fusion Summon Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem! Ultimate Golem, attack Prisma!

 

No card description? No ‘This card allows me to fuse any two ancient gear monsters

with ancient gear golem in my graveyard to fusion summon ACUG’?! Darn.

 

JOVI: (LP: 5300)

 

PEGASUS: Turn End.

 

JOVI: My turn, draw. (Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem, a powerful monster with its

invulnerability against Trap Card and Spell Card in when it attacks! How do I defeat

it?) The effect of Future Fusion activates. I Fusion Summon Mudballman. Set a card,

Turn End.

 

You know it would be neat if we didn’t summon that.

 

PEGASUS: My turn, draw! (LP: 5500) Quick-Play Spell, Mystical Space Typhoon,

activates! I destroy your Future Fusion! Because your Future Fusion is destroyed,

your Mudballman is also destroyed! So I launch a Direct Attack!

 

JOVI: Huaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! (LP: 900) That hurts! But I activate Trap Card,

Compensation. For each multiple of 1000 points of Battle Damage I took, I draw 1

card. I took 4400 points of Battle Damage, so I draw 4 cards.

 

PEGASUS: Turn End. So what are you gonna do? You only have 900 Life Points left.

 

JOVI: Let’s see. It’s my turn, draw. Hey, thanks because you attacked me! Now I’ll

activate my 2nd Polymerization! I fuse Dark Magician and Buster Blader, come forth,

Dark Paladin!

 

WOOOOAH!!! HE JUST USED DARK MAGICIAN!! HE’S YUGI YUKI!! WAAAAUGH!!

 

PEGASUS: But its ATK is only 2900. My Ultimate Golem has 4400 ATK. One final blow

from Ultimate Golem toward Dark Paladin would end this Duel!

 

JOVI: It’s not over yet! Spell Card, Miracle Fusion activates! I remove Flame

Wingman and Sparkman in my Graveyard from play. Fusion Summon, Shining Flare

Wingman!

 

So THAAAT’S why he discarded Spark Man!

 

PEGASUS: What!

 

JOVI: Shining Flare Wingman gains 300 ATK for each Elemental Hero in my Graveyard. I

have six Elemental Heroes; they are Bubbleman, Clayman, Burstinatrix, Avian, Prisma,

and Mudballman. Shining Flare Wingman gains 1800 ATK, so now its ATK is 4300 points

and it gives damage to your Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster it destroys!

Go, Shining Flare Wingman, attack Ultimate Golem. Solar Flare!

 

PEGASUS: (LP: 200)

 

JOVI: Dark Paladin, Direct Attack! Super Magician Killer Wave!

 

What kind of attack name is THAT?!

 

PEGASUS: No!!!!!! (LP: 0) I lost again! I thought I would win this time!

 

JOVI: Thanks for the Duel! Here’s your Duel Disk.

 

PEGASUS: No, it’s yours. Take that as a prize because you beat me. Beside, after

seeing the Duel Disks’ performance, I’m gonna make a tournament in this town using

the Duel Disks next month. I hope you participate. Maybe it would be your first time

to win a tournament

 

You didn’t add a period to the end.

 

JOVI: Tournament?! I’d love too! Yeah, I’m gonna participate in.

 

PEGASUS: Good. Oh, gotta go. See you in the tourney!

 

JOVI: Bye! (A tournament, huh?)

[align=center]

 

What a short ending.

 

Comment please....And if you have some questions, don't be shy to ask

me.[/align]

 

This first chapter isn’t good at all. It’s too fast-paced for me to comprehend!

Pegasus is a stalker! Jovi is Jaden and Yugi’s son! I’m confused. The story didn’t make enough sense at first! But don’t despair, I’m not just going to review the first chapter. I’ll also be looking at three other chapters: the end of the battle city arc, the beginning of the next arc and the chapter you’re on now. I’ll post my next review next week.

 

 

Well, yeah, I sucked at first episodes. When I wrote this first chapters, I really like Yugi and Judai, so I made my characters based on both. But now I think I wanna based on Yugi only. Yes, you can complain on that. I sucked, a lot, I repeat, a lot, in the first episodes. But at least my main character isn't like Yugi or Judai, who don't lose even once in 1 season. To spoil you a bit, until this chapter, my character has lost twice. Relax, I don't like characters like Yugi or even Judai, either. And I'm sure most of my readers don't, too. But thanks for reviewing, anyway.

[Weather Report - Stand]

Don't worry, I also want to say how good the other chapters get, since I talked about doing other reviews. Sure, it sucks at first, but I had hope for it, even when I saw Pegasus lose to a...guy. I SHALL RETURN NEXT FRIDAY OR SO!!

[Jovi Siagian]

I'm waiting for your coming. ;)

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump

[Jovi Siagian]

Bump