Dragonslasher Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 My first cards the Collection is now finshied i am just a beginner pls make commys: Created by BenTennyson&Dragonslasherwe hope u liked them.:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghjkl462 Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 bad 1/10 ultimate naruto should be nine tailed fox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 ok thx for your commy and your hornesty.:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Try with better pics for kakashi and rage mode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 ok i will try it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 WHY!? It's plain to the naked eye that these cards are atrocious, wrong, and simply void of grammar.FAIL/5. You need to lrn2ygo before you lrn2ycm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Ok sry for my grammar i am not so good at english&and thx for your hornesty.I will try to make my next collection better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 OCG errors Good pictures 6/10 make sure you fix the effects. I'm rewriting the effects the correct way No OCG errors[spoiler=Fixed Effects]Rage Mode effect should beIf there is a "Genin Naruto on the field this card increases its attack by 1000 for 3 turns Your original Rage Mode card makes Genin Naruto Oped (overpowered)Switch "Anbu Transformation" to an effect monster because no ritual spell Anbu Transformation effect should be:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can only special summon this monster by sacrificing 2 "Kakashi" to special summon "Anbu Transformation".With this monster on the field every Konoha-Ninja on your side of the field gains 400 attack and 200 defense pointsGenin Naruto good as isKakashi good as isThe Nine Tail Fox effect should be : Genin Naruto + Genin Naruto + Genin NarutoWhen this monster is on the field destroy all monster cards on your opponent's side of the field Uchia's forever good as isSasuke Uchia good as isSwitch "Demon Sasuke" to a effect monster because no ritual spellsDemon Sasuke effect should be:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can only special summon this monster by sacrificing 2 "Sasuke Uchia" If "Demon Sasuke" is on the field all Konoha-Ninja on your side of field aren't effected by traps Change the effects and edit your thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Very big thanks for your help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Pretty good, but be more specific with your effects and Kakashi needs to be a little more powerful than 1900 ATK points. ^^ 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 thx for your answer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasri1993 Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Not worse for your first try....i like it and i hope that you will make more card :)Every new card is a new experience ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Better, but still not up to par. 2.5/5.Keep trying ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonslasher Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Thx for your commys.I will try to make more Cards and a new Collection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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