Flame Dragon Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 These were some of the first cards I made. They have changed alot but are the same at the core.P.S. They don't have periods. This is because 40 of the card I made before I joined the forms and I don't want to retype all of my card effects just to add peroids. Most of the art came from DeviantArt, so I thank them for the pics. If any of them do not want me useing their pic, please tell me what card it is and I will change the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superjay Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 charazard or what ever should be more stars and a bit more powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Put periods at the end. Plus, I find Charizard's effect a little short.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdiddy Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 There Overpowered and I dont like pokemon so 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Can you explain how they are Overpowered so I can fix them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdiddy Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Some of them have high attacks for their level and some have high defences for their level. And some have very low defence but they look like the defence should be higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bdiddy Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Card's Grammer sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Can you explain whats wrong with the card's Grammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 1) The last sentence of every card has no period and most, if not all, cards are missing commas and apostraphes.2) Some cards have incorrect spelling (ex. Swellow it's spelled discard, not descard) Remember, I'm crtitcizing as a friend.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Edited some of my cards. Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windmasterwynn Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Most of 'em are really cool. But that Pokeball. You should make it less life points. And legendary Pokemon really don't need to be 12 stared. Besides the grammer and such...>.> Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 cool cards but you shod make them evolve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 great pics 10/10 and 9/10 for the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 they are good cards, but some are overpowered. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Era Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 pretty good overpowered..6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 How can I make them less overpowered. P.S working on new ones now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 slightly better 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Add - Mew, Darkrai, Arceus, Jirachi Edit - Rhyperior, Abomasnow, Swellow, Mothim, Gengar, and AlakazamI will post the new version mid Friday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 awsome pics 10/10 and the effects rock 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yorobot Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Oh come on. Not MORE Pokemon cards? I already gave my opinion on another Pokemon cards thread so I won`t do it here. But still, there were too many Pokemon-like Yugioh cards. I hope people will realize there are too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Oh come on. Not MORE Pokemon cards? I already gave my opinion on another Pokemon cards thread so I won`t do it here. But still' date=' there were too many Pokemon-like Yugioh cards. I hope people will realize there are too much.[/quote'] I wouldn't count on it lol. Bastionsgirl's were the best, and I haven't seen any better ones. Nice cards though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 Thanks Star*Trainer. And yes Bastionsgirl's pokemon cards are really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doji33 Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 9/10I like um... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 wow good pics for arcues and darkrai, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted August 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 Added Deoxys - Normal, Attack, Defence, and Speedplease comment on my new and old cards P.S. going to start editting Rhyperior, Abomasnow, Swellow, Mothim, Gengar, and Alakazam now. New versions sould be up before tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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