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My First Splice I think it looks okay


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The first problem I have with it is the tail. The tail should not be in front of the wing, but behind it. Speaking of wings, you simply mirrored it, which would be fine if you had bother to reshade them. Nextly you have some major recolor issues. The tail you were making blue, but in areas where it should be like you have dark blue. Also a few borders are messed up, not to mention with the wing right there it's really screwy.

 

Borders in general are pretty bad. They are thick in some areas like around the head. In others they are reshaded, like all the dark purple lines. On the wings it also looks like you lost the borders.

 

Overall this splice needs a lot more polish. You skimped on a lot of minor details greatly dropping the quality. Also congratulations, I've now decided to go back to not giving score out of 10. I congratulate you because you're the first experience me going back to my old critique methods (giving out of 10 is annoying and everyone sees the out of 10 scores in a different light).

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