Yurasuma Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 This is a new Archetype I created. I hope you enjoy them! :D Sorry about Nuclear Assault Striker, here's the effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 5 "Rising Sun" monsters on your side of the field. While this card is on your side of the field, once per turn you may discard 1 "Rising Sun Nuclear Strike" from your hand to destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. When you activate this effect only this card can attack this turn. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. While this card is on your side of the field, all "Rising Sun" monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF. lol My own Metal Gear. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Names:8/10 they are okEffects: 8/10 overused effectsPics: 6/10 dude... those are photographs.Ocg: 8/10 ok ocgTotal30/40Nice work for you 2nd post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yurasuma Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Awsome thanx man!:) Yeah I know what you mean about the pics. Couldn't really find any drawings that looked good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 O.o Why do I have this feeling it's either in the wrong section or the photos arent to good... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Holy **** these are phenomenal for a new member! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 wait... it's a new member O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yurasuma Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Um... Thank you. :). Wow I'm speechless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Suprisingly good OCG/grammar for a new member. here are some errors though: one = 1 deck = Deck may = can The picture are good, except they really should not be real photos. The effects seem fine aswell. Nice job, keep up the good work. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Well They are pretty good for a newbie 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yurasuma Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Wow everyone thanx for all the support. So I still had more of those one's may's and decks? Can someone please tell me where they are on the cards? Yeah I know the pictures are a little crazy with the real-life soldiers and all, but I seriously don't know where to find better ones. If someone does could they let me know so I can change them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Hey buddy :P Hasent been on forz a while Nice Guns >=] I likez the cards sucks ya couldnt get drawingz but I have 2 say about 8.9/10 :D About time i got a friend on this :P I Haz beenz lonely since i Joined Ive been Like XP No1 to talk to and all that so yea :P Gunna make more cards again Hope ya like em :DBtw I like Z :D (If you didnt notice :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 THOSE ARE FREAKING PICS>>>> LOVE THEM>..... although some are blurry.... i give it 9/10 pretty awesome for a new member.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moey94 Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 i dont like them tht much sorry5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Bad, bad pics. Don't use photos. Nice effects, not too bad OCG, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yurasuma Posted October 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Thanx everyone :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 I looked at your cards like you asked. A few of the monsters should have their boosts cut a little. None should exceed +300 per monster, considering how many of them you can amass. Aside from that, and the photo-pictures (I'll look around for some), the set is really good. This is perhaps the best set I have seen on the site. You have carefully thought out each effect, balancing them to create a very realistic series. I did not dwell on nit-picky OCG. I saw no objection, though I did not check capitalization. I never would have expected to see a set this good, let alone by a "n00b" (you are one because you are new, but that is the extent of it in your case). You get a 10 out of 10. I would lower that because of pictures, but good ones for your set are difficult to find. I am giving you a rep for your unique and logical mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yegor40 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 its need to be in finished sets25 cards.if its a deck its can be 25*2=50 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Great OCG. Very good for a new member, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yurasuma Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Thanx for the assist Voncsent. Glad you liked them. Love that Oddworld Pic btw. Awsome game!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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