Naruto: Life of a Ninja (Season 2 -- Now Accepting Members!)

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

Name: Daichi

Age: 16

Village: Leaf

[spoiler=App: ]

 

[spoiler=Weapon: ]sword witch has a blade made of compressed water (ice)

 

Jutsu: All water jutsu, & jutsu gained by controlling the water in my sword.

And is able to turn his body in to water.

[spoiler=Blood line: Morphing ability.] allows him to acquire the DNA of any animal he touches & afterward he can become an exact replica of the animal he touches.

 

Advantages: stronger in water.

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OOC: I still haven't figured out whether or not we are actually allowing more registrants, or if GHawk has just plain forgotten about this thread.

 

*Ria is still lying on the ground, unconscious.*

 

(Well, what else could I write? I'm waiting for Champster or 4tutoralcom.)

[4tutoralcom]

ooC:Sorry! didn't know you were waiting fort me.

Hira was looking around the village glad to be back, but worried that Navra was back from the dead. and he saw a figure colapse at the gate.

Hira:"Onie if you are not in to much shock someone collapsed at the gate."

Onie looked over at the gate.

Onie:"Is that Ria."

Onie and Hira walked over to the gate to wake her up.

Hira:"Ria are you alright."

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*edited version*

Hira was looking around the village glad to be back, but worried that Navra was back from the dead.

Hira:" We need to stop by our house and get something."

Onie was still in shock.

Hira:" I don't want to do this."

Hira hug his teeth in to Onie's leg, hopefully the pain would wake him up.

Onie:"OW! Hira why did you do that. That really hurt."

Hira:" House know Go. We need to get something there before the mission. Navra is back and we need to prepare. "

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OOC: It didn't have to actually be you, it could be either you or Champster, because you are both at the gate.

 

And just to let you know, if you read that, it sounds SO BLAND.

 

It sounds like this:

 

"Hey, somebody's on the ground."

"Yeah, I guess so. I think it's [insert name here]."

"Yeah, I think so too. Let's go check it out."

"Oh. It really is. Hey, you awake?"

"Huh. I guess not then."

 

That's how bland it sounds like... o_o...

[4tutoralcom]

ooC:Edited: also I never asked if she was awake. I did not say if she was all right, nor did any one respond to that. I relay couldn't figure out what to say before. Also relay I didn't care. Scene I can’t decide what to say. I wont put I saw Ria part I will act like I never saw her.

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OOC: Err... I have no idea what you just said right now... Your spelling errors make it really hard to understand >.<...

 

Anyways, let's hear Champster's input.

[4tutoralcom]

ooC:"Not spelling errors, punctuation errors. also the way i write. I write how i talk, Funny thing is no one can also understand how i talk. :lol:

ooC: do you want me to explain what i said.

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OOC: No, there are spelling errors. You spell really as relay, and since as scene.

 

Also, I don't really see much of an improvement after you corrected it.

 

I understood what you wrote the first time, I just wanted to see how you would fix it. And that failed miserably.

 

Anyways, let's see Champster's input. Maybe you should do something like: "Yo! Ashido! Fainted girl alert! Come check this out!" Or something. Just a suggestion.

[Wuu.]

"I want to go on the mission!" Yiraia said while irritatingly walking around "Now!"

[~The Red Crusader~]

Zeo noticed that Hyoma isn't performing any Jutsu. He then realized that Hyoma has something other in mind. "Hurricane Slash!" he yelled, and used up most of the chakra he had left, and the Jian he held became plain white because of the wind around it. Zeo ran towards Shiro, swinging the sword, intending to deal the fatal blow to him, and saw Hyoma doing the same. "You think well, Hyoma Zeros. Thank you." he thought.

 

Shiro was not desperate in this situation. He used up more of his chakra, and enhanced the great ball. Now, it was twice as big. Same as the hatred for his brother. "Come on, you weakling! My Wind is stronger than yours!" he said, forgetting about the Dragon boy, who possessed the powers of Fire...

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

"You forgot me!!! My fire will burn at your soul!!! It will be the guide to the underworld while the wind sweeps you there!!" Hyoma continued his charge. Zeo and him were closing in. "Let the fire eliminate you! You will die for your horrible deeds!"

[~The Red Crusader~]

Shiro lost his confidence. "I'm going to die... BUT I'M TAKING YOU WITH ME, ZEO!" he yelled, and aimed the ball towards Zeo...

 

Zeo was not hit by these words. He continued the rush, and his jian was stronger than ever. Zeo and Shiro launched their attack simultaneously... "Just pierce through the ball, Hyoma!" Zeo yelled the words, which could be his last ones...

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Hyoma ran in front of the ball of wind and crashed it with his sword. "Zeo finish him! I don't know how long I can hold this jutsu off. At least capture him if you can't go through it."

[~The Red Crusader~]

As Hyoma held back the ball, Zeo dealed the last, critical blow to Shiro. The air-infused sword pierced through his robe, and reached his heart. The bad guy was killed instatntly, and fell down to the ground. Zeo pulled out his Jiand out of his brother's chest, and triumphally raised it. "Victory!" he yelled. The Jounin gave his hand to Hyoma, and congratulated him. "You should become a Jounin. You are strong. I am no match for you, no matter my age and experience."

[4tutoralcom]

OoC: any way I will not change it. I all ready said I left, to go get something at my house, I will just wait for your character to get up, and I am not going to change it. Merry Christmas!!

[Champster]

OOC: Happy Holidays everyone! =P

Sorry, I couldn't reply because I was having a break for the Holidays. in fact, I'm still on a break, but I got bored and wanted to reply. xP

And Visser, you forgot to put the name of your character in your template. ;D

 

IC:

 

[Haru's slow, painful death...]

 

"There is no need to lift a finger on him, Kazuki..." Shinzui grinned, a strange hissing noise was heard from within him as he spoke. "If I had the time, I'd make you one of my new specimens for a technique I've been developing, but sadly, I cannot. oh well, I suppose you'll work as a lab rat for one of my new drugs." Suddenly, Haru felt weak and dizzy from inhaling Shinzui's odorless, undetected poison drug that had tainted the air. "What is this...poison!?!" Haru coughed as he spoke, covering his mouth with his left arm.

"Its no ordinary poison, I assure you. and don't worry, you won't die immediately...yet" said Shinzui, chuckling soon afterwards. "This new drug of mine has three stages before the poor victim dies, a sudden feeling of dizziness and loss of fatigue is the first. the second is where certain parts of your body will be paralyzed from time to time, and of course, chakra reserves won't replenish that often. the third stage is quite amusing, your body temperature will heat up at an accelerated rate, causing you to cough up blood and one or several of your organs won't function as normally as it should have. once you've experienced all those, your body will slowly stop functioning, causing you to die in a rather painful death."

 

"Damn it, I should of came prepared..." Haru knelt to his left knee as he spoke, his arms and legs felt heavy, his eyesight was nothing but a blur. "Oh, and I strongly suggest that you stay here, otherwise, you'll just speed up the process of the drugs' stages if you move" Shinzui walked towards Kazuki as he spoke, giving him an anti-dote. "Take this and drink it if you happen to inhale my drug, Kazuki. I don't want a specimen filled with bacteria during I experiment your body" he chuckled manically before he spoke. "Lets go, Kazuki, I've gone bored of this place. the person whom we're suppose to meet was either him or was killed by him."

 

[Meanwhile, back in the Leaf Village...]

 

"Immortality? the person who attacked us is Navra, and he's immortal?" the Hokage pondered after she spoke, pleased that Onie and Hira were able to give her some vital information about the enemy. "If you happen to know any other information about the Akatsuki, you know where to find me. and good luck during this mission..." she spun around and walked towards the Hokage Mansion as she spoke.

 

Elsewhere, Ashido noticed a female had fallen not far from where they stood. "Hey! are you alr-..." he spoke, but stopped in mid-sentence when he finally noticed that it was Ria. "Its Ria..." he thought, running towards her. "Ria, are you alright? can you speak? what happened?" he asked several questions, kneeling beside her.

[~The Red Crusader~]

OoC: Holy Crap Haru Serap is dead!

Btw, happy holidays to all! I must wait for Christmas till 7th January...

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

OOC: Oops, the names "Daichi".

[valocaraptor]

may i join

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OOC: Oops' date=' the names "Daichi".

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Double post much?

 

may i join

 

OOC: I vote no.

 

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*Ria is still on the ground unconscious.*

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

OoC: I would recommend no. ^

 

Hyoma and Zeo

 

"That's why I'm taking the jonin test. I really do appreciate that everybody thinks I should become one but I'm going to earn it. I'm never going to take the easy way. I will become strong. Northing will stop that. I will get respect." Hyoma started to walk away.

 

Kazuki and Shinzi

 

"I think we're going to get along just fine."

 

OoC: Not much to say with Kazuki. Happy Holidays (To be politicaly correct.) Screw that! Merry Christmas!!!!

[~The Red Crusader~]

"Farawell, Hyoma. Our paths will cross another day." Zeo said, and made some handsigns. Next, he was in the Shinoda Clan Meeting Room, where all the Shinoda Clan members were. "I brt you haven't heared wht happened?" Zeo asked the other clan members. When the answer was "no", he explained everything.

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OOC: Rofl. Sword not included.

 

And I don't think we're even accepting any members, even though the title's like that.

[Champster]

[The Duo Menace Has Finally Arrived...]

 

After waiting impatiently for Ria to wake up, which she didn't, Ashido formed his hands into a hand seal before speaking, "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" he muttered, a clone of himself instantly appeared beside him as he did. "Take her to the hospital, and find out what exactly happened to her..." he ordered, his clone simply nodded once and carefully lifted Ria up with both arms. "From the looks of it, she's not injured in anyway, so she might be just tired. I'd take her to the hospital myself, but I need to go on this mission...I can't let Ria get hurt again like the last time" he thought, signaling his Shadow Clone to take Ria to the hospital.

 

"Who's the broad..." said a man that stood behind Ashido, looking at the female shinobi, whom was carried by Ashido's Shadow Clone. Ashido's eyes widened by the man's sudden appearance, he turned to look over his shoulder where he saw a man in a dark cloak with red clouds, standing a few feet from him. "When did he..." Ashido muttered, his eyes widened even more when he saw the man's attire. grabbing a kunai from his pouch with his left hand, Ashido quickly aimed to slit the man's throat. much to Ashido's surprise, the man immediately grabbed Ashido's left arm with amazing speed, faster then the former ANBU Captain could keep track of.

"I know you, you're that guy from earlier before..." the Akatsuki member finally replied, twisting Ashido's arm to a point where he drops the kunai from his hand. Ashido grunted as the man pushed him to the ground, covering his left arm with his right as he fell.

"I suppose a little warm up wouldn't hurt, now would it" Ryo spoke, grinning at the thought of killing both Ashido and Ria. "Go, and get help!" Ashido shouted to his Shadow Clone. "Navra, stop the Shadow Clone!" he shouted, instructing Navra to dispose of the Shadow Clone while he deals with the former ANBU Captain.

 

[shinzui's Orders...]

 

"Normally, I don't kill people before I do some experimentation on their bodies, its easier for me if they're alive when I do..." Shinzui sighed before he spoke, disappointed of himself of killing someone intentionally before doing some experiments on their body's. "Eh?" he suddenly raised an eyebrow as he spoke, listening to the Leader that had recently contacted him through a jutsu only members of the Akatsuki knew of.

"Did he now, that fool. oh well, I suppose while I'm there, I could get a living specimen..." he murmured, turning around and walking towards the Hidden Leaf Village. "Ryo decided to attack the Leaf Village on his own, with Navra, of course. I have orders to either bring him back dead or alive. you're free to join me, but I'd suggest you stay behind if you want to go things as according to plan" he said, slowly disappearing into a small forestry.

 

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Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique

Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own.

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*While Ria is being carried by Ashido's clone, blood starts to pour out of the side of her mouth slowly.*

 

OOC: Meh, I want this to be dramatic >.>.