Jump to content

Naruto: Life of a Ninja (Season 2 -- Now Accepting Members!)


GHawk

Recommended Posts

The Shadow Clone and Zeo both collided, but Zeo proved to be the better swordsman as he struck his Jian at the Clones' arms, exploding on impact. "Idiot, you should have dodged that Shadow Clone" Seigen grinned greatly as he spoke, walking towards him as he drew a paper bomb and a kunai from his pouch, knowing that the Jounin fell right into his trap. the Shadow Clone turned into a bolt of lightning as soon as it was destroyed, shocking Zeo, thus paralyzing him, hence, he was too close to react.

Meanwhile, Ashido turned to his Shadow Clone and simply nodded, knowing that his Shadow Clone knew what to do next. Ashido turned forward, running towards Zeo's aid while the Shadow Clone performed multiple strings of hand seals.

 

 

OoC:

Just so you know, Wuja, Seigen said "Raiton: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu" from that last post. I intentionally left out the "Raiton:", as if your character didn't hear that part. ;D

And 4, I already replied to your post, look at the top of this page and you'll see that I did. I instructed your character to help Takashi since...well, he's no match against the Akatsuki he's (or was) currently fighting.

 

______________________

Raiton: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Release: Shadow Clone Technique

This technique allows the user to make a clone infused with lightning that, when destroyed, turns into a bolt of lightning that shocks and paralyzes the opponent.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Replies 2k
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Ria (thought): I gotta.. get... out of here..

 

*Ria unsheathes a bit of her Mani Katti, and a large and bright light from the sky beams straight down at Ria. The environment darkens in a second, and a large flicker of light flashes, and Ria disappears. She reappears on the ground, beside the hut from before. Her eyes are still closed, and she has no idea where she is.*

 

Ria (thought): Did it work...? I have no idea anymore. I can't see. I can't open my eyes. They hurt too much... Can't anybody help me?

 

*Ria tries to feel around for anything, but doesn't seem to be touching anything other than the ground.*

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Noki now finishes with her hand signs and a huge thunder storm apporchs in an ominous way "Now feel the power of my lighting Takashi." As Takashi turned around he notices the others "Guys' date=' how long have you been here?"

[/quote']

 

OOC:

 

1. How did you NOT notice the enormous flash of light?

2. Wow... NOW you notice that the guys have been fighting? >.>...

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OOC: The flash of light illuminated the whole sky, causing it to become engulfed in a moment of darkness, because of the adjustment by your eye's tone.

 

Ok, basically, it was very large, could spread everywhere, and it is impossible to not have been seen.

 

I'm just TRYING to make it look cooler, but your making it seem like it's nothing... >.>...

Link to comment
Share on other sites

"I am Zeo Shinoda. A Jounin from the Leaf. Your skills seem to be ANBU-ranked. Who are you then?"' date=' said Zeo, and returned his Jian to his right hand. [i']"He must have planned out something. His question was there just to take some time."[/i] Zeo thought, and decided to use his weapon as his last line of defense. Since his chakra was nearly wasted, he had no choice but to prove the title of the Swordmaster...

 

On the other side of the bridge, he saw Takashi run for his life. "He'd better have a reason to run away. If he distracts me in any way, I'm not goin to survive against this ex-ANBU. Ashido Hashi, our fate is in your hands... Save those kids!" he thought.

 

 

OoC: How does he know? -_-

Onie and hira came in.

Onie:"Need our help." they were standing on a tree.

hira:"Did the scrole we gave you get destroyed' date=' you could have summoned us."

[/quote']

 

Who are you talking to. O.o

OoC:Spell check Scrole i meant scroll

 

Anyone that can here my voice. were the fight is happening. it was ment as a bad joke.

I was speaking to who ever got the scroll. My person dosn't know who got it, but sence you responded i will say i was talking to you.

 

OoC: 1) Takashi had the scroll. 2) You gave it to Takashi.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

"I am Zeo Shinoda. A Jounin from the Leaf. Your skills seem to be ANBU-ranked. Who are you then?"' date=' said Zeo, and returned his Jian to his right hand. [i']"He must have planned out something. His question was there just to take some time."[/i] Zeo thought, and decided to use his weapon as his last line of defense. Since his chakra was nearly wasted, he had no choice but to prove the title of the Swordmaster...

 

On the other side of the bridge, he saw Takashi run for his life. "He'd better have a reason to run away. If he distracts me in any way, I'm not goin to survive against this ex-ANBU. Ashido Hashi, our fate is in your hands... Save those kids!" he thought.

 

 

OoC: How does he know? -_-

 

I don't know how to respond to that, so I'll simply leave it to Wuja to reply, even though that question was directed towards Wuja >_<

Onie and hira came in.

Onie:"Need our help." they were standing on a tree.

hira:"Did the scrole we gave you get destroyed' date=' you could have summoned us."

[/quote']

 

Who are you talking to. O.o

OoC:Spell check Scrole i meant scroll

 

Anyone that can here my voice. were the fight is happening. it was ment as a bad joke.

I was speaking to who ever got the scroll. My person dosn't know who got it, but sence you responded i will say i was talking to you.

 

OoC: 1) Takashi had the scroll. 2) You gave it to Takashi.

 

OoC: Lets make an exception, eh? besides, we're already slightly far ahead to edit those mistakes...then again, nobody really replied to 4's character, other than me of course. =P

Anyways, I suppose I should tone it down a bit on my half (with Seigen and all that). I'm starting to think that I'm in control of this RP and whatnot. =|

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OOC: No no' date=' your not in control of this RP[/b']. You need to show more fighting between Seigen and the other guys, or else I'll just be stalled here.

 

Oh, and make it randomly happen that you find out I disappeared. You also saw the flash of light.

 

OoC: What I really meant was, I'm starting to think we're headed towards a filler, and not the real main plot of the RP (which is the attack of Akatsuki). also, its the person who is in charge of this RP that should really be...bah! I lost my point. >.>'

And to answer your second thingy, my intention on that matter was to wait until the battle was over, then, Ashido would later find out that Ria is gone (Which is the same thing as you stated...me thinks).

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: He's not controlling it. He's just putting in a filler at a horrible time and because he added another villian that was designed especially for himself he is controlling it and either Ashido or even maybe Ria will be the one to kill him in the end. It actually seems like Champster is trying to take control of the RP. As I said horrible time for it.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OOC: Well, this is highly expected in an RP. Random characters fighting from far away distances that it feels like there are multiple fillers.

 

Besides, the Akatsuki attacking is a very broad topic. You really need to narrow it down to a more specific reason to have the RP more consistent.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: *Sigh.* Try again tetra. Unbelievably random fights such as this mess up the plot especially when a fight that doesn't affect anything but Ria and Ashido while a battle that actually affects the plot is right next to it. They are okay for on occasions right now is just not a good time. Champster you are trying to get way to much character development in a short time.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: He's not controlling it. He's just putting in a filler at a horrible time and because he added another villian that was designed especially for himself he is controlling it and either Ashido or even maybe Ria will be the one to kill him in the end. It actually seems like Champster is trying to take control of the RP. As I said horrible time for it.

 

OoC: u.u

I tried aiming towards where my character and Seigen battle with each other alone while the others dealt with the female Akatsuki, but things got in the way and next thing you know, this happens. that's why I sent 4's character to help LZ's character. >.>'

And besides, as I stated earlier, I'd tone it down with Seigen, and attempt to focus on helping LZ's character.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: I suggest having Seigen fleeing because 1) He wanted a one on one against Ashido and 2) He is being extremely outnumbered. It's just a suggestion so if you don't want to do it don't do it.

 

OoC: Stop spoiling the next part...

>_>'

Anyways, that's what I wanted to do (before you even suggested that), but right now, I'm just waiting for Wuja to come on and post so that we can continue on the main story.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: He's not even on. Why not a cheap quick shot knocking him away. He is pretty weak at the moment so it would be nothing for Siegen. Then he talks some trash and a little why he is leaving and leaves. Sorry but I can't actually spoil it if I didn't know what he was going to do. You're the one that said you were going to do that.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: I already planned a way for Seigen to leave, but since he's a stubborn character, I can't simply make him leave solely because he's outnumbered. sure, I'm controlling him and whatnot, but that would go against his characteristic and whatnot. but if it really means much to you (or at least the main plot), than I'll skip him and make sure that Zeo is hit (which goes against the rules of the RP), and carry on with or without Zeo. would you like that to happen to you? I didn't think so.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: 4 did a pretty cheap hit, so I believe you would be okay. If four didn't get in trouble then you won't. Well I'm just probaly not going to post for a little while because my character isn't involved in this so there would be no point in doing something with my character right now. I'm just saying that this battle was at a horrible time.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OoC: To end this pointless little discussion (not exactly pointless, but I always wanted to say that >.>'), I'll simply skip Wuja's turn and continue on with the RP, so that we can continue with the main story and other whatnot. although, I don't really like it when I do skip someones turn when they have a chance to reply, or at least, replying to my attack there. also, I spared Zeo from getting hitting. =P

 

IC:

"What was that just now..." Ashido muttered as he looked over his shoulder, light illuminating from where Ria was as he tried to ignore it as best as he could. "Ria better not disappear on us again" he thought as he drew his dagger and held on to it with his left hand. "Lets end this, shall we?" Seigen attached a paper bomb on his kunai as he spoke, drawing closer and closer towards the paralyzed Jounin. if Seigen were to reach him, he'd simply stab Zeo in the chest and disappear off towards a safe distance, and would eventually activate the paper bomb, instantly killing the disabled Jounin.

 

However, just before Seigen could stab him, Ashido quickly used Body Replacement Technique on Zeo, effectively replacing Zeo with himself. caught off guard, Ashido immediately grabbed Seigen's arm which he held the kunai, while attempting to strike Seigen's right arm with his dagger. not enough time to react, Ashido quickly thrusts and impales Seigen's upper right arm, thus paralyzing his entire arm. "Its pointless now, Seigen. with your right arm completely paralyzed, you cannot perform any jutsu's" Ashido sighed as he spoke, relieved that Seigen was not a threat to anyone anymore. Seigen slowly lowered his head, as if he admitted defeat. the pain he had endured disappeared when the paralysis took effect and had mostly covered his entire right arm.

 

"Idiot, if this is indeed the end, then I'll simply kill us both!" Seigen grinned as he spoke, laughing shortly afterwards as he raised his head. Ashido realized what he was getting at and quickly let his grip go off of Seigen's left arm. Seigen immediately dropped the kunai that was attached to a paper bomb at the end of it and spoke. "Exploding Tag: Activate!" Seigen yelled as both of them jumped backwards as quickly as they could. the paper bomb ignited and within moments, it caused a small explosion. "Shi-..." Ashido thought as he and Seigen were caught in the explosion, both hurled towards the opposite direction from where it exploded. Ashido landed hard beside Zeo while Seigen fell towards the ocean below them, unknown to all if he had survived or not.

 

__________

Body Replacement Technique - Kawarimi no Jutsu

This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

"I am Zeo Shinoda. A Jounin from the Leaf. Your skills seem to be ANBU-ranked. Who are you then?"' date=' said Zeo, and returned his Jian to his right hand. [i']"He must have planned out something. His question was there just to take some time."[/i] Zeo thought, and decided to use his weapon as his last line of defense. Since his chakra was nearly wasted, he had no choice but to prove the title of the Swordmaster...

 

On the other side of the bridge, he saw Takashi run for his life. "He'd better have a reason to run away. If he distracts me in any way, I'm not goin to survive against this ex-ANBU. Ashido Hashi, our fate is in your hands... Save those kids!" he thought.

 

 

OoC: How does he know? -_-

 

OoC: Please put what you want to know in bold.

 

IC:

 

"What the..." Zeo said when he heared the explosion sound. "Dammit, he saved me!" said Zeo again. As he was unable to move, he hoped that Ashido is well, and that Takashi or Ria can use the Dispel Jutsu. His hand was shaking, and he turned his head to Ashido. "Ashido-sama... are you well?" Zeo asked.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.


×
×
  • Create New...