JG. Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 Hi, this is my FanFic called "Shadows of Truth" [align=center]Custom made logo[/align] Character Profiles [spoiler=Character Profiles][spoiler=The Hero]Name: The Dark KnightAge: ???Gender: ???Role: HeroAppearance: No one knows for sure. All they know is that he wears a black cape and a hood.Background: It’s a mystery. He is a mysterious person in the night beating thieves in duels. He is called “The Black Knight” because of the piece of paper that the police always find on the criminal. Nothing is written on it except “The Black Knight”. Personality: Who knows? The only thing that is certain is that he fights for justice.Deck Name: Shadows of TruthDeck Theme: LIGHT and DARK monsters co-operate in a perfect comboDeck List: Monsters = 20Level 1-4 = 142x Dunames Dark Witch3x Vorse Raider1x Asura Priest1x Copycat1x Double Coston1x Exarion Universe1x Herald of Creation2x The Bistro Butcher1x The Creator Incarnate1x Vortex KongLevel 5-6 = 41x Chaos Command Magician2x Jinzo1x The Agent of Judgement – SaturnLevel 7+ = 21x The Creator1x Moonshine Dragon (Custom Card) Spells = 152x Ante2x Autonomous Action Unit2x Enchanted Arrow1x Goblin Thief1x Meteor of Destruction1x Poison of the Old Man1x Premature Burial1x The Shallow Grave2x Tribute Doll1x Card Destruction Traps = 51x Call of the Haunted1x Fire Darts2x Metal Reflect Slime1x Mirror Force Total = 40Trump Card: Dueling Level (1-100): 96 The Story [spoiler=Chapter 1]Chapter 1 It had been dark for a long time in the streets of Fornas. It was nearly midnight so it was very quiet in the alleys. Only two people were to be seen. But they were not friendly. Suddenly the man pulled out a gun, threatening the other. The woman gave the man her bag and started crying. The man just ran away but hadn’t run farther than into the street when a mysterious figure stood in his path. “Hey, move it” the thief shouted at the figure “I’ve got business to do here!” The mysterious figure just grinned. “I’m known around here as The Dark Knight” the figure said “I’m the one who takes care of thieves like you. I will give you an offer. We duel. If you win, which is very unlikely, I will let you go.” “And if I lose?” the thief asked. “Wait and see…” the dark knight replied with a grin on his face. “Oh, I forgot to mention that if you refuse my proposal then I will treat it as if you lose” “Fine, I accept your challenge” the thief said “but it’s not like I have a choice” “Before we start, I want to know what your name is” the dark knight ordered. “My name is Xavier” the thief replied. The thief looked to be in his twenties. He was wearing a red jacket with a white T-shirt underneath. He was wearing blue jeans and white shoes and woolly hat on his head. “Let’s Duel!” they both shouted. The Dark Knight: 8000Xavier: 8000 Both duelists drew 5 cards. “I will start” the dark knight told his opponent. He looked dismayed at his hand. “You are lucky this turn as I have no monsters to play” the knight said “but I will place 1 card face-down and end my turn” “My turn” Xavier shouted and drew 1 card “I activate Monster Gate! Now I can pick up cards from my deck until I pick up some thing that can be summoned.” He picked up 4 cards before he started laughing. “Hahaha, now prepare to meet the wrath of the strongest card in my deck! Come forth, Cosmo Queen!” A female monster with purple skin descended from the sky. She was wearing red robes and a massive gold crown. Cosmo QueenATK: 2900DEF: 2450 “Alright now I attack your Life Points directly” Xavier shouted “Cosmo Queen, attack with Galactic Supernova!” The monster started to glow orange and then released an immense wave of light which seemed sure to hit the Dark Knight. “Not so fast” the dark knight said quickly “I activate Metal Reflect Slime!” A grey blob of slime emerged from the card. “Now this card is a trap monster so it is now treated as a monster card.” Metal Reflect SlimeATK: 0DEF: 3000 “Cosmo Queen, stop your attack, stop it!” Xavier yelled franticly, but to no avail. “Too late” the dark knight said with a grin on his face. The shock wave hurtled towards the blob of slime and hit it with a force that shook the ground. But the slime seemed untouched. Instead it started to transform. When it was done it looked like the Cosmo Queen but in grey. Then it did the same thing. It started to glow orange before unleashing a massive shockwave which headed directly toward Xavier. He was hit with the full force of the blast. But to his astonishment he only lost 100 Life Points! Of course he knew why but how could an attack with so much power have dealt so little damage? He would probably never know. “Caught you by surprise there, eh?” the dark knight said in a mocking tone. “Shut up” was all that Xavier could manage to say. The Dark Knight: 8000Xavier: 7900 “Suppose it’s my turn then” the dark knight commented for no particular reason. He drew 1 card “I activate Card Destruction! Now both duelists must send their entire hand to the graveyard and draw the same number of cards from their deck.” He said in an all knowing tone. “Perfect. Now I activate Premature Burial and revive my trump card! Moonshine Dragon, guardian of light and darkness, I summon you! The moon started to glow fiercely and then down came a black dragon with blue wings and shining dust behind it. Moonshine DragonATK: 3200DEF: 2400 “Looks like we both have our strongest card on the field now” the dark knight said. “Now, Moonshine Dragon, attack his Cosmo Queen with Fullmoon Blast!” he shouted. The dragon started to shine white before letting loose a blast which hit the Cosmo Queen which shattered into a million pieces. “Not too good for you, eh” the dark knight taunted. “But before I end my turn I will place 2 cards face-down. Your turn.” Xavier drew 1 card. “Crap” he mumbled so quietly that nobody could hear it. “I have no cards to play so i will have to end my turn.” The Dark Knight: 8000Xavier: 7600 “Is it already my turn again?” the dark knight said mockingly. “Oh well” he said and drew a card. “I summon Herald of Creation in attack position!” Herald of CreationATK: 1800DEF: 600 A figure in golden robes with a staff shaped like the crescent moon appeared. “Then I attack your Life Points with both of my monsters. Moonshine Dragon, Herald of Creation, attack him directly!” he shouted. Both monsters hit Xavier with the full force of their attacks. He crumpled in pain even though the monsters were nothing but holograms. “M-my turn” Xavier stammered “I place 1 card in face-down defence position and end my turn” He was obviously very scared as he didn’t like to think about what would happen if he lost. He suspected the worst. And it wasn’t being arrested and going to jail. The Dark Knight: 8000Xavier: 3600 “Let’s end this” the dark knight said as he drew his card. “I summon Vortex Kong in attack mode!” Vortex KongATK: 1800DEF: 1000 A huge orange ape appeared with a static aura surrounding it. “Now, Herald of Creation, attack his face-down card!" The card flipped and was revealed to be a Kuriboh. It was pulverized in an instant. “Now I’ll finish you! Moonshine Dragon and Vortex Kong, attack his Life Points Directly!” the dark knight shouted. The two monsters unleashed their attacks and Xavier was knocked to the ground in defeat. The Dark Knight: 8000Xavier: 0 “I win” the dark knight said “Now prepare to meet your fate!” A thin beam of light shot out of his finger, hitting Xavier right in the chest. He was knocked back several meters. And there he lay. Motionless. Xavier opened his eyes. It was the break of dawn so he had been lying there for several hours. He couldn’t move but he was alive. He was alive. He was thankful that The Dark Knight had showed mercy and let him escape with his life. He would probably be lying there until the police came to arrest him. But at least he was alive. End of Chapter 1 What do you think of it so far? Feel free to coment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the alpha Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 It's good,but i've seen a fanfic like this beforeabout a duelist who is fighting crime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 You are thinking of Kales "Edge of Justice". I'm almost 100% sure. I know it looks a bit like Kales but it is only the start. When we get deeper into the story it will be very different... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 ---bump--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 The BadIt seems much too similar to Edge of Justice... Sorry, but I can't say that this is an original idea. And what's up with the Duelist Kingdom Style duels? Aren't tributes needed The GoodNice, Clean Layout. Duel is easy to follow. Good length. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 The BadIt seems much too similar to Edge of Justice... Sorry' date=' but I can't say that this is an original idea. And what's up with the Duelist Kingdom Style duels? Aren't tributes needed [b']The Good[/b]Nice, Clean Layout. Duel is easy to follow. Good length. What do you mean with duelist kingdom layout? They just used spell cards to summon their strongest monsters. And it is only the beggining that looks like Edge of Justice. Later on it will be very different. But thanks for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 The BadIt seems much too similar to Edge of Justice... Sorry' date=' but I can't say that this is an original idea. And what's up with the Duelist Kingdom Style duels? Aren't tributes needed [b']The Good[/b]Nice, Clean Layout. Duel is easy to follow. Good length. What do you mean with duelist kingdom layout? They just used spell cards to summon their strongest monsters. And it is only the beggining that looks like Edge of Justice. Later on it will be very different. But thanks for the comments! Oh ok, it was just a bit unclear in the Cosmo Queen part. Anyway, good start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Thanks again! I hope you will read the next chapters when i post them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 ---bump--- Extra note: Chapter 2 will be up by this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 A great fan fic! Now, here: it does look like EOJ by Kale. But the difference is, nobody knows The Dark Knight, and Kal is very known. Also, I like your layout. I had no problem reading this fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 Thank you very much! You're the first person to notice that one main difference! I've just checked in on your FanFic aswell and it looks to be really interesting! If you want me to make you a fancy banner (like mine) just pm me and i'll make you 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 ---bump for 1 last time--- And chapter 2 will NOT be up by this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 The next mod who reads this please lock. And anyone else who reads this dont post a comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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