RAWMansonBoy Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Also, if your gonna say you get a + rep for critique and don't, some people are gonna neg you. Not me though...iIm nice. Overall good story and writing. Maybe some punctuation errors, great improvement from the first chapter. 8.8 outta 10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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