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Otaku-sama Newbie

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Some of the pics aren't that good. OCG is lacking a long with your actual grammar. They would be good, but you need to practice. Try going on the YuGiOh wiki to study the OCG.

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BTW there is a difference between noob and newb. Newb is a newcomer. Noob is an experienced player who should know better but is still newb. Change it.

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Batman: More correct Card Grammar would be: "While you control this face-up card, monsters more than 5 Stars cannot declare an attack or change Battle Position."

 

Captain America: Hmmm.... maybe "When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster, if that monster is the only other monster on the field, destroy that monster by this card's effect without applying damage calculation."

 

Green Goblin: I think it sounds better reversed: "If there is a Fusion Monster on the field, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly."

 

Joker: "When this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, negate the monster's effect." Hmmm... that still doesn't sound right... but it's better.

 

Penguin: "FLIP: Your opponent must reveal 1 random card in his/her hand."

 

Punisher: You want to make this an effect monster. "When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. While this card is on the field, the selected monster cannot declare an attack."

 

Riddler: "FLIP: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card."

 

Spiderman: "Send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon an Insect-Type monster from [insert here hand, Deck, Graveyard, or what you mean.]"

 

Superman: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Trap Card in your Deck. Show it to your opponent, and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled."

 

Codename: V: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls...." I'm not sure how to say the rest with OCG. The way you have it doesn't sound quite right, but I can't think of anything better.

 

Anyway, overall, just watch out for capitalization errors, and make sure to be specific with your effects. Give credit to where you got the card pictures. I'm not really impressed with their effects. I don't see what their super-powers have to do with the effects you gave them. Not too bad though, they are somewhat creative, and not over-powered.

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ParagonX

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Batman: More correct Card Grammar would be: "While you control this face-up card' date=' monsters more than 5 Stars cannot declare an attack or change Battle Position."

 

Captain America: Hmmm.... maybe "When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster, if that monster is the only other monster on the field, destroy that monster by this card's effect without applying damage calculation."

 

Green Goblin: I think it sounds better reversed: "If there is a Fusion Monster on the field, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly."

 

Joker: "When this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, negate the monster's effect." Hmmm... that still doesn't sound right... but it's better.

 

Penguin: "FLIP: Your opponent must reveal 1 random card in his/her hand."

 

Punisher: You want to make this an effect monster. "When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. While this card is on the field, the selected monster cannot declare an attack."

 

Riddler: "FLIP: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card."

 

Spiderman: "Send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon an Insect-Type monster from [insert here hand, Deck, Graveyard, or what you mean.']"

 

Superman: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Trap Card in your Deck. Show it to your opponent, and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled."

 

Codename: V: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls...." I'm not sure how to say the rest with OCG. The way you have it doesn't sound quite right, but I can't think of anything better.

 

Anyway, overall, just watch out for capitalization errors, and make sure to be specific with your effects. Give credit to where you got the card pictures. I'm not really impressed with their effects. I don't see what their super-powers have to do with the effects you gave them. Not too bad though, they are somewhat creative, and not over-powered.

Thanks for the advice man.

I am getting sick and tired of everyone saying "OCG errors made it horrible" or "Your OCG is bad, go look it up in wikipedia for the correct grammar". I dont care if its not Original Card Grammar! And I dont have the time to study all my yugioh cards like a nerd. But still... you can give me some advice to make it better, and not bit*ch about my cards.

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~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~ Newbie

~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~

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I must say, i have seen loads better. they aren't all that good, and some the ATKs are too low. All should be warriors, and some the pics could bebetter as well (i'm talking to your Penguin.) Also, you made Punisher a Normal with an effect, so change it.

 

I am a complete comic-nerd and these kinds of cards tend to get under my skin. yours aren't the worst i've seen, but still iritate me a bit. I am not "b*tching" about your cards or the OCG, just offering critiscm to make them better (BTW: the OCG does need to be fixed on a few). If you don't want my help, go ahead and ignore me. Just don't yell at us for helping you...

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Batman: More correct Card Grammar would be: "While you control this face-up card' date=' monsters more than 5 Stars cannot declare an attack or change Battle Position."

 

Captain America: Hmmm.... maybe "When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster, if that monster is the only other monster on the field, destroy that monster by this card's effect without applying damage calculation."

 

Green Goblin: I think it sounds better reversed: "If there is a Fusion Monster on the field, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly."

 

Joker: "When this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, negate the monster's effect." Hmmm... that still doesn't sound right... but it's better.

 

Penguin: "FLIP: Your opponent must reveal 1 random card in his/her hand."

 

Punisher: You want to make this an effect monster. "When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. While this card is on the field, the selected monster cannot declare an attack."

 

Riddler: "FLIP: Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card."

 

Spiderman: "Send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon an Insect-Type monster from [insert here hand, Deck, Graveyard, or what you mean.']"

 

Superman: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Trap Card in your Deck. Show it to your opponent, and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled."

 

Codename: V: "When this card is Summoned, select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls...." I'm not sure how to say the rest with OCG. The way you have it doesn't sound quite right, but I can't think of anything better.

 

Anyway, overall, just watch out for capitalization errors, and make sure to be specific with your effects. Give credit to where you got the card pictures. I'm not really impressed with their effects. I don't see what their super-powers have to do with the effects you gave them. Not too bad though, they are somewhat creative, and not over-powered.

Thanks for the advice man.

I am getting sick and tired of everyone saying "OCG errors made it horrible" or "Your OCG is bad, go look it up in wikipedia for the correct grammar". I dont care if its not Original Card Grammar! And I dont have the time to study all my yugioh cards like a nerd. But still... you can give me some advice to make it better, and not bit*ch about my cards.

YOU know what get over it boon. You make us people sick.

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ParagonX

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I must say' date=' i have seen loads better. they aren't all that good, and some the ATKs are too low. All should be warriors, and some the pics could bebetter as well (i'm talking to your Penguin.) Also, you made Punisher a Normal with an effect, so change it.

 

I am a complete comic-nerd and these kinds of cards tend to get under my skin. yours aren't the worst i've seen, but still iritate me a bit. I am not "b*tching" about your cards or the OCG, just offering critiscm to make them better (BTW: the OCG does need to be fixed on a few). If you don't want my help, go ahead and ignore me. Just don't yell at us for helping you...

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I realized the Punisher problem already. Anyd for the whole OCG speech. It was mainly to sonic_zach lol. that guy is a pain in the a**

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I must say' date=' i have seen loads better. they aren't all that good, and some the ATKs are too low. All should be warriors, and some the pics could bebetter as well (i'm talking to your Penguin.) Also, you made Punisher a Normal with an effect, so change it.

 

I am a complete comic-nerd and these kinds of cards tend to get under my skin. yours aren't the worst i've seen, but still iritate me a bit. I am not "b*tching" about your cards or the OCG, just offering critiscm to make them better (BTW: the OCG does need to be fixed on a few). If you don't want my help, go ahead and ignore me. Just don't yell at us for helping you...

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I realized the Punisher problem already. Anyd for the whole OCG speech. It was mainly to sonic_zach lol. that guy is a pain in the a**

Thats right man keep talkin

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ParagonX

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I must say' date=' i have seen loads better. they aren't all that good, and some the ATKs are too low. All should be warriors, and some the pics could bebetter as well (i'm talking to your Penguin.) Also, you made Punisher a Normal with an effect, so change it.

 

I am a complete comic-nerd and these kinds of cards tend to get under my skin. yours aren't the worst i've seen, but still iritate me a bit. I am not "b*tching" about your cards or the OCG, just offering critiscm to make them better (BTW: the OCG does need to be fixed on a few). If you don't want my help, go ahead and ignore me. Just don't yell at us for helping you...

[/quote']

 

I realized the Punisher problem already. Anyd for the whole OCG speech. It was mainly to sonic_zach lol. that guy is a pain in the a**

Thats right man keep talkin

Ok dude. Im sorry if I did anything to you. Just stop annoying me about my cards. Truce?

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