TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 in halo in my oppinon the marines own so these are based on the marines Disclamer: the caracters are property of microsoft pics are mine i will make more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 The ODST team should be a normal card due to it having flavour text instead of an effect. The flavour text for all of them could use some work. Same with the effects. I could help you with these cards, they have potential. Unfortunately, the way you made them doesn't appeal to the veteran YCMers. I'm telling you as a friend, you must improve on your general grammar if you're planning to make any cards worth posting. I will await your extreme anger. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Your OCG is terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 ok thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 These cards fail in ocg. Since im not aloud to say EPIC fail/10 because one guy almost negative reped me because i keep saying it to noobs who make terrible cards *COUGH* (COPORAL). 3/10. NO VANNILAS, and no SUBTYPES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 ya well i will make them better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 new cards,i know ppl hate normal cards so i made more effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Ur OCG is still lacking (and why havent you put master cheif? :lol: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 cuz the marines pwn but ok i will put master cheif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 You're OCG isn't that bad, you just need to find REAL grammar errors. Your pictures are pretty good, but they're all on the same level. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 allright ill make master cheif as 8* and jhonson as 7* and mabey some relly weak guys like 1-2* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 Try using Warrior as the type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 OCG needs work. Fake types are bad. Effects are basic. 3/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted September 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 kk thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardAce Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 Don't use fake types, work on your grammar and OCG. Circulation should be something like "Limited Edition" or something, so instead of basing cards off Circulation, base it off names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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