Arekku_Koro Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 The Yin Yang pokemon, KingKang is modeled off of a koi fish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Its good for first try.But looks kinda wierd. It flys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Lol, I realised how odd it looked, and redid it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 it looks too simple,and pokemons are supposed to be facing you with it's head slightly tilted to the left or right,and it seems to me you have 2 different light sources for the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Well I have to say that both have problems. The first one need black borders, the second one needs less. Your borders also need a lot of work in shape. Some areas look too skinny, others too thick. The outline isn't smooth at all. As far as shading goes, screwed up and very simple. You mostly only used two shades. Within a few parts the shade seems way off. This is because you used two different ones, but they are practically the same color. If they are meant to be the same, then they should be the same. If they are meant to be different, then they need a lot more contrast, and shouldn't both be a lines worth each. As stated before, the angle isn't exactly right. Also with the second one, I don't like how you separated the tails, I preferred it when they were conjoined. Now that they are separated it doesn't seem right. Being separated, couldn't they just slither away from each other. Also if they are separate, they themselves would be like a double battle. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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