eagleflies14 Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 sorry if this is in the wrong spot, but these aren't realistic and clearly never going to happen, but... here's what i came up with: when this card is played, both players discard their hands and all cards on the feild (excluding this card). the atk and def of this card is determined by the amount of cards sent to the graveyard X 1,000. this monster can not attack unless you have less cards in your deck than your oponent. i know some are totally random, but let me know so i can figure out how to improve and eventually win some contests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Um... Your trying, I can give you that, but you have a long ways to go. The first step you should take is DEFINITELY trying to improve your overall grammar itself. Capitalization and commas and stuff. Only then can we help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugi645 Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 I like the images, but first, you have to fix your descriptions. Deadly Sunset: Your opponent takes damage equal to the total ATK of your opponent's monsters.Mountain View: Activate this card when opponent plays Snowy Destruction. Negate the effect and destroy the card. I'm gonna work on the rest later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 I like the images' date=' but first, you have to fix your descriptions. Deadly Sunset: Your opponent takes damage equal to the total ATK of your opponent's monsters.Mountain View: Activate this card when opponent plays Snowy Destruction. Negate the effect and destroy the card. I'm gonna work on the rest later.[/quote'] That should be more like: Mountain View: This card can only be activated when your opponent activates "Snowy Destruction". Negate the effect and destroy the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagleflies14 Posted October 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 I like the images' date=' but first, you have to fix your descriptions. Deadly Sunset: Your opponent takes damage equal to the total ATK of your opponent's monsters.Mountain View: Activate this card when opponent plays Snowy Destruction. Negate the effect and destroy the card. I'm gonna work on the rest later.[/quote'] That should be more like: Mountain View: This card can only be activated when your opponent activates "Snowy Destruction". Negate the effect and destroy the card. thank you all so much. i'll get those fixed and try to even out my effects a little more as well. EDIT: i have 1 more i just made, i would like an opinion on it:it's kinda random though, sorry if it's not an improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darknessmans Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 epic fail/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Failure to capitalize card titles properly is instant failure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 i like the effects but the picyures are not the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dollahsign81 Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Please... don't use the pictures that windows comes with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagleflies14 Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Please... don't use the pictures that windows comes with. yes, some are, but some are also off of other websites. i thought i could make them work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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