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My new Mewthree | Not a splice


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Pretty cool man..

 

I'm sure that jappio will kill it soon though LOL...

 

I wouldn't say I like to "kill" things. I like to be a nice person by telling people how they can improve.

 

Well I would have to agree with what SSJ3Goku said. Mew and Mewtwo have significant differences. Your sprite here though looks like Mewtwo + some armor.

 

With the glow on the left hand (our left) there seems to be a pixel missing. The eyes doesn't look right either, too light, and that one square of white throws it off too.

 

On the left foot, I don't like the claws. There shading could be better too, since they should probably be brighter, at least brighter than the other foot (notice how Mewtwo's feet are brighter on the left than the right, claws should be the same too).

 

Borders in general need some work. Like one the horns and tail. Where lines look like they should be straight, they aren't, and where they look like they should be curved, they aren't. Pixels seems to be in random places just sticking out too.

 

Finally the neck piece looks like is isn't facing the same way as Mewtwo, it looks more like it is facing towards us. It should have more of an angled look.

 

7/10, its a neat edit, but needs a good deal of polish and something to make it new and different, not just Mewtwo 2.5

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