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Scratch Sprite - Mawtress

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Please don't use DA stuff without the artist's permission. If you didin't ask then we will get into trouble.

 

Since when is using a base for practice wrong? o.0...

He even stated where he got the idea, unlikely that he will get in trouble.

 

Anyway, great Sprite ^_^

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Well having Fakemon that are better than mine isn't that hard, my skills in spriting aren't that good. Also my base drawings aren't always the best, Unown Metallic used a really nice picture to base his off of.

 

Well I first have to sat that it needs work with shading. The light source doesn't usually come from the fright, ususally from the left. There is no shading on the mouth thing behind it. Also you never use black lines except on the back. Those black lines can add a lot of depth and makes your sprite look a lot better. The two mouths also has shading that disagrees with the light source, its lighter on the left side than the right side. Your shades in general also don't change enough. It's hard to tell where its light and where its dark.

 

You also have problems with lines, like on the legs and arms. The two mouths on the back doesn't look like two mouths. The lines around them are bad, and it doesn't look right. Looking at the original picture, it should be possible.

 

I can't think of anything else to bring up, the lines and shading need work, if you attend to those issues, then I might be able to figure what else needs work.

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That looks so much like the picture. Its amazing. Cant believe im saying this' date=' but I think its better than Japio's fakemon.

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Thanks for the comment ^_^

 

Holy Crap' date=' dude.

 

Awesome!!! I awesome your using it in Shadows of Orichalchos? Cus you should.

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It's "Shards of the Orichalcos" and no,

If the original artist gives me their consent, then maybe.

But I doubt it, because it seems he's useing it for another game ._.

 

Please don't use DA stuff without the artist's permission. If you didin't ask then we will get into trouble.

 

Since when is using a base for practice wrong? o.0...

He even stated where he got the idea' date=' unlikely that he will get in trouble.

 

Anyway, great Sprite ^_^

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Thanks Icy =)

 

Awesome scratch sprite 10/10 use it in shards of orichalcos.

 

Can't' date=' at least not yet

 

Well having Fakemon that are better than mine isn't that hard, my skills in spriting aren't that good. Also my base drawings aren't always the best, Unown Metallic used a really nice picture to base his off of.

 

Well I first have to sat that it needs work with shading. The light source doesn't usually come from the fright, ususally from the left. There is no shading on the mouth thing behind it. Also you never use black lines except on the back. Those black lines can add a lot of depth and makes your sprite look a lot better. The two mouths also has shading that disagrees with the light source, its lighter on the left side than the right side. Your shades in general also don't change enough. It's hard to tell where its light and where its dark.

 

You also have problems with lines, like on the legs and arms. The two mouths on the back doesn't look like two mouths. The lines around them are bad, and it doesn't look right. Looking at the original picture, it should be possible.

 

I can't think of anything else to bring up, the lines and shading need work, if you attend to those issues, then I might be able to figure what else needs work.

 

Thanks, I knew I messed up on the shading,

as that is where I mess up the most.

 

When I get home from school,

I'll be sure to edit it, as much I can to perfect it ^_^

 

^^^

 

God has spoken' date=' thou shall obey quietly...

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I was once god ._." (Sad Faec)

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