Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 i thought it looked like a velociraptor and a scyther. Please dont say stuff like ocg errors and overpower ok. just a card for fun and a card of my favorite dinosaur. A small but deadly predator from the Cretaceous period. Its small body ment it could run at very high speeds, hence the "Veloci" in its name. Velociraptor was a pack hunter, it was very social and very intellegent. Velociraptor and other Raptors were once the most intellegent dinosaurs ever found, but then they found Troodon. The Velociraptor is also a big thing in movies, such as "Jurassic Park" and documentarys. Its science name is Velociraptor mongoliensis, because it was found in the Gobi Desert of Mongolia. you can also post about my sciency descryption for Velociraptor!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 That Fusion would be good with a colored pic. And good OCG..7/10 Last one has HORRIBLE effect though,OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corporal Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 The first two cards are good. the last one totally sucks and isn't even "fun". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted September 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 The first two cards are good. the last one totally sucks and isn't even "fun". i wish you people woould just try to have a little fun with making cards. i mean, its not like these cards are going to be freaking on TV!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monqiue01 Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 kinda understand where you are coming fromfind a better pic or a coloured pic of scytheraptor6.5/10 change the last effect of the last card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Card 1: Good but add an effect! Spire's Rating: 5/10. (until you add an effect to it) Card 2: The best card there but the effect is too simple and basic. Spire's Rating: 7.1/10. Card 3: Overpowered. Come on! 9999 ATK and DEF?!?! Spire's Rating: 0.4/10. Spire's Overall Rating: 6.4/10. (Because you made them for fun) But you could at least make them realistic. And of corse I like Jaurassic Park. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Seriously, lower the ATK and DEF on that last card >.> It's pathetic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 1st one's got quite a long description.2nd one's alright3rd one - >.> <.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 Sweet idea but overpowered... I love how you researched the Velociraptor, that made me smile (screw 1-2 sentences, a paragraph is the best :)) Scyther is underpowered, make it 2700 ATK and 1800 DEF. I love the last card, awesome idea, but I believe that you should change it to the following: 8 Stars3000 ATK2300 DEFReptile-type Effect:Scyther+Velociraptor (Fusion Summoning effect, blah, blah, blah). By paying 600 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent direct with 1900 ATK. this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. ^ Something like that... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 First two are good, but the third is bad because it`s wayyy overpowered. I suggest reducing the ATK and DEF to maybe 3000 and / or 2800. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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