gogoboy001 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 /oaubs0.jpg[/img]nypic.com/30931b8.jpg[/img]. This is my first deck i hope you like it! Gogoboy001. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 you need some lower level monsters to summon the bigger monsters still cool cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyenn Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Ummm...First of all your is scary...Monsters that have effects don't have flavor texts. Also your effects are ridiculously overpowered...And if a monsters has two types you write that in the effect like so: This card also counts as a Thunder. Not in the type text like you did (Dragon / Thunder / Effect) Also Yugioh has Spellcaster instead of Wizard...Also Yugioh has 20 base types and you should only make news if they don't fit in any other...Also for such a things as Elf and Dwarf you should use archetypes or maybe sub-types but only if you make more of them any and they have something that bonds them (tcg wise so effects or special support cards)All over you should redo the whole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Did you know that theres already a water dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 THAT IS THE PIC I USED FOR HARRY POTTER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gogoboy001 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 you need some lower level monsters to summon the bigger monsters still cool cards Thanks but do you know if i can add cards to decks i've completed? gogoboy001 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mahado Kusanagi Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Well what have to say?1. Most of the cards are to overpowered.2. 3000ATK/2500DEF and only a 6 Star Monster?3. The effects are ridiculous. On effect monsters, you shouldnt tell a story like in "Ice Dragon". That "beam and freezing it imediatly", that isnt important how the monster attacks (by effect monsters), important is only what effect the monster have like "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponents monster cant attack" (an example to substitute the "Beam and freezing it imediatly"). But thats overpowered. 4. The pictures are good, but most of them are to realistic for duel monster cards like "Harry Potter" or "Legolas". Well thats my own opinion. 5. Wizard is wizard, dont metter if male or female. Thats not important for the monster card iself. By the way, the poeple can indentificate the monster card by the appearence of it. For example, everyone indentificates "Dark Magician" as a male and "Mystical Elf" as a female, is no need to write "Spellcaster/Male" or "Spellcaster/Female" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gogoboy001 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 You are a focker it's my first bloody deck i can do what i want so pis off!Well what have to say?1. Most of the cards are to overpowered.2. 3000ATK/2500DEF and only a 6 Star Monster?3. The effects are ridiculous. On effect monsters' date=' you shouldnt tell a story like in "Ice Dragon". That "beam and freezing it imediatly", that isnt important how the monster attacks (by effect monsters), important is only what effect the monster have like "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponents monster cant attack" (an example to substitute the "Beam and freezing it imediatly"). But thats overpowered. 4. The pictures are good, but most of them are to realistic for duel monster cards like "Harry Potter" or "Legolas". Well thats my own opinion. 5. Wizard is wizard, dont metter if male or female. Thats not important for the monster card iself. By the way, the poeple can indentificate the monster card by the appearence of it. For example, everyone indentificates "Dark Magician" as a male and "Mystical Elf" as a female, is no need to write "Spellcaster/Male" or "Spellcaster/Female"[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Most pictures are bad for a card, plus most are overpowered. And the descriptions of cards are not realistic, but it is a first deck and i think it is the right section so well done. ;) First Deck 8/10Real Rating 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 overpowered. don't put a story with the effect.bad cards 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted September 23, 2008 Report Share Posted September 23, 2008 These needs some help. OCG is awful. Images could be better. Balance issues. Keep trying. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gogoboy001 Posted September 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 /oaubs0.jpg[/img]nypic.com/30931b8.jpg[/img]. This is my first deck i hope you like it! Gogoboy001.Everyone who say my cards suck it makes feel hurt shall i just quit next time say good things or just don't comment i'm out. Gogoboy001. ps email your replys to [email protected] (for this message). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Give all yellows an effect then redo them all: 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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