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.:「Unown」 Metallic:. = Splice Count: [22] / Accepting Any And All Splice Requests


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I guess I should also start a collection of my splices / sprites like Jappio has,

so now I will start my Splice Count Indicator, and My Splice Library. Please

comment on my splice's and DO NOT rate. Thanks.

 

~Splice Requests~

I am free to take any requests from anyone ^_^

So if you want me to splice, please post here or PM me =D

 

Splice Count: [22]

*A*

Aerozard , Alarokip

 

*B*

Branchaur

 

*C*

Charmander (Inferno)

 

*D*

Dark Mewoxys , Dequazew Two , Dohgeokin

 

*G*

Giragizard

 

*M*

Mawtress

Megapert , Metadon , Metasuar , Mew (Regiggigas Disguise) , Mudkip's (Inferno)

 

*P*

Porcipine

 

*R*

Rattata Recolor , Realitor , Regicmew , Rhydon (Fossilized)

 

*S*

Salizadon

 

*T*

Trowizard , Tentory

 

*V*

Venustoise

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Now there are 22 ^_^

 

Dude' date='

they're links.

Links fail.

 

Post score: 0/10

Splice Score:20/10

Total 10/10

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Well, linkies worked better (imo)

And thanks ^_^

 

When you get more' date=' I mean a lot more, this will be EPIC!

 

You are by far, one of the BEST splicers on the site.

 

Great work!

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Thank you Sbamber, well 22 is getting there =)

 

Dude' date=' these are amazing =D

 

plus Realitor = Epic Win

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To think, realitor was one of my first splice's lol

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I'm only going to critique a couple, since it would get tiring to do too much.

 

Alarokip is pretty cool. The knee on the right has some weird border issues, too light of a border. Also it's cool you found a weird way to use Mudkip's tails like that, but that's all you have from Mudkip. There could be a little more Mudkip, I would think maybe using Mudkips cheeks to add cool spikes to the bones, or maybe just put them on the cheeks of the skull. I think maybe also you could change the stomach to the bone color, and then the groin area to the tan. It might look better, but that's more of a suggestion than a critique.

 

Giragizard is interesting, and I think I commented on it before. I think though last time it had different wings or no wings. I think last time too I mentioned out I think it shouldn't have any wings, something that big can't fly. A few other points, try to make the color and textures of the arm rings and bracelets match the rings around the neck, legs, and head. The ones on the head, legs, and neck are golden and metallic, and the ones aren't so much. Also arm textures seem off from the body texture too. In fact, I don't think you recolored them the same at all.

 

Mew disguise has one problem I see all too often that I'm surprised a experience splicer like yourself made. You left some of Mew's old dark purple border. Other than that, I would work with the left bracelet. Also the don't on the tail seems really odd. The feet should be fully green, not have little white ends. Dots on the head piece don't seem right, neither does the head piece itself. Perhaps also adding a stripe or two on it, also a few on the tail to spice it up.

 

Tentory I like it, yet dislike it all in one. The head seems too big first off. Secondly you have a blue border left behind. The head's border/edge seems not right, try smoothing it out more, same goes for the back. Also I don't fully like how the head is on the neck, it doesn't look like its in the right position.

 

Metasaur Is Ok, and an interesting idea. Its hard to say what it's suppose to be though. I don't like how the two hand things are blended together. The fact that it's a mix of both a grass texture on those leaves, scales on the feet, and metal for the head and the rest, I don't like it. Too many conflicting textures that it doesn't quite work. I also see some little bit of red where the bulb use to be. My only guess one what this creature is or could do is one of those things that shoot missiles (the claws are the missiles).

 

Well that's all I'm going to critique. I hope this is of help for you.

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