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[align=center]Meh, I was bored.

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For Haunters bottom, look at the D/P sprite....-.-

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I was disapointed with his right (Our left) leg's shading[/align]

 

[align=center][spoiler= ]~~Requests~~

I will take Requests for Revamps & Devamps, as long as they meet the following requierments

~~Both~~

You must provide me with your sprite, and please DON'T PM IT TO ME, OR YOU WILL NOT HAVE YOUR ORDER FILLED!

 

The sprite must be made by you or Nintendo, not a DeviantARTest, unless you have permission and something to prove that he gave you permission besides the owner saying so.

 

If while your showing my sprite (and giving me credit) it turns out that you stole the sprite, and the owner busts you for showing off his edited sprite, I am in no way responable, as stated above, it must be YOUR SPRITE!

 

Sprite MUST be saved as PNG

 

~~Re-vamps~~

The sprite must be R/B/G/Y or G/S/C styled

The sprite will automaticly be re-vamped to D/P/Pt status

 

~~De-vamps~~

The sprite must be R/S/E, FR/LG or D/P/Pt Styled

It will automaticly be de-vamped to Yellow status, but if you ask, all change it to R/B/G or G/S/C

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I don't think she was in G/S/C. Plus I perfer Working with yellow sprites, as the outlines are AAed to the max and makes it more hard. look

 

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Also, I can't log into my Aim account at the moment, as my pass is in the memory of my other laptop, which is having the keyboard repaired -.- perhaps wine around the computer is a no-no

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Misdreavus was introduce in G/S.

 

I have to say these are good Revamps. The few problems I have with them is like on Haunter, the border on the bottom of it seems too light. Some of the borders on things like Haunter seems too dark. Other than those small things though, these are pretty good revamps.

 

8/10

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Who are you & what have you done with Jappio...You usualy give harsh ratings.

 

Also, I have updated, adding Mewtwo. And I'm taking Requests. Where it says The sprites can't be Nintendos, I Xed that out.

 

EDIT: I added an updated vision of Mewtwo, mainly edited around the eyes.

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Well, after looking the most current sprite for Haunter, I can see why you did what you did. I don't know if I agree with it, but I guess that shading is due to Haunter's texture. Yet I've found a few different errors. Haunter's shades should have ragged ends, you had fairly round and smooth ends to your different shades. I also can't fully tell where you light source is. I want to say it is right infront of it, but normally a light source would be more to the left, so I would maybe think of doing that with yours. I still stand by to what I said before about Gengar, that it has too many black borders, drop a few of those to dark purple. I also now see that you tried adding another shade to Ghastly's smoke, I would make more of it if I were you, although at the same time it isn't bad as it is. Haunters mother also doesn't seem right, it doesn't look like it goes in right. I think this is due to the fact that it doesn't agree with your light source.

 

Well there you go, sorry for the wishy washy critique before, my endurance was running out, I did like 5 other critiques already. I suppose that is no excuse, and I apologize and hope that this new critique helps you better. I still agree though that they are good revamps.

 

As for Mewtwo I will critique the newer one, good catch on the eye there. I know you're aware of it, but the right leg does have some bad shading. I understand this is just a revamp, and usualy with revamps it's just a reworking of the shades, but sometimes it might be good to fix up some error, like you did with the eye. I bring this up because I find Mewtwo's tale there to be kind of ugly, along with it's right hand. Also on its head cord, there is some weird highlight on the back of it, since the light source is infront of Mewtwoo, the shade probably shouldn't be like that. Shading on the elft foot could be better also. The tow on the toe is dark, but with the light source set up, I think there should be some lighter shade in a few pixels, if not the hole thing.

 

I'd give Mewtwo a 7/10.

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Well' date=' after looking the most current sprite for Haunter, I can see why you did what you did. I don't know if I agree with it, but I guess that shading is due to Haunter's texture. Yet I've found a few different errors. Haunter's shades should have ragged ends, you had fairly round and smooth ends to your different shades. I also can't fully tell where you light source is. I want to say it is right infront of it, but normally a light source would be more to the left, so I would maybe think of doing that with yours. I still stand by to what I said before about Gengar, that it has too many black borders, drop a few of those to dark purple. I also now see that you tried adding another shade to Ghastly's smoke, I would make more of it if I were you, although at the same time it isn't bad as it is. Haunters mother also doesn't seem right, it doesn't look like it goes in right. I think this is due to the fact that it doesn't agree with your light source.

 

Well there you go, sorry for the wishy washy critique before, my endurance was running out, I did like 5 other critiques already. I suppose that is no excuse, and I apologize and hope that this new critique helps you better. I still agree though that they are good revamps.

 

As for Mewtwo I will critique the newer one, good catch on the eye there. I know you're aware of it, but the right leg does have some bad shading. I understand this is just a revamp, and usualy with revamps it's just a reworking of the shades, but sometimes it might be good to fix up some error, like you did with the eye. I bring this up because I find Mewtwo's tale there to be kind of ugly, along with it's right hand. Also on its head cord, [b']there is some weird highlight on the back of it[/b]

 

Hmm, I never noticed I put those there. As for the Tale & Arm Coments, it's a rare event for me to edit the outlines. But hey, at least I didn't recolor theold sprite with new colors, leaving the shading the the same:)

 

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