♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: Not like that. Just a brother sister bond. Nothing sick like that. The way you said it didn't sound like it... >.>.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: Really this isn't like that hack anime. Where this guy has an extreme crush on his sister. Plus that is the first thing you refer to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: Really this isn't like that hack anime. Where this guy has an extreme crush on his sister. Plus that is the first thing you refer to? Pretty much... Anyways, let's keep on topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Zeo still walked to the gates. He didn't know why, but he needed to get there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Suteibu was walking through Konoha towards the main gate with a slowly burning piece of paper in his hand; his hand was underneath his poncho so the smoke was rising from the collar of the poncho, and the smoke was partially fogging his head. Suteibu eventually reached the gate, "Hey Suteibu, where you off to?" asked one of the guards at the gate. Suteibu glanced over towards him "Got a solo mission, and the Hokage wants me to deal with it ASAP" Suteibu replied as he slowly walked past, not stopping and continued out of the village. The village guard just smiled and waved him off "Good Luck Suteibu!" he shouted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Sasuke, your not really good with grammar, are you...? And if you paid attention, Suteibu already left the village. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Anyways... *Farther and farther Ria went. Determined and completely tired, Ria still fights on to get to Konoha, where she may find something or someone who is not entirely boring.* Ria: ALMOST THERE!!!Rin: We're only halfway there.Ria: Shut up. I thought you just said you weren't pessimistic.Rin: Okay, fine. We're "almost there."Ria: Pfft... That was so enthusiastic. Anyways, be more helpful. Guess how long it will take me to get to Konoha.Rin: Judging by your speed and the distance left, it will take you an hour, maybe two, at most.Ria: Good. Let's keep it that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 In the distance a cloaked figure stood still on a massive boulder, all dressed in dark cloak with red clouds, red interior with a chin-high collar that was slightly zipped down to his neck. His hat remained on, as the blue hair of the Akatsuki member pretty much remained hidden, the man who was supposed to become a member of the Seven mist swordsman scanned the forest below slowly from where he stood. and soon enough, the careful eyes of the Akatsuki member saw and observed a girl with blue hair, dashing her way towards the Hidden Leaf. his Akatsuki cloak created a brilliant show of the red clouds flapping in every direction possible as the wind became rather violent. Soon enough, Renzo ignored the girl and jumped off toward the ground, aiming to land in a clearing as he held his straw hat from falling. as he landed near a small creak, he stood up slowly looking up afterward to check his surroundings. it had been a long day, he had rested for a while from walking miles and miles today and was getting closer to his destination - the Hidden Leaf Village. Renzo set off, making his way toward the Hidden Leaf immediately where he would attempt to find some clue or information of his mission he was assigned. OOC: That's my character's intro. god, I hate writing long. -.-'And don't say "Its not that long" or something similar. its still long to me. >.>*Is lazy as of this moment* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 [spoiler=Just to piss you off:]It's not that long. Anyways... *Almost near Konoha, the Great Gates are in plain view. Ria smiles, and dashes towards the closed gate. She stops in front of it.* Ria: How do you suggest we get in?Rin: Um, have you tried knocking? Don't bother breaking in, because I recall that the great ninja who lived here had sealed it with some special Jutsu.Ria: Knocking won't work.Rin: Haven't you ever read it in books? It's always the most obvious stuff that work out.Ria: Ok, fine. I'll knock just to shut you up.Rin: Meh. *Ria knocks on the huge gates. Almost instantly, the gates open up.* Rin: What did I tell you?Ria: Lucky guess. *Inside, there are two ninja on the left, sitting inside a stall. Genma: HALT!! Who goes there? Ria: Crap. What should I say?Rin: Um.. Maybe a name, to start?Ria: You give the most simple advice ever. *Ria looks at Genma* Um, hello there. My name's Ria, and I'm from the Hidden Village of Sorrow.Genma: The Hidden Village of Sorrow? Never heard of it. Do you have a permit to enter?Ria: Ah, well, um, I kind of came here on my own.Genma: Sorry, without a permit, I cannot allow you to pass. Please leave.Ria: No, but you see, I CAN'T go back, not now, at least.Genma: Why not?Ria: Well, because, um, there's a fight there, and, um, I don't want to be part of it, so I kind of ran away. Sort of.Genma: Uh, right. Well, seeing as you won't leave willingly, I'll let the Hokage deal with you.Ria: YES!! I mean, sure, whatever suits you.Genma: Huh, okay. Come with me. Don't pull anything fishy now.Ria: I won't. I won't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 kuroji sat on a tree looking for something to torture, when he saw the village hidden in the leaves, he had nothing better to do so he started on his plans. "I wonder what there is to torture today... maybe there is a genin in the deep forest that will enjoy a little sparring... and dying," he then started walking, and developed the rest of his plans... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ria: Are we there yet?Genma: No.Ria: Are we there yet?Genma: No.Ria: Are we there yet?Genma: NO!Ria: Now?Genma: No.Ria: How about now?Genma: I said, NO.Ria: How far IS this stupid place?Genma: It's not that far. Be patient.Ria: Pfft, fine. *While walking with Genma, Ria can't help but notice Ichiraku Ramen.* Ria: Hey! Isn't that the famous ramen store I keep hearing about?Genma: Sorry, you cannot go there until you see the Hokage. *Ria ignore Genma, and dashes into the stall.* Genma: HEY!! Ria: Hiya sir, can I have a bowl of your famous ramen?Teuchi: Why, certainly! Your not from around here, are you? *Teuchi starts to prepare some ramen.*Ria: Nope! Hey, where's that girl that works here?Teuchi: Ayame? Oh, she's married now. No longer works here with me. Can't say I haven't thought of closing this stall and retiring, myself.Ria: YOU CAN'T RETIRE!!! This is the BEST ramen store in the world!Teuchi: Yeah, 20 years ago. Now, nobody goes here anymore.Ria: What? Why not?Teuchi: Ever since Naruto became Hokage and stopped buying from me, less and less people have been coming here. *Genma comes in.* Genma: You! Get back out here.Ria: No! I paid for the ramen, I'm going to eat it before I leave.Genma: Tsk. Fine. Eat your ramen, THEN come out. I'll wait outside, so no funny stuff.Ria: Certainly, handsome ninja guy.Genma: Whatever. I'll give you 30 minutes. *Ria starts to eat her ramen.* Ria: THIS IS DELICIOUS!!!! WOW!!! I've never had anything this good in my town before.Teuchi: Oh? And what town is that?Ria: The stupid poor old town called the Hidden Village of Sorrow. I left there, and I feel good I did.Teuchi: Do many people eat ramen there?Ria: Well no, because there aren't many ramen shops IN there. I'm pretty sure tons of people are dying to eat some, though.Teuchi: Really?? Okay, I guess I'll migrate there then.Ria: WHAT?! NO! Don't! That place is terrible! Go anywhere BUT there!Teuchi: What place could be worse than here? I don't even get business anymore, and Ayame's left me. I might as well think about MY future.Ria: But, but..Teuchi: I'm sorry, but I've made my decision. I'm going to go find that Hidden Sorrow place of yours, and start my business there.Ria: How would you find it if I don't tell you where it is?Teuchi: I'll find my way. I'll just think of the trip as a nice long walk through the park.Ria: Man, now what am I going to do?Teuchi: Your going to eat this last bowl of ramen, and leave, as if you never came here.Ria: Pfft... That is so melodramatic. How will I ever get a taste of your ramen again?Teuchi: You go find me, whenever you like.Ria: Well, okay. But that doesn't mean I didn't try to stop you.Teuchi: Alright. Now go along, he's probably waiting for you.Ria: Pfft, I don't even want to go with him. He's just forcing me to. Heck, I could disappear and run away, if I wanted to.Teuchi: Well, that's up to you. Now really, go along. I got things to do.Ria: Alright then. Bye, awesome ramen maker guy.Teuchi: See you some other time. *Back outside, Genma looks at Ria with a unsatisfied face.* Genma: What TOOK you that long?Ria: I was eating the most awesome ramen in the world! That's what.Genma: Yeah, well, that time's over. Now let's go to the Hokage.Ria: Yeah, well, I don't like how your this slow. I'll go to him myself. *Ria uses a Water Teleportation technique, and disappears through the ground.* Genma: Oh crap. This is bad. I better sound the alarm. *Genma fires a flare into the sky.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Hyoma sees the flare out of his window. He opens the window and jumps out towads the flare. Just when h left Shizuku came in. "Where did he go to?" She looks outside and sees the remainder of the flare. Hyoma appears next to Genma. "Hey what's up Genma?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Crap. We need someone to fake a Genma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: You were doing so well at it. Not so much Teuchi but great with Genma. Also NARUTO WOULD NEVER STOP EATING AT ICHIRAKU!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a fact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: You were doing so well at it. Not so much Teuchi but great with Genma. Also NARUTO WOULD NEVER STOP EATING AT ICHIRAKU!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a fact. Yeah, but it's 20 years later. He's probably so busy at being a Hokage, that he won't have time for ramen. Besides, I said he's retiring, so you could think he's probably super old now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: 30 years. I know he's old. He was old. I'm suprised he wouldn't be dead and his daughter and her husband owned the place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: 30 years. I know he's old. He was old. I'm suprised he wouldn't be dead and his daughter and her husband owned the place. Yeah, I just said she moved away =P. Anyways, fine, I'll be Genma, but in a moment, because I have to do a small quick errand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Ooc: Okay whatever you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 *Hyoma appears in front of Genma.* Genma: Quick! Sound the alarm! An intruder has made it into the village!! She is young, roughly 16 years of age, with blue hair and knows Water Ninjutsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 "Cool your horses. She might not even be a threat. Now what was she already doing?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Genma: Let's see. First, she came into the village without a permit, second, she ran straight into Teuchi's for a bowl of ramen, then she said something about not wanting to wait for me to get to the Hokage and immediately did some unknown Water Jutsu, and disappeared through the ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 "Hmm from the analysis you gave me she's going to the hokage's office to check in and she's from the land of sorrow. I'm suprised you couldn't figure that out. Well I'm off." Hyoma dashes towards the hokage's office. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Genma: I didn't even tell you where she's from... And you already know where she's from... WHAT ELSE DON'T I KNOW?!?!?! Gah! *Genma sighs, and heads back towards his station.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Suteibu was walking in a field calmly, now well away from the Leaf Village. With each step it was strange that he wasn't disturbing any of the flora beneath his feet, as if he wasn't treading on them at all. Suddenly as he took a step and the ground beneath his foot crumbled away, forcing his leg to fall into a leg-shaped (duh) hole in the ground. A shadow suddenly loomed over Suteibu as he quickly pulled is leg out of the ground and swung around, performing a roundhouse kick onto a large, muscular man standing behind him; the guy was clearly nearly 7ft tall, his biceps muscles were about as large as Suteibu's head and had a tattoo of the Akatsuki cloud on his shoulder, so was clearly aligned with them and the man carried a gold and red twin-pointed spear on his back which was about as large as he was. The man grabbed Suteibu's leg tightly and flung him away, yet Suteibu roceverd in midair and landed on his feet softly. "AH-HA!!!" he shouted boisterously "Your the little punk who betrayed him? Pathetic!!!" he asked sharply and just as boisterously as he stood, staring Suteibu down (eventhough from about 15ft away). "Who are you? and what do you want anyway?" Suteibu asked calmly as he quickly performed handsigns under his poncho. "Ha, my name is Keiji Maeda" the large man shouted as he grabbed his large weapon "And I'm here to kill you!" he shouted in a more serious tone and charged at Suteibu. Suteibu stopped making handsigns and pushed his left hand into a gauntlet on his belt (behind his back), then as Keiji swung his blade Suteibu pushed his left hand forward to block the giant spear; he pushed the claw part of he weapon into the pole, and trapped the spear between 2 of the claws. Then (seemlessly) Suteibu spun around the pole of the spear and raised his hand to his lips and launched a large Fireball at Keiji... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Ria: See? I told you that was the best way to get away from him.Rin: You have a the whole town hunting you down now.Ria: Well, as soon as I see the Hokage, that'll probably change. *Ria knocks on the door of the Hokage's office.* Naruto: Who is it? Come in! *Ria enters. She sees Naruto, in his long cape that resembles the same one that the 3rd Hokage used to wear.* Naruto: Who the hell are you?Ria: Oh, I'm Ria, from the Hidden Village of Sorrow. Pleased to meet you.Naruto: Are you the one who's creating all the problems outside?Ria: Um... Maybe...?Naruto: Well pleased to meet you! My name's Naruto, and I think this is the start of a nice relationship. Ria (talking to Rin): Is this guy messed up or something?Rin: Maybe. Ria: Um, so, Naruto.. Does that mean I can stay?Naruto: Yeah, sure. I'll have a room prepared for you somewhere.Ria: That'll be great.Naruto: Now run along, I got things to do. Just HOW am I going to deal with this problem, now? *Ria exits the room.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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