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*Ria is passing through the Forest of Sorrow, and is looking around the place for anything worth looking at.*

 

Ria: Man this place sucks. Everything's BORRRINNNNGGGGG.. I wonder why the stupid forest is also named after Sorrow. Go figure. Isn't ANYTHING going to happen?

Rin (Conscience): Why don't you just go back now? While you still can?

Ria: NO. Shut up. I am NOT going back to that stupid village.

Rin (Conscience): Suit yourself.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Ooc: Yeah I should probaly stop.

 

*Meanwhile in the hidden leaf village.*

 

There was a young man in a tree. He wasn't hidden all he was doing was relaxing in it. This young man's name was Hyoma. Hyoma Zeros. He was a member of a very well known clan. The thing is was that the Zeros clan wasn't famous until he was born. The reason was because he wasn't any normal chunin. He was born with the dragon mark. You're probaly thinking so big deal but it is. This teenage boy grants a powerful kenkai genkai that can only be granted to one child every 100 years. But the thing is his destiny is about to begin. So is many other ninja's. Five members of the Zeros clan walk up to Hyoma. They are all very angry with him. One of them starts speaking. This man is Hyoma's father. "You ungrateful son! You are late for daily training." Hyoma just looks at him. "Hmmm. Oh yeah I forgot." The next person to speak was Hyoma's teacher. "Just for this you get double your work." Hyoma was slightly annoyed. "Oh come on I train constantly can't I have one day off?" Everybody was clearly annoyed an weren't in the mood. So his dad grabs him by the ear and pulls him out of the tree. "Now you get moving! NOW!!!!" Hyoma started heading in the direction of the practice court. "Fine I guess."

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*Still strolling down the Forest of Sorrow, Ria soon grows extremely bored. The Sun, if still visible, appears to be setting.*

 

Ria: OMG, wow... I've been walking for like, the whole day now. Is there ANYTHING different, besides trees?

Rin: Not really. Your still only halfway through. It's getting dark. I suggest you find some place to rest.

Ria: No duh! What else do you think I'm looking for?

Rin: Your not looking for anything. I'm your mind, remember?

Ria: Oh, right. Hmm.

 

*Ria continues her walk through the endless forest.*

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Well it's been hours of pure training and it's obvious Hyoma is exhausted. "Wow you weren't kidding when you said double training." Because Hyoma is such a big deal to the Zeros clan he has three people monitor his training. The teacher starts to speak up. "Well we mean it when we say double training. Well you can go now Hyoma. i will see you tommorrow." The thing is though that Hyoma is such a big deal but he is pampered like the rest of his family. He has a nice room, gets good food, but he barely ever gets to hang out with friends. When it's not training it's missions.

[StevenBray]

Suteibu was sitting on the roof of a large wealthy-family's house; he was looking up at the starry sky and the bright moon with a small yet noticeable smile on his face. *Man... I do love the sky at night, it's always reminds of you... my love* he thought gleefully as his smile grew and he closed his eyes. He then stood and began walking around the corner on the roof as guards began to come into the area. He lived outside the majority of the time but did have a home, but due to his Nature Dedication to become a Pure Elemental Ninja, he began to tune himself to Nature to enhance his power however he does go home every now and then. He jumped off the roof and sat in the shadow of a tree in a huge garden area; he gathered some wood together and then used his chakra to set light to the wood to start a fire for warmth...

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*After more hours of walking, Ria is totally exhausted. She falls flat down on the ground, beside a tree.*

 

Ria: I can't walk anymore. I can't take it anymore. I can't do anything anymore.

Rin: Well, that's your fault in the first place.

Ria: Yeah, well, the teacher was REALLY bad. I can't take him anymore. I need a REAL teacher.

Rin: I understand, but that doesn't mean you should just wander out of the town. Who knows what lurks outside?

Ria: Hey, I know Jutsu and stuff too. I'm not completely weak.

Rin: That doesn't mean you should underestimate the world, either.

Ria: Shut up. I'll find my way out of stuff. I always do. Say, how far is it to the Fire Country anyway? Where that legend guy was?

Rin: Naruto? He's in the Fire Country. That's about four days to the west. I doubt he'll even talk to you though, because he's the Hokage now.

Ria: Yeah, well, I'm not looking for him. I just want to get into his village and find something NOT boring to do there.

Rin: *sigh* Are you always like this?

Ria: Yes.

 

*Ria and her conscience continue to talk. The sky is getting darker by the minute, and crickets are starting to make sounds in the forest. Nothing much is happening.*

 

[spoiler=Offtopic again:]I'm going to sleep now. Good night everyone.

 

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Ooc: Ok good night.

 

Hyoma reaches the door to his room when his father walks up to him. "Hyoma. Why can't you be more loike your hardworking sister?" Hyoma always hated being compared to his sister. He likerd his sister and all. She was a very kind person but he just didn't like getting compared to her or even anybody. "I am who I am. Nobody can change me and I like who I am. Frankly I couldn't care less of you and the rest of the clan's expectations." With that Hyoma's dad was speechless. Hyoma walks into his room jumps into bed and falls asleep.

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*After a long night's rest in the woods, Ria wakes up. Once again, she is in the forest, filled with trees and not really much anything else.*

 

Ria: *Yawn* Good morning.

Rin: Good morning.

Ria: Did you get sleep?

Rin: No. I don't sleep, remember?

Ria: Huh, right. Okay, let's keep going.

Rin: I suggest you run this time, so you can stop complaining on the way.

Ria: Pfft. Alright then.

 

*Ria dashes through the forest, cutting by the limitless amount of trees in a matter of seconds. It appears as though time is moving forward.*

[~The Red Crusader~]

A big house in Konoha. The house is the home of Ian Shinoda, the Shinoda Clan Leader, and his clan. His son, Zeo, is sitting in his room, reading a book. A Chunin, at last. What will happen next? He has to find out himself. He just finished his training. A hard one, though. Katana practice again. He did not love the katana so much, but he had to learn everything about it, due to his clan's traditions.

 

Zeo decided to walk out. He took his Katana, Kunais and Shurikens, put the Kunais and Shirikens in a bag, and left into the village, to find his favourite tree. He walked around, and found the beloved tree. He climbed up, and took a seat. From up there he was able to overlook the whole village.

[~The Red Crusader~]

OoC: We just started.

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its not to late to join is it?

 

No' date=' because we have already agreed to allow people to join in in the middle. Please post your character's information, and await Cloud Envy's response.

 

Anyways...[hr']

 

*Still dashing through the endless forest, a tiny vertical light appears. It seems to be the exit.*

 

Ria: THERE IT IS!!!

Rin: Don't be so sure.

Ria: Shut up. I'm sure of it.

Rin: This forest has thousands of exits. You might find the wrong one.

Ria: Well, it's the closest, so I'm going.

 

*Ria starts to dash even faster now, completely certain that that light is the exit.*

 

[spoiler=Offtopic:]Going to go to the doctor's now. Won't be back for an hour or so.

 

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....6 pages' date=' and you just started? ok.

 

i wont be able to post the info till later on today.

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No, because we were just talking about how to get more people, the whole time, and whether or not to just start or not.

[~The Red Crusader~]

Zeo decided to walk for a bit, and jumped off the tree. He walked through Konoha, aiming for the gates.

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*Ria is getting closer and closer to the light. She does not know what lies beyond the forest, but she is completely certain that it's the right way.*

 

Rin: Are you sure you don't want to take another exit?

Ria: I'm certain. Stop asking me.

Rin: Where are you even PLANNING to go to?

Ria: I don't know. Some place that has a good teacher. Like that dude Kakashi in Konoha. I heard he was really cute and strong and stuff.

Rin: He's probably 50 years old by now.

Ria: Shut up. A professional ninja like him is probably still hot now.

Rin: Sure.. Let's go with that, then.

Ria: Is that sarcasm?

 

*Still arguing, Ria is getting nearer to the light. It still seems pretty far away, though.*

[~The Red Crusader~]

Zeo was halfway to the gates, still walking. As passing down the streets, he gret the people he knew, and bypassed the ones he didn't.

[Juuzou]

Kuroji decided to take a walk, not knowing where to start in his plans, so he decided to find something to torment. "hmm... maybe there is something outside the sunagakure" so he went to the village hidden in the sand, it took him few minutes do to his quick speed and the location of his hideout. "better hide, the kage will send his best troops if he sees me..." after he found nothing interesting, he went back to his hideout to take a nap.

[Champster]

Name: Renzo Saki

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Village: Formely Kirigakure/Mist

Rank: Akatsuki

Side: (new) Villains

Jutsu: Expert of nearly all known Water & Earth techniques

[spoiler=Shape Changing Technique]

This technique will allow a person to sacrifice their body so it can take on the almost real form of another. This technique is like Edo Tensei, but it allows for a live ninja to inhabit the body of another. Also unlike Henge which is just an appearance transformation for a ninja, this technique will allow the sacrifice to play the host for a virtual copy of another ninja.

 

The other ninja will totally control the sacrifice and donate a portion of their own chakra to the sacrifice to provide it chakra. While the ninja acts in the sacrifice body, it can perform most all techniques it normally does apparently except for bloodline techniques, though even this may be a limitation of the chakra. This is because the techniques are limited to however much chakra the ninja has donated. Once the chakra runs out and the sacrifical body dies, the shape change will end and the lifeless body of the sacrifice will be revealed.

 

[spoiler=Akatsuki Astral Projection Technique]

This unnamed astral projection technique is used by Akatsuki to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. This spirit can act in conjunction with other members to do combination jutsu like the Genryuu Kyuu Fuujin. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.

 

Element: Water & Earth

Weapon(s): Basic shinobi weaponry and a one and a half meter straight katana (As seen on pic).

Bloodline:

[spoiler=Description] They were one of the few clans that survived their clan massacre of the mist several hundread years ago unlike the Kaguya clan. However it seemed as if their bloody past catched up to them as about a decade ago Renzo killed a vast majority of the clan. all members of the Saki clan that become shinobi receive a clan sword. They also have a bloodline, which manifests itself in two ways.

 

[spoiler=Blooline Ability] The first would be the Voda Takadou, which gives an advanced manipulation over water and its properties, as in weight, shape, density… The second form of their bloodline which is rare achieved is the Saka Giladi, a water body and the proud and joy of the Saki clan. All those that have achieved this were without one exception carved into the history of the Saki clan.

 

Personality:

Renzo's loyalties and personality are difficult to discern, as he is a sarcastic in numerous ways, yet polite, helpful, and humorous man. he also seems to be one of the most honorable S rank criminal if you keep his crimes in sight. Two separate examples that he has a sense of honor are seen thus far. The first is he spared the life of his younger comrades during his deflection from Kirigakure, so they could get stronger; the other is refusing to fight his old sensei because he had only one arm and therefore had a handicap. As far as people know, he doesn't seem to hurt innocent civilians or people who can't fight, thinking of them as unworthy. However he doesn’t have much patience with people who get in the way of his work, and will often attack to immobilize them just to get on with what ever he was doing. Inside Akatsuki he prefers to stay neutral, unless being asked for his involvement in matters, however it shouldn’t be confused with lack of respect. when in combat, Renzo will usually attempt to avoid it, who will always try to talk his way out of a fight, though he doesn't wish to insult opponents by refusing to fight.

 

Bio:

Born in Kirigakure inside the prestigious Saki clan Renzo gained a reputation as a prodigy in stealth killing even before becoming chunin. A fact not known to many people outside Akatsuki is that he was trained by one of the most dangerous missing nins in the world, Suneku Kiyo for several years. Exceeding all expectations he became chunin at age 11, and was took as an apprentice to a former Mist swordsman Kisho Taruni. At age 15 he would become known to the shinobi world as the second coming of Hoshigaki Kisame and Houzuki Suigetsu, as a gifted killer and exceptional shinobi for his age with the title of Jounin and future Elite shinobi of the Mist. Renzo is one of the last members of the Saki clan, a clan from Kirigakure. Its history goes back to the foundation of Kirigakure, as it was one of the founding clans. Because of their abilities Saki clan members were known as extraordinary suiton manipulators and often took up position in the Swordsmen of the Mist.

 

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Dude, Yami, no overpowering. You can't do stuff like "so he went to the village hidden in the sand, it took him few minutes do to his quick speed and the location of his hideout"

 

Please change it. My character's taking forever to even GET OUT of a forest. That's what yours should too.

 

Oh, and Champster, wait for Cloud Envy to get on, and he'll decide whether or not your in.

[Juuzou]

OOC: have you ever thought that he had quick speed AND his hideout was close???

its right there

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Ooc: Wow champster. You're accepted. But Sasuke you don't have a pic this is 30 years even after shippuden and I can see that you could be extremely overpowered.

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OOC: have you ever thought that he had quick speed AND his hideout was close???

its right there

 

Okay well' date=' that's entirely up to you. Just might not look right to Cloud Envy, if he reads it. Just giving a helpful suggestion.[hr']

 

Anyways...

 

*Ria is finally at the end of the forest. The glow disappears, and Ria appears to be on the top of a cliff, looking down at several villages and towns. Even farther forward, she sees Konoha. The Hokage Mountain really sticks out.*

 

Ria: THERE IT IS!!!! See? I told you that I was right.

Rin: You still need to go through all those towns though.

Ria: SO?? At least I got the right path.

Rin: Only by a long shot.

Ria: WHY are you ALWAYS so pessimistic?

Rin: I'm not pessimistic. I just think precaution is more important than courage.

Ria: Pfft. I wish you weren't part of me sometimes.

Rin: Yeah, well, that's not my fault. Anyways, let's get going, while you still have a chance.

Ria: What do you mean?

Rin: Well, the Akatsuki are still on the loose, and when they find out your a Jinchuuriki, they'll hunt you next.

Ria: I'm not a Jinchuuriki... Who gave you that idea? Say, didn't the Akatsuki die already?

Rin: Well, you might not be, but I am pretty much close enough to one. And who gave you that idea? The Akatsuki can be formed by anyone, anytime. It doesn't necessarily MEAN that they have to be Akatsuki, they could be some other evil group filled with powerful enemies.

Ria: Why would they hunt me? Nobody knows about you yet.

Rin: That's true, but you should still be careful. It may spill out some time. If you think about it, your records of your birth are still in the village, hidden in the Great Castle's Library, and if any of the members went there for information, you would be their first target.

Ria: Well, let's just hope that doesn't happen then.

Rin: Sure. I'll go with that.

Ria: Anyways, let's go.

 

*Ria, thinking about what the Akatsuki would look like, jumps down the cliff and starts to dash towards Konoha.*

 

[spoiler=Offtopic:]Did the forum just die right now?

 

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

OOC: have you ever thought that he had quick speed AND his hideout was close???

its right there

 

Ooc: The hideout wouldn't be close to any village.

 

Bic:

Hyoma was just looking out the window when the door opened. His sister Shizuku came in with breakfeast. Hyoma looks at her. "Hey sis. What's for breakfast." Shizuku smiled. "Well just the normal. Eggs, toast, electra." She stopped smiling. "Hey Hyoma could could I ask you a question." Hyoma was a year older so he thought it involved boys or something. "Ummm yeah sure. What is it." His sister seemed a little embarrased which made Hyoma think it did involve boys. "Are you happy?" Hyoma was startled by the question. Hyoma gave a smile. You would think it was a real one but Shizuku always knew win it was fake. "Yes. Of course I am." Shizuku smiled. This was a fake smile but Hyoma just never knew win she had a fake smile. "I'm glad." She placed the tray on the small table in his room and she walked out. When she left there was a tear that came from her eye. Shizuku was a very caring person and Hyoma was the most important person to her. They had the biggest bond in the whole family. Hyoma sat down and ate.

[Champster]

OOC: Alright, thanks CE (Cloud Envy ;P). you should look at my other long detailed characters on my Notepad™. ;P xD

Any-hoo, I won't be able to RP for a few hours (maybe until tomorrow), so that's all. oh, just a heads up, I might edit his Age and Personality in a few hours or so. just thought I'd let ya know.

And Tetraslash, it was some kind of error. I don't know. maybe someone will enlighten us with some details on what happened earlier.

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[spoiler=Offtopic:]WOAH.... SIBLING LOVE.. NOT RIGHT... NOT RIGHT AT ALL... O_O.....

 

 

 

Anyways...

 

*Village and village Ria passed. They also seem endless, just like the forest. Although Konoha is in plain view, it doesn't seem to be getting any closer with each step.*

 

Ria (panting): Not... getting... any... closer... Seems... hopeless...

Rin: Why don't you stop, take a breath, then keep going?

Ria: Must... get... Konoha... GAH! I can't take it. *Ria stops* Okay, what do you suppose we do? It doesn't seem to be getting any closer.

Rin: Well, depth perception was never one of your best aspects. You should've known that when you looked down from the cliff, although it's close, it's far.

Ria: Okay, fine, I'll admit your right. But now what? What should I do now?

Rin: Why don't you just walk the rest of the way now?

Ria: What's the difference? I'm just going to be slower.

Rin: Well, at least you can breath.

Ria: Ha. Right. I'm not kidding. What should I do?

Rin: Why don't you stop asking me? I have no idea. Nothing's around for you to use. Just keep moving.

Ria: Pfft. Fine.

 

*Ria, once again, continues to dash towards Konoha.*

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Ooc: Not like that. Just a brother sister bond. Nothing sick like that.