Dr. 23 Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 The main character's name is Soma Yuuda, following the tradition of yugioh by having yu and jo in the main character's name. i know you think there is no jo in the name, but the kanji (chinese character) for so can be pronounced as jo. same with the others that dont seem like they dont have jo in their name. Chapter 1 “Wrong!” SMACK!! “Ugh!” “You cannot chain on Counter Traps except with other Counter Traps!” Jin Kaisei yelled. Soma, then 8 years-old, had had enough of the Dueling Disciplinary Detention Hall and its strict teachers. At the Hall, students at the Dueling Academy that “made a bad choice,” were beat senselessly for every mistake they made. Earlier that day, Soma had snuck into the Teacher’s Lounge and stole two Duel Disks. He then Dueled a 4 year-old kid named Ren Kaisei that was always bugging Soma about wanting to play him. “Duel!!” they both yelled. “Ren is going first! Draw!” Ren stated in his kiddy voice. “I Set a monster in face-down Defense Position! And den, by discarding Kuriboh from my hand, I play The Tricky (Spellcaster-Type/WIND/Level 5/ATK2000/DEF1200) in face-up attack position. Wow! The monster actually appeared! Dis is so cool! Your turn.” “Draw. I summon Red Moon Ninja (Warrior-Type/Dark/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 0). Red Moon Ninja gains 200 ATK for each card on the field and either player’s hand. Since there are three card on the field, five cards in my hand, and three cards in yours, it has 2200 ATK. Red Moon Ninja, destroy The Tricky! Blood thrust!” “Waaaaaaaaaaah!” cried Ren. Yuuda: 4000Ren: 4000-200=3800 “Before I end my turn,” Soma says, “I Set 2 cards.” “Dis isn’t over yet! I activate Double Summon to play Winged Kuriboh den release Marshmallon and Winged Kuriboh to play Yubel! And before I end my turn, I play Scape Goats! Now at my End Phase, I have to release a monster to keep Yubel on the Field so I release a Sheep Token. Your turn!” “Draw. I activate my Set card Ultimate Offering. Then, I summon Slate Warrior, now by using Ultimate Offering’s effect, I will summon Mystic Tomato by paying 500 Life Points. Soma: 4000-500=3500Ren: 3800 Then I release all three of my monsters to summon Balboros the King of Divine Beasts (it's a real card but I don't know its English name since it is only out in japan)! Since I released 3 monsters, everything on your side of the field is destroyed! Balboros, attack!” To be Continued… by the way, soma is not going to be 8 for the whole thing.Cards by me featured in this chapter: Balboros's effect:If you tribute 3 monsters to summon this card, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. You may summon this card without tributes. if you do so, this monster's attack becomes 1900. ATK 3000 DEF idk plz rate and comment!:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 It's good and I will keep reading this!Red Moon Ninja is OP, though........"make a wrong choice" LOL7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted September 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 thank you!Break out the champagne! The fan fic has a title now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Grr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted September 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 complete spam. your supposed to give me feed back not spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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