.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 It's a bit bad i know but it's my first. I want to get good at this any tips rate/hate/critique.I edited his horn a little i think it looks better do you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 You just completely removed all shading and features. Plus the colours don't work too well with the white tail (that lacks outlines). Go read a tutorial plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Try shading it makes it look a lot better ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 ah its not that good. cuz the it does not go together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 I know it's bad guys but it's my first i'll get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 i am sure you will but i we are telling you what is wrong so you can change it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 With sprites, there are multiple shades for each color. You need to change each individually. You should have made about 5 shades of right, from bright to dark. You then apply them over properly. Also be mindful of things like borders. You left behind a lot of the gray borders. They should instead be black/dark red. That's really all I have to say. I also agree the whitte tail throws it all off too, maybe make that black too. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Colors are kinda meh, and leave the shading there.But this is your first, as you will get better ^_^For now, 6.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 I change him a little his he better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPstaring07 Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 i cccant insult any absol. its my favorite pokemon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 What do you think then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 Dont erease the shading but try to find a darker or lighter colour. Like this.You see? I have changed the colours but the shading is still there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted September 20, 2008 Report Share Posted September 20, 2008 um,your not supposed to color a part of the pokemon so your example is wrong,when you recolor,you should recolor the whole thing instead of just part of it,and i don't think that you recolored it,but yeah,try improving, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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