My second splice!Better than first one!NEW ONE ADDED!

[Madsen]

My second splice, better than my first one!:

EDIT:

My new splice:

[Guest JoshIcy]

o.O Me like it :D

[Madsen]

o.O Me like it :D

 

YAY!A legendary member likes MY work!HUGZ!

[.:|Fallen|:.]

O_O cool :D:D:D:D:D

[Madsen]

Thanks Magno!

[Madsen]

BUMP.Added new one!

PLEASE COMMENT!

[Jappio]

On the first, there is some missed pixels around the ankle on the right (our right) foot. On the left, you didn't put the foot on right, could have been placed better. When you put the arm on the right on, you messed a few things up. You lost the white on the claw, and the arm blends into the leg. The arm on the left looks freakishly large too.

 

The second one I think is worse. There are some color issues in a lot of areas. The bright pink I don't think looks good in areas like on the wing. This is because that color set is a metallic one, so because you put in on Charizard, you ran into some texture problems. Also all over the place I see weird gray borders. I also believe that Groudon's presence is too lacking in it. On the moht and a few other areas also the colors don't look right. The claws also seem off with a ton of errors.

 

Well I would have to say 5/10 for you.

[Zeroshot]

Basicly what Jappio said

but one thing that is really annoying-as an almost professional splicer I know

When you copy the claw to Charizard, it was completely white so it's see through.

Really annoying but you'll figure a way around it.

[Guest Welche]

I like the second one more, it is a render

[Monkey]

what you should do when you copy the claw, make it a really bright gray color, so it looks almost white but it really isnt, these are good splices though and to me , the black lines on groudon's legs make the rest of the splices look weird... maybe like put black lines throughout the whole splice?

[amar the yugioh master]

oh this is cool

very cool

pokemon´s

[Madsen]

On the first' date=' there is some missed pixels around the ankle on the right (our right) foot. On the left, you didn't put the foot on right, could have been placed better. When you put the arm on the right on, you messed a few things up. You lost the white on the claw, and the arm blends into the leg. The arm on the left looks freakishly large too.

 

The second one I think is worse. There are some color issues in a lot of areas. The bright pink I don't think looks good in areas like on the wing. This is because that color set is a metallic one, so because you put in on Charizard, you ran into some texture problems. Also all over the place I see weird gray borders. I also believe that Groudon's presence is too lacking in it. On the moht and a few other areas also the colors don't look right. The claws also seem off with a ton of errors.

 

Well I would have to say 5/10 for you.

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Basicly what Jappio said

but one thing that is really annoying-as an almost professional splicer I know

When you copy the claw to Charizard' date=' it was completely white so it's see through.

Really annoying but you'll figure a way around it.

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what you should do when you copy the claw' date=' make it a really bright gray color, so it looks almost white but it really isnt, these are good splices though and to me , the black lines on groudon's legs make the rest of the splices look weird... maybe like put black lines throughout the whole splice?

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But they are good for a 9 year old:D

[Jappio]

Age shouldn't be a factor. I rate sprites as sprites. It does not matter the person's age, or how many things they did before, or anything like that. If I were to consider that stuff factors, or excuses, then my critique wouldn't be good. If I said, "Well your claws could have been done fine, but since you're 9, I guess it's ok." it wouldn't have the same umph, in fact you could be bound to make the same mistake, because "Since you're 9, it isn't an issue". My critique is there for how you can improve, not how to compare yourself to other 9 year olds.