[Chaotix] Booster Zone | [OPEN]

[Jovi Siagian]

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.Renders.

His renders are okay. He does better with simple and basic rendering' date='

but when it comes to the more complex rendering, he sucks.

 

.Pokemon.Cards.

The positioning of the text doesn't fit the card. Having one attack, makes it look inconsistent. Your looking for workers with good quality, he doesn't show it in his pokemon cards.

 

.Sigs.

Like he said, he just playing out sucks. it looks like

he just added a render to a BG and put bad text on it.

 

.Boosters.

The text he uses sucks. Also, the bright white outline around the Yugioh Logo is well, bad. maybe its just me, but the outline on the render hurts my eyes @_@

 

If anything, work on your quality, because it's Top Quality that we're looking for =P

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Who do you refer to?

 

A renderer' date=' can I? So, an employee. Here goes my examples.

[/quote']Your renders are pretty good. I will not reject you.

 

Yay, me! I mean, us! Thanks, tetraslash!

 

My name's Strawberry-hime.

 

Sorry, Strawberry-hime. Why don't you change your username?

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Well, I would, but I'm still debating whether or not to keep 4slash.

 

And that's offtopic. Just call me Strawberry-hime.

[Chaotix®]

Wait' date=' do I have the job?

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Right after you ocg fix this:

 

This card cannot be summon except from hand when you have 3 monsters to sacrafice. when this card summon, you can search your deck for 10 cards, and take them out of the game. the attack of this monster is the level of the ten cards out of the game by 100. when this card is attacks opponent monster within the battle, remove it from the game and destroy all magic and speel cards on your opponent's place.

 

Heheh 8)

[Jovi Siagian]

Can I try to fix that, please?

[Chaotix®]

Can I try to fix that' date=' please?

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You can if you want ..<

[Jovi Siagian]

PM-ing you the result.

[The Ruby]

J0V1, i think your renders are pretty good, need some work, but good enough for my recommendation =)

[Chaotix®]

J0V1 Got 4 Positives, so J0V1 has been accepted into the team!! Jonas's fate rests on 1 more vote though ;)

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J0V1 Got 4 Positives' date=' so J0V1 has been accepted into the team!! Jonas's fate rests on 1 more vote though ;)

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What a dramatic way to put it.

[Jovi Siagian]

Yeah, I still need practice, though. And can I get 2 positions? Because I've sent Chaotix my example of OCG fixing.

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Might want to send me the example also, because I'm pretty sure I know better OCG than he does.

[Jovi Siagian]

Okay, I've sent you the PM.

[Καsτοr]

Wait' date=' do I have the job?

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Right after you ocg fix this:

 

This card cannot be summon except from hand when you have 3 monsters to sacrafice. when this card summon, you can search your deck for 10 cards, and take them out of the game. the attack of this monster is the level of the ten cards out of the game by 100. when this card is attacks opponent monster within the battle, remove it from the game and destroy all magic and speel cards on your opponent's place.

 

Heheh 8)

 

Ok, here we go, this is tough:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Advance Summoned from your hand by Releasing 3 monsters you control. When this card is Summoned, search your Deck for 10 cards and remove them from play. The ATK of this card equals the combined Levels of all cards removed from play x100. When this card attacks, remove it from and destroy all Spell Cards your oppenent controls.

 

Thats it, I think. Best I can do. . .

 

bolded is cleaned up OCG, I know its not perfect but, hey, nothings perfect.

 

I already applied for the OCG job.

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Word of advice, might want to clean it up some more, because that's not completely correct yet.

 

^^!

[Καsτοr]

Well, I'll fix it up the best I can, nothings perfect in this world. . . *Mumbles to himself about suicide and if he should clean it up. Decides yes.*

[Skarlet]

I'll apply as a Seeker dude, I look forward to your reply

 

achivments: Defeated OMGAKITTY 1 on 1, Created the then-popular Mercenary Subtype, if this is not enough, I have nothign I can realy offer you.

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Well' date=' I'll fix it up the best I can, nothings perfect in this world. . . *Mumbles to himself about suicide and if he should clean it up. Decides yes.*

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Not expecting perfection. Expecting a very simple reply.

 

Hint: If you were very good at OCG, you'd notice a certain type of error before even reading the second sentence. If you can figure this out, you have passed, and I will recommend you.

 

You don't have to understand the hint, it only comes to certain people. Go ahead and fix it up normally if you wish.

 

I'll apply as a Seeker dude' date=' I look forward to your reply

 

achivments: Defeated OMGAKITTY 1 on 1, Created the then-popular Mercenary Subtype, if this is not enough, I have nothign I can realy offer you.

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Do you have any achievements that are actually useful?

[Καsτοr]

hmm. . . I will find it. No Matter what. I am determined to have a job *Reads OCG fix*.

 

OK, I think I found them but then again, I'm probably wrong. I tried my hardest, and gave it my all, so recommededor not I'll surely fall. *Trips* "Ow. . ."

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

The second I read that terrible request (no offence Kiwi-kun ^^"), I saw the error before even seeing the next line. That's how good I am. I'm not expecting you to see it either, so just try your best. It's practise ^^!

 

Don't actually FIX the OCG Error, but instead, think in terms of logical and grammatical sense. That might help.

[Καsτοr]

Hey, I think I might see it in grammatical terms. I even made a rhyme before I saw your post, so now, I think before I say anything, remember not to boast.

 

EDIT:

Its odd, I don't see a thing.

I read it over and over, but nothing went *Ping*.

 

I read it grammatically, and OCGaly.

I see nothing wrong, you see.

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Lol, sorry. Just helping you not get rejected by Kiwi-kun ^^"..

 

He only wants REALLY good quality, anyways... If he didn't really care too much about OCG fixes, you would've been in by now.

[Καsτοr]

darn.

 

Oh, well. I know I would fall and die.

So now I'll roll up into a ball and cry.

 

I thought I could, but I thought wrong.

So know I'll pack my bags and ring a doorbell, *Ding, Dong*!

 

Wow, I'm good at rhymes,

But I just have no more time.

I'll leave the Booster Zone,

And burn to the bone.

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Singing a weirdly rhythmic song and trying to appeal to me doesn't really help >.>...

 

Here.. How about this... Solve this one, it's slightly easier than Kiwi-kun's:

 

This card can be fusion summon from extra deck without fusion monsters. This counts as a special summon. If so, this card is remove from play at the end of opponent turn. While this card is on the field, no spells or traps can be used. The controller of this card pays 500 LP each turn. It he cannot, this card is returned to the extra deck and cannot be special summoned anymore.

 

And yes, Jovi, you can try too.

[Καsτοr]

Here I go:

 

This card can be Fusion Summoned from your Extra Deck without Fusion material monsters. It is treated as a Special Summon. If this card is Special Summoned this way, remove it from play during your opponents End Phase. While this card is face- up on the field, Spell and Trap Cards cannot be activated. The controller of this card pays 500 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases. If they don't, send this card to the Extra Deck. (Last Peice is hard. I have to think a bit. . .)

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

Pretty good. How much I'd love to tell you to fix it up some more, but then I'd just be plain greedy. Feel free to change it on your own will though. You have until probably tomorrow, and then I'll talk to Kiwi-kun.

 

If you guys were wondering, here was the proper way to fix Kiwi-kun's somewhat difficult problem:

 

What I meant by error in the first sentence, was that there were double meanings. You need to choose between either of them. Therefore, you can either write it like this:

 

This card can only be Summoned or Set from your hand by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field.

 

Or, because Kiwi-kun wasn't clear enough, it could have been like this:

 

This card can only be Summoned or Set from your hand when you have exactly 3 monsters on your side of the field.

 

Then the rest would go like this, with lots of undecided choices of wording, because it was very unclear:

 

When this card is Summoned, you can remove from play 10 cards from your Deck. The ATK of this monster is equal to the combined Levels of the monsters removed from play by this card's effect x 100. [When this monster attacks/When this monster is attacked], remove from play your opponent's monster [before/after] [the Damage Step/Damage Calculation] and destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Hope you guys learned something.