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  1. 1. Do you like this Fan Fic?

    • Man! I just LOVE this Fan Fic!
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    • This is pretty good!
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    • Its good.
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    • Its bad.
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    • I don't really like this.
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    • This Fan Fic SUCKS!!!!
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SHORTEST AND MOST POINTLESS CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why do you have to write such meaningless lines? Why not try writing criticism that is at least a little constructive, like "The chapter was a bit too short and seemed like filler. I suggest making longer chapters with a duel in every chapter," or something like that? I'm sure it would work a lot better than the all capital message with about 38 exclamation points that you wrote.

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SHORTEST AND MOST POINTLESS CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why do you have to write such meaningless lines? Why not try writing criticism that is at least a little constructive' date=' like "The chapter was a bit too short and seemed like filler. I suggest making longer chapters with a duel in every chapter," or something like that? I'm sure it would work a lot better than the all capital message with about 38 exclamation points that you wrote.

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you counted O.o

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Hey' date=' don't worry! dEMONIa and Mystery guest, AB72 is a major spammer who just loves to say

 

my fan fic sucks. JUST because his fic is terrible, he says mine is, too.

 

AB72's Fan Fic:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-70970-page-1.html?highlight=Duels+for+jewels

 

Read all of the comments that he got.

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i know, i saw him at chapter three, my previous name was Yami_Moto

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Hey' date=' don't worry! dEMONIa and Mystery guest, AB72 is a major spammer who just loves to say

 

my fan fic sucks. JUST because his fic is terrible, he says mine is, too.

 

AB72's Fan Fic:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-70970-page-1.html?highlight=Duels+for+jewels

 

Read all of the comments that he got.

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Actually after reading the chapters, I don't think your fic is bad. Your dueling is quite well done.

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