~The Red Crusader~ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 I'm working' date=' I'm working![/quote'] Hurry up! We are hungry :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. 23 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 great but what was this supposed to mean? "Marvin analyzed Marvin and the situation." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Whoops! I meant to put "Mark analyzed Marvin and the situation". Good eye, Dr. 23!It has been changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Chapter 3 posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Okay.................................4/10 because mark never seems to lose and you do know when somebody talks it is a new paragraph ................. dot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Okay.................................4/10 because mark never seems to lose and you do know when somebody talks it is a new paragraph ................. dot.ugghhhh......you're such a spammer...........Mark's the main character! Take Jaden for example. He only lost like, twice!RATE THE FAN FIC, NOT HOW I START A PARAGRAPH!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 jaden loses to-axel-zane(twice)-aster phoenix-yugiand i think thats all so he lost 5 times..........thats still alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 jaden loses to-axel-zane(twice)-aster phoenix-yugiand i think thats all so he lost 5 times..........thats still alotstill, during the ENTIRE yugioh GX!Eventually, he will lose. Did Jaden lose his first 3 duels? I don't think so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Yes he lost his 3rd duel to zane so pwned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 You asked me a series of questions and comments, AB72. I will answer them. Q. the duel was messed up.A. How?Q. xavier????? thats more pointless then jose or loushcieA. unlike "loushcie", it is a real name.Q. half of the cards they activated didn't have names.A. Name some.Q. why dark worlds and not lightsworns.A. A shadowy figure using Lightsworns? I don't think so.Q. mark cheatedA. How?Q. half the cards that xavier attacked with weren't even summoned.A. Really. Name some.Q. this reminded me of season 4 or 5 were the seal of orichalcos.A. Huh?Q. why would he just tell mark his name.A. So I don't have to call him " the cloaked figure" all the time.Q. how does that make the duel easierA. He was ragging on him.Q. aren't they so possed to be at a childrens trading card game school not regular school.A. In Chap. 1 the teacher says, "Open your Duel Guides"Q. why would he lay in bed and think about the duel he won if he won.A. He was mainly thinking about Serene, and not much about the duel.Q. i'm pourpesely not captilazing amd adding ?A. What?Q. why would he stay at school till dusk.A. To study.Q. wouldn't the teacher tell him to leave.A. No, say he was studying in the library. That good enough? Please restate the questions I put "What?", "How?", "Huh?", or "Name some." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 But he wasn't in library. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 How was the duel messed up.Why was it so short.Name some of the cards that xavier did not summon.Lots of darkworlds.How did mark cheat.U can't set cards face up,they could in the anime but since serene has a sacred beast i don't think so.I don't know like that one were xavier discard two darkworlds and lots of others.U know where the biker dudes and Mi wanted to get souls for the lavathin.that was just something random. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vamki Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Okay,i ill make a fair judge.To AB72:It is his fan fic.So if he refuse to change,dont force him to.Thus,this is only the beginner he can lose later.To Crystal Beast:Chapter 2,Marzin's first turn.He cant summon directly the Lava Battleswamp. 8/10.Clear and good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Okay' date='i ill make a fair judge.To AB72:It is his fan fic.So if he refuse to change,dont force him to.Thus,this is only the beginner he can lose later.To Crystal Beast:Chapter 2,Marzin's first turn.He cant summon directly the Lava Battleswamp. 8/10.Clear and good.[/quote']he actually uses double summon and sacrifices kuriboh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Oh yeah crystal beast 123 i forgot jaden loses to kaiba also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 No new chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I actually takes time to type and think about what I'm about to write, and I'm not on YCM 24-7, either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I'm not either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AB72 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Hurry up i posted mine already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Hurry up i posted mine already.Okay, Its the end of the line. If you post ONE, MORE, TIME, on my thread, I will neg rep you x3. You may post ONCE every time I post a chapter, and thats it.better not post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted November 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 Someone OTHER than AB72, comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Hey dude, just so you know, Lava Battleguard gets pumped up for every Swamp Battleguard you control and Swamp Battleguard gets pumped up for every Lava Battleguard you control. Lava doesn't pump up lava, nor does Swamp pump up Swamp. Look up the cards you want to use in your fan fic on yugioh wikia to be sure of their effects. Other than your effect error, this fan fic is incredible. I suggest giving the "Almighty One" a DARK deck if he is evil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning112 Posted November 28, 2008 Report Share Posted November 28, 2008 nice story and don't give me a point just being supportive though its true its a good story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Thanks Everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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