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My First Real Splices


Alexander²

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Once again, someone not posting as .PNG. I can see how people get really annoyed with this kind of thing. Well since you have them as JPEGs or something, I won't be able to give you a good critique at all.

 

The first one I don't get what is going on. I have a good guess that it's a Claydol+Mantine mix, but I'm not sure. I kinda of get what you were trying, but I don't think it works at all, it's more like you just threw things on this one. Also I find that Mantine has too little of a presence. I'm also assuming you might just have an issue with shading, but I can't tell since it isn't a png.

 

The second one is an interesting idea, but you could have don't better with the hole the Shuckle head is coming out of. A lot of people would also dislike the fact it has two heads, Could have had more of a shuckle feel. A good splice has the two pokemon even, but you seem to have a problem with one being too prominent. Finally, I don't like those little shuckle arms.

 

Save as .PNG, work on how even the fusing is, and try to better place things.

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