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Mikaeo Newbie

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Sbamber, don't just say you hate 'em, that's discouraging and mean.

 

For the one where you inverted the colors, there is a tut in the tutorial section done by mew 101 that teaches you a better way to invert that looks better.

 

Also, always save the first time and always as .png it is a better quality then.

 

If you keep the outlines they would look much nicer.

 

I love the combination ideas for #'s 3 and 6 but they are poor quality save file.

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Jappio Newbie

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The first one is poorly exectude. There is that annoying black blotch in the middle. Your attempt to put the head on really didn't work. You have two different eye colors. The blue collar doesn't work with only those two shades. A lot of it just clashes.

 

Deoxys+Mewtwo is kind of cliched. Another point, a huge one, your Mewtwo sprite is missing it's border. You must have just copied and pasted the the sprite, which is why that happened. You should find a verion you can just copy and paste or save it and then open it in paint, one of the two.

 

The third one the feet don't work. I like the eyes, but the one on the left looks weird, probably the weird border. The tail and swirl on the head don't match the texture of the bird.

 

The fourth splice is really annoying to look at. You obviously did something wrong when recoloring. I can't reall tell what is going on other than you messed with the colors and added those wings, which look odd the way they are on.

 

The fith has border issues again. I don't like how those pink things look coming off of its arms. You did something weird to the eyes.

 

The sixth has an eye issue too. I like you're idea with the wings and feathers, but I don't like how its done. The border is broket in a few areas too, like the claws. You have some bordered a red color when they should probably be a dark blue type color.

 

Pretty good concept, but once again due to border issues, recoloring issues, and placement, it didn't turn out as great as it could have.

 

The eigth I can't tell what is going on. I had to invert it back to its original form. Things do not look good when you just straight invert them. After inverting it back, I have to say it alost works. The bonsoly tail is put on horrible though, and it all lacks and recoloring. The wings also don't make much sense.

 

The ninth is pretty ugly. The arms don't look right at all, they are on a pretty different angle than the head. The colors didn't transfer over right either.

 

This one mine just be your best, problem is though it stil has some of those border issues, and it's kind of boring too, could have maybe added a little more from sunflora.

 

Hope this critique helps you.

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